I wrote this a couple days ago. Just felt the mood hit me. It's not as descriptive as most of your pieces here, but lemme know what you think. Thanks.


"Stone Heart"

The cries you hear you don't believe
The tricks to get your mouth to scream
But voiceless calls you send forth
Silenced and tongueless

No truth to what's in evil's mind
It wants you to do it's bidding
You'll lay upon a slab of stone
And that's the end

(chorus)
Stone heart, callous to the world
Won't get you anywhere but down
Stone heart, wonder if you'll come
Up into the light and finally see

Remove the wings of the Deceiver
They cannot hurt you now
Empowered by a force
That's met with you
The bitter taste you had
Was brought by what is known
To bring the soul down to dust

(chorus)
Stone heart, callous to the world
Won't get you anywhere but down
Stone heart, wonder if you'll come
Up into the light and finally see

(break)
No luster for life
No season's change
Sunshine days not the same
Toil in winter's cold no more
With your heart of stone

Those wings you thought were perfect
Have left skeletal remains
Like a leaf disintegrated into lines
Surface bared you saw it for its own worth
Slew what was wrong
Now you know

BJH

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Not Applicatable.

i don't know, nothing strikes me either way.

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There wasn't an instant feeling of but I can relate to the song at least, it's how I feel somedays...or most...

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It's not my best by any means, but sometimes I don't trust my own judgement so I throw it here and there to see what you think. I appreciate you reading and commenting on it. Thanks.