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Old 2003-04-02, 17:03
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Christ and his lies

This is a song from a band I was in-

Christ and his lies

"Your the chosen by god
And now your the chosen one by us
It won't hurt but you'll bleed a lot
Sorry for the sins, do you care if I cuss?
Fuck you Christ,
You'll be crucified in Satanic ways!
Fuck your lies
I can't wait to see you die for the third time!

Fuck you Christ,
Your reign of bullshit has ended
We killed your light
We leave you in a pentagram burned and pinned
You have been crucified by us
A rogue death because you sinned
I'm sure your followers will stop giving you trust
I'm sure your followers will give you sex and lust

In our minds you are dead
And soon in their minds too,
When they find out the truth they'll stop giving you head
It's alright, We'll cut off your cock and feed it to you
You don't mean shit to us
I want to see you cry laying in a river of blood
Your lies are gone and done
I saw Christ in an orgy of nuns!


I saw heaven myself and it's not pretty
There's priests and nuns molesting themselves and one another
A holy Orgy with the angels and God, it's dirty
It's a sick truth you want to smuther!"
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Old 2003-04-02, 17:30
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Pretty good... not evil enough for me though.... keep it up
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Old 2003-04-02, 17:52
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i think religion is a waste of time,
but i must say, you suck.
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Old 2003-04-03, 07:50
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Just seemed like mashed together ideas with no flow. If I was offended I would make a comment on that , but it's your piece, not mine. It just seemed pretty Jr. High to me.
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Old 2003-04-03, 08:00
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i think religion is a waste of time,
but i must say, you suck.



we're too ignorant to judge religion, so yeah.
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Old 2003-04-03, 11:28
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The first two lines made it sound actually rather promising, but after that, it got entirely too predictable and unimaginative.
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Old 2003-04-04, 20:53
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im gunna have to agree with walpurgis on this one
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Old 2003-04-04, 23:21
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I saw Christ in an orgy of nuns!

That line made me laugh. I thought the first verse was okay, but then potential was quickly denied.
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Old 2003-04-05, 02:51
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yeah too much fuct up grammar... seems very unorganized... but the actual content is okay...
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Old 2003-04-06, 18:56
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It just seemed pretty Jr. High to me.


Exactly my thought too. This is worse than Deicide's stangnant and predictable lyrics.
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Old 2003-04-07, 11:08
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well, as you can tell i didn't exactly spend any time on this, I might try
to just redo it, cause it does kinda suck.
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Old 2003-04-07, 14:39
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is this even worse than mine?
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Old 2003-04-07, 14:43
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is this even worse than mine?



nah
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Old 2003-04-07, 14:46
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okay good. i was getting worried there for a second.
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Old 2003-04-07, 14:49
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just do what your sig sez, and you'll be writing kickass lyrics in no time.
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Old 2003-04-07, 14:52
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damn straight
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Old 2003-04-08, 03:40
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Its fucking gay man, you are a try hard who thinks he is bad for woshipping Satan, and you think you will make friends who like metal by preaching your idiotic ways.

Fool.
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Old 2003-04-08, 07:09
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if u play guitar stick to it i dont think ur trade is writing lyrics, u seemed to like giving christ shit but wat r u trying to prove. satanic blessings do not go to u
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Old 2003-04-08, 11:02
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warnerve92 Its fucking gay man, you are a try hard who thinks he is bad for woshipping Satan, and you think you will make friends who like metal by preaching your idiotic ways.


Go Fuck yourself! You don't know shit about me.
"...and you think you will make friends who like metal by preaching your
idiotic ways."

That is the stupidist motherfucking thing I've ever heard.
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Old 2003-04-08, 14:16
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Nah, I think warnevere has a point here, these lyrics where pretty crappy, just yelling jezus must rot and satan reigns is just pure LAME, and on the other hand it gives you crappy lyrics, like you've seen on display.

and no, you're not evil if you worship satan haha, if you think you're badass for worshipping satan, you're just a lame guy who smells like something that starts with a P and ends with oserfag.
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