This is a song from a band I was in-

Christ and his lies

"Your the chosen by god
And now your the chosen one by us
It won't hurt but you'll bleed a lot
Sorry for the sins, do you care if I cuss?
Fuck you Christ,
You'll be crucified in Satanic ways!
Fuck your lies
I can't wait to see you die for the third time!

Fuck you Christ,
Your reign of bullshit has ended
We killed your light
We leave you in a pentagram burned and pinned
You have been crucified by us
A rogue death because you sinned
I'm sure your followers will stop giving you trust
I'm sure your followers will give you sex and lust

In our minds you are dead
And soon in their minds too,
When they find out the truth they'll stop giving you head
It's alright, We'll cut off your cock and feed it to you
You don't mean shit to us
I want to see you cry laying in a river of blood
Your lies are gone and done
I saw Christ in an orgy of nuns!


I saw heaven myself and it's not pretty
There's priests and nuns molesting themselves and one another
A holy Orgy with the angels and God, it's dirty
It's a sick truth you want to smuther!"

Pretty good... not evil enough for me though.... keep it up

i think religion is a waste of time,
but i must say, you suck.

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Just seemed like mashed together ideas with no flow. If I was offended I would make a comment on that , but it's your piece, not mine. It just seemed pretty Jr. High to me.

we're too ignorant to judge religion, so yeah.

The first two lines made it sound actually rather promising, but after that, it got entirely too predictable and unimaginative.

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im gunna have to agree with walpurgis on this one

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That line made me laugh. I thought the first verse was okay, but then potential was quickly denied.

yeah too much fuct up grammar... seems very unorganized... but the actual content is okay...

Exactly my thought too. This is worse than Deicide's stangnant and predictable lyrics.

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well, as you can tell i didn't exactly spend any time on this, I might try
to just redo it, cause it does kinda suck.

is this even worse than mine?

nah

okay good. i was getting worried there for a second.

just do what your sig sez, and you'll be writing kickass lyrics in no time.

damn straight

Its fucking gay man, you are a try hard who thinks he is bad for woshipping Satan, and you think you will make friends who like metal by preaching your idiotic ways.

Fool.

if u play guitar stick to it i dont think ur trade is writing lyrics, u seemed to like giving christ shit but wat r u trying to prove. satanic blessings do not go to u

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Go Fuck yourself! You don't know shit about me.
"...and you think you will make friends who like metal by preaching your
idiotic ways."

That is the stupidist motherfucking thing I've ever heard.

Nah, I think warnevere has a point here, these lyrics where pretty crappy, just yelling jezus must rot and satan reigns is just pure LAME, and on the other hand it gives you crappy lyrics, like you've seen on display.

and no, you're not evil if you worship satan haha, if you think you're badass for worshipping satan, you're just a lame guy who smells like something that starts with a P and ends with oserfag.