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Old 2011-09-19, 14:02
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I don´t believe in love

Fool again!

Chorus:
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love anymore! Oh no!

You are looking like an angel
Want to see no signs of danger
Your beauty´s overwhelming me
Do anything what you please

You´re talking about a voice of heart
As you´re checking my credit cards
Your beauty and my trust you use
To catch me tight and abuse

PreChorus:
Another try
With the same rule
In the end
I´m just a fool…fool again!

Chorus:
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love anymore! Oh no!

As you´re touching me so softly
I don´t notice you are ready
To tear my emotions apart
And leave me before another start

PreChorus:
Another try
With the same rule
In the end
I´m just a fool…fool again!

Chorus:
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love anymore! Oh no!
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Old 2011-09-19, 16:00
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But do you believe in love after love (after love after lover after love)?!
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Old 2011-09-19, 18:08
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Only with you, Dyl'.

"And leave me before another start" just didn't seem to make sense. It fits the meter, but not a feasible part of a sentence.
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Old 2011-09-19, 18:14
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The chorus had a lot of intensity to it. The rest is a little fragmented. I think there's a typo in "No bad I realized."

And these lines don't flow well either thought-wise.
"Losing your chance still wait for your prince
Of never coming true dreams"

If you can do something with those lines it won't be a bad piece.
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Old 2011-09-19, 20:27
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But do you believe in love after love (after love after lover after love)?!
Show the man some respect :\

To be honest, from reading this work, I can feel something inside me say that I really don't think you're strong enough, no. Was this piece inspired by your first love? Because you know what they say, the first cut is the deepest (and baby I know). If it was your first love you shouldn't give up on the idea so quickly, turn the page and love again, oh yeah.

I can also tell from reading this piece that this woman isn't representative of all women, she was clearly a cunt. You should have kicked her to the curb and told her "no, I don't want no scrubs".
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Old 2011-09-20, 17:13
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The chorus had a lot of intensity to it. The rest is a little fragmented. I think there's a typo in "No bad I realized."


I mean "No wrong I realized", like "I didn´t realize something was wrong or bad"

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And these lines don't flow well either thought-wise.
"Losing your chance still wait for your prince
Of never coming true dreams"


It´s guite difficult vocal lines in these verses.

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Old 2011-09-20, 17:15
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But do you believe in love after love (after love after lover after love)?!


Of course. It was my first love so it reflects my feelings that time. It doesn´t mean I don´t believe in love forevermore
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Old 2011-09-20, 17:21
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Only with you, Dyl'.

"And leave me before another start" just didn't seem to make sense. It fits the meter, but not a feasible part of a sentence.


It means: She leaves me to get to know another girl (to start another try to get to know another girl)
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Old 2011-09-20, 17:24
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Show the man some respect :\

To be honest, from reading this work, I can feel something inside me say that I really don't think you're strong enough, no. Was this piece inspired by your first love? Because you know what they say, the first cut is the deepest (and baby I know). If it was your first love you shouldn't give up on the idea so quickly, turn the page and love again, oh yeah.

I can also tell from reading this piece that this woman isn't representative of all women, she was clearly a cunt. You should have kicked her to the curb and told her "no, I don't want no scrubs".


Of course. It was my first love so it reflects my feelings that time. It doesn´t mean I don´t believe in love forevermore

You´re right she was a cunt.
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Old 2011-09-20, 17:28
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A while in dreamland

No this feeling is rising up again
Thoughts of life meaning and frustration cause me pain
I know a way out to throw it all away
I know a place where dreams come true everyday

PreChorus:
Two fallen angels on their path
Lined with blood and fire
We are not afraid of a death
Obey just lust and desire

Met for the first time by little happenchance
You showed me a way to dreamland with your hands
Your body and your mouth a gate out of misery
We are erupting as one in exctasy

PreChorus:
We don´t really care what´s been saying
That is wrong or is right
We just listen to our instincts
True feelings burn inside

Chorus:
A while in dreamland – I have been
A while in dreamland – never seen
A while in dreamland

PreChorus:
I wish this moment could last
Forever and ever
You´re the only one you´re the best
To make me cry and shiver

Chorus:
A while in dreamland – I have been
A while in dreamland – never seen
A while in dreamland
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Old 2011-09-21, 03:58
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The enemy within

You can´t hear me
You can´t see me
You can´t touch me
But you can feel me

Without warning something´s growing
Watch out
Danger is here reasons to fear
No doubt

Pay for your sin you´re my victim
To hurt
Invisible invincible
In my world

Took my chances you´re defenceless
Prey
Getting worse no remorse
From my pain

Chorus:
The enemy within - I´m going to win
The enemy inside – eating you alive

Temptation and lust
Stronger than everything else
A new kind of pleasure
Was way out of emptines

You stepped over the line
Didn´t care of warning
Blinded by ecstacy
Didn´t see danger coming

Chorus:
The enemy within - I´m going to win
The enemy inside – eating you alive

You didn´t think about
It could be just you
After first signs
You realized the truth

Stains of damnation
On your white pale skin
Your body´s on fire
I´m going to win

Chorus:
The enemy within - I´m going to win
The enemy inside – eating you alive

Chorus:
The enemy within – closer to the end
The enemy inside - you´re going to die
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Old 2011-09-22, 05:28
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Love

Love (Intro)

Love – more pain than pleasure
Love – more tool than feeling
Love – more chain than treasure
Love – more fool who´s believing in
Love


Love

Love is an enemy
Love is the old killer
Love is not blind
Love is a cannibal…with pure sharp sight

Love is like an insect
That keeps being hungry
Hungry for friendship
Eats friendship and don´t worry…if pain strikes

PreChorus:
We thought that nothing could
Tear apart our friendship
Maybe love´s making you blind
Not to see our crumbling ship

Love is a pure feeling
Or just a tool to reign
Love brings pleasure
Love as well can bring pain…with a smiling face

Love can make you happy
If you know how to use
Love´s also a weapon
That can be abused…to destructive aims

PreChorus:
We thought that nothing could
Tear apart our friendship
Maybe love´s making you blind
Not to see our crumbling ship

Chorus:
You have been taking my friends one by one
So don´t be surprised
That I´m scared to…get you closer to my mind

Now you´re reaching out for my best friend
That I´ve ever had
So I´m fighting to…hold the same place in his head

PreChorus:
We thought that nothing could
Tear apart our friendship
Maybe love´s making you blind
Not to see our crumbling ship

Chorus:
You have been taking my friends one by one
So don´t be surprised
That I´m scared to…get you closer to my mind

Now you´re reaching out for my best friend
That I´ve ever had
So I´m losing to…hold the same place in his head
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Old 2011-09-23, 07:40
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Reasons to laugh (Reasons to hate part II.)

Somebody´s speaking
Of you brings me memories
How you´re doing
Brings a smile on my lips

Screams of your baby
A gift you brought from outland
Makes me think
If your life is in your hands

PreChorus:
Looking for
Noble father
You became
Unmarried mother

Chorus:
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh at our love
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh at your stuff

When we were dating
To surprise others you used
The biggest surprise
Has been waiting for you! Ha Ha

I was there to show
You some mistakes on your way
Maybe you´re satisfied
Not my business anyway

PreChorus:
Summary
Of this news
A saying
Of blonds is true

Chorus:
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh at our love
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh at your stuff

Tears falling
From laughing
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Old 2011-10-04, 01:06
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In a blink of an eye

Journey through the night
Your destination´s far away
Snow falls heavily
But at home you can´t stay

It´s you job your bread
That´s feeding you for so long time
Jobless you can´t be
Your family would die

PreChorus:
As you´re looking to the eyes of a death
Your hands are shaking
Like tree in a wind
This moment is taking your last breath
Now who decides
´bout your life and your end?

Your eyes hurt you much
Due to gazing through a white night
Tiredness and deep sleep
Try to overrule you tight

Driving for six hours
Death creeping around you
Stop now or who´ll die
Won´t be your family but you!

PreChorus:
As you´re looking to the eyes of a death
Your hands are shaking
Like tree in a wind
This moment is taking your last breath
Now who decides
´bout your life and your end?

Chorus:
In a blink of an eye
You can die – or survive
Just one right move – and you are saved
Just one wrong move – and you´re in grave
When deadly fate strikes
In a blink of an eye!
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Old 2011-10-05, 00:23
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Modern slavery

Take your money back
I´ve had no interest in your job
In your golden cage
You controlled me like a cop

PreChorus:
Another victim I´m not gonna be
I´ve got a strength to let it be and leave
Enough I am brave
Not to be your slave…in

Chorus:
Modern slavery – nothing less and nothing more
Modern slavery - I´m not your wh*re
Modern slavery – who you are now I see
Through instant clarity – modern slavery

Your expensive suit
Cannot cover your dirty hands
There is no such price
That could buy my clear conscience

PreChorus:
Another victim I´m not gonna be
I´ve got a strength to let it be and leave
Enough I am brave
Not to be your slave…in

Chorus:
Modern slavery – nothing less and nothing more
Modern slavery - I´m not your wh*re
Modern slavery – who you are now I see
Through instant clarity – modern slavery

What have you done to
My work I´m doing with my heart
You´ve corrupted all
Because of your f*cking charts

You as*hole!
Spartacus waits!!

PreChorus:
Another victim I´m not gonna be
I´ve got a strength to let it be and leave
Enough I am brave
Not to be your slave…in

Chorus:
Modern slavery – nothing less and nothing more
Modern slavery - I´m not your wh*re
Modern slavery – who you are now I see
Through instant clarity – modern slavery

Chorus
Modern slavery – nothing less and nothing more
Modern slavery - I´m not your wh*re
Modern slavery – who you are now I see
Through instant clarity – modern slavery

Modern slavery – nevermore
Modern slavery - ´till another wh*re!
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Old 2011-10-05, 23:18
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On the road again

On the road again
It´s been a long time of waiting
Preparation and pain

Destination´s set
We are closer now to our dreams
That are worth for all strain

PreChorus:
We roam anywhere we want
And whenever we please
Over cliffs and mountains
And sailing across the seas

Chorus:
Ride like the wind – free like eagles in the sky
Ride like the wind – all sorrows just have died
Ride like the wind – gonna make our dreams come true
Ride like the wind – follow our hearts in me and you
On the road again
Ride like the wind

No one can stop us
The road´s the only one we must obey
With wind in our hairs

Our minds are troubles
We feel as freedom takes the shape
And there´s nothing to care
If you dare
To break through the wall of routine

PreChorus:
We roam anywhere we want
And whenever we please
Over cliffs and mountains
And sailing across the seas

Chorus:
Ride like the wind – free like eagles in the sky
Ride like the wind – all sorrows just have died
Ride like the wind – gonna make our dreams come true
Ride like the wind – follow our hearts in me and you
On the road again
Ride like the wind
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Old 2011-10-06, 23:17
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Like to fly

So hollow is the entertainment you all enjoy
With untrue feelings and money-making aims
So empty is your laughing at a dull decoy
That doesn´t make you think about or speculate

PreChorus:
No brain no pain
Eat what is served and what is in
Use another brain
Just swim on in mainstream

(It´s your choice) choice you´ve made a long time ago progress slowly perish
Only acceptor of fading brainless fun
(Follow the voice) voice of majority ´cos you´re afraid of banish
Be coward but don´t critize the other ones

PreChorus:
No brain no pain
Eat what is served and what is in
Use another brain
Just swim on in mainstream

Chorus:
I like to fly higher and higher
No more disguise no belief in liars
I like to fly with my soul on fire
No more deny my tempting desire

I like to fly higher and higher
One more use of brain to feel in my head fire
I like to fly with my soul on fire
One more go astray of mainstream of liars
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Old 2011-10-08, 00:09
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Matrix

Matrix (in 7 parts)


I. Programme

Sitting in my office
The same yesterday´s today
Everything seems solid
No surprise on my way

Delivered cell phone´s ringing
Unknown voice is warning me
„Danger in your way coming
Stand up and you will see“

Three men coming
In suits and black glasses
I see them running
I am what their aim is

I have to run
Down a scaffold through window
I´m not the one
No chosen hero for the world

Why have they come?
If because of my hacking crimes
But they have come
To change all my life
And maybe all entire world!

II. The truth

Take red pill and you´re gonna know
True reality
Take blue one and you´re gonna stay
Things slave in dreams
I´ll take red!

The world around you is a programme
Your eyes used to see
But behind your nerves connections
There´s rough reality
It´s too mad!

Chorus:
Matrix – simulates
Everything you see is just a fake
Matrix – depends on you
If you want to live in fake or true

I have thought you wouldn´t believe
So now take a ride
I´ll unplug you from the Matrix
To know what´s behind
Ride on!

Chorus:
Matrix – simulates
Everything you see is just a fake
Matrix – depends on you
If you want to live in fake or true

III. Rough reality

I don´t want to believe what my eyes have to see
Under neverending steel grey sky
There are human embryos connecting to machines
To feed them with their energy
This is a real enslaved world where Matrix with its tricks
Fooling people not to realize their slavery! No!

IV. Zion

Zion – the last free city
Is waiting for its saviour and its son
The prophecy said about a man
With a miracle behaviour…you´re the chosen one!!

V. The Oracle

The Oracle:
„I am the Oracle
And I may be a clairvoyant
And I may forsee a future
I can answer your questions
That will bring other questions anyway…
I just can show you a way
But know how is in you my son“


Chorus:
Matrix – simulates
Everything you see is just a fake
Matrix – depends on you
If you want to live in fake or true

VI. Revolution

The choice is the key
The fear of all machines
No purpose no programme
Just do what I please

And I will fight
To come real feelings alive
´till all machines are gone
And see another true dawn…

…not software
so beware…machines!
War has just begun
And I am the victory´s son!

VII. A new dawn

Chorus 2:
Matrix – breaking down
Everything you see is real again
No tricks – on you depends
If you want to be a flock or man
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Old 2011-10-08, 23:46
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Nothing´s gonna stop me (On the road again II)

Weather is not perfect
Here comes the rain
I don´t care at all
I´m on the road again

It´s been a long waiting
And I left alone
But I don´t mind at all
My destination is known

PreChorus:
Wheel in my
Hands and roaring
Of housepower below
Music is loud and heavy
That´s what I love the most

Chorus:
Nothing´s gonna stop me – on my way to paradise
Nothing´s gonna stop me – from the land of delights
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where is all it should be
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where I want to be…to set me free

Problems are here to be
Beaten in a fight
The sun has shown its face
All seems to be alright

Miles and miles per hour
Up to the limit
Leaving all behind me
Forget all daily sh*t

PreChorus:
City gates
Wide opening
For me to be its quest
Music is loud and heavy
Metal never ever rest

Chorus:
Nothing´s gonna stop me – on my way to paradise
Nothing´s gonna stop me – from the land of delights
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where is all it should be
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where I want to be…to set me free

Bridge:
This is real
Vivid dream
Don´t want back
To daily schemes

Chorus:
Nothing´s gonna stop me – on my way to paradise
Nothing´s gonna stop me – from the land of delights
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where is all it should be
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where I want to be…to set me free
In land of the free
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Old 2011-10-09, 23:39
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Running scared

After attack of deadly striking force
Paralyzed with fever and headache
I´m on fire I´m looking for remorse
Ask myself „Why me for heaven´s sake?!“

I am trying to escape from my fate
I´ve realized running´s my salvation
Now I have known how to ease my pain
But question is „How long will I hold on?!“

PreChorus:
If I stop…I will cry…Run!
From pain killing me…Run! Run!
If I stop…I will die…Run!
No one will save me…Run! Run! Run!

Chorus:
Ah…I´m running scared endlessly
Scared of fuel getting dry
Ah…Ah…Happy end I´ll never see
Only way to survive

PreChorus:
If I stop…I will cry…Run!
From pain killing me…Run! Run!
If I stop…I will die…Run!
No one will save me…Run! Run! Run!

Chorus:
Ah…I´m running scared endlessly
Scared of fuel getting dry
Ah…Ah…Happy end I´ll never see
No chances to survive
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