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Old 2011-07-22, 12:51
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Melancholy

Black cloud hangs over me again
Drops of sadness are falling like rain
Coming feelings of regrets and sighs
That I have known a thousand times

Bridge:
Source of my strength to carry on
Disappearing
Like sands after lowtide
Will I be gathering on and on
Appearing
Like sands after hightide

All around is misty and blurry
No sense in what I used to worry
Everything I´ve done seems to be in vain
Pleasure of it will never more remain

Bridge:
Source of my strength to carry on
Disappearing
Like sands after lowtide
Will I be gathering on and on
Appearing
Like sands after hightide

Chorus:
Drowning in a lake of melancholy
Just head above the surface
Can´t get out all walls are slippery
My eyes looking at a white haze
Drowning in a lake of melancholy
Sands below me falling down
Shall it last eternally?
Or will my head go down? (too)

Last edited by Hugozhor : 2011-07-25 at 10:35.
 
Old 2011-07-23, 07:25
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Sweet innocence

I´m just a shadow of a child
I used to be
All beatiful inside´s been
broken by years

Everyday there was something new
To see and learn
Time after time all unknowledge
was burnt

Bridge:
When did it happen
Who is to blame
The change shattered
All my life and broke my game

I used to live in my free world
With no cares
Of the god called money that rules
Everywhere

I´ve never really thought that
My soul could bleed
That I would ever meet with
All lies and greed

Bridge:
When did it happen
Who is to blame
The change shattered
All my life and broke my game

Chorus:
I don´t wanna be
I don´t wanna be an adult since now
I don´t wanna see
I don´t wanna see the world go down

Indifference and selfishness
I had to fight
"Obey!" "Work!" "Pay!" "Die!" is life with
We all satisfied

Bridge:
When did it happen
Who is to blame
The change shattered
All my life and broke my game

Chorus:
I don´t wanna lose
I don´t wanna lose sweet innocence
I don´t wanna feel
I don´t wanna feel blood of childhood on my hands

Last edited by Hugozhor : 2011-07-27 at 08:44.
 
Old 2011-07-24, 04:44
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Living in a cave

Sitting here in your small world
You think you´ve got all
Living your life only with
Shadows on the wall

You live as they taught you
As your ancestors did
„Never look to the light!“
Or you will be hit

Bridge:
You have never dared to move
To leave your sacred ground
You are scared to know all truth
To turn your head around

Chorus:
From the cradle to the grave
You are living in a cave
Only shadows on the wall
They cannot be really all!
Hardly no one wants to know
About brighter way to go

Doubts are crying in your head
But they are weaker than
Conviction of the others
Who defeat you again

But there is undying doubt
If light burns like fire
Then fire just can warm either
And might take you higher

Bridge:
You have never dared to move
To leave your sacred ground
You are scared to know all truth
To turn your head around

Chorus:
From the cradle to the grave
You are living in a cave
Only shadows on the wall
They cannot be really all!
Hardly no one wants to know
About brighter way to go
 
Old 2011-07-24, 09:33
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I liked this, but the chorus seemed to have a couple nits.

Drowning to the lake of melancholy -"to" sounds awkward. "Drowning in a" sounds a little smoother there.
Just head above a surface - instead of "a surface" maybe "the surface." "a surface" makes me wonder surface of what?
Can´t get out all walls are slippery - okay
My eyes looking to a white haze - The "to" here seems tricky. I'm getting different interpretations of that. That can be a good thing if that's your intention.
Drowning to the lake of melancholy - See above
Sands below me falling down - okay
Shall it last eternally? - okay
Or will my head go down too? -I like this idea, but having "too" at the end seems to make it less powerful. I'm not real sure how I'd alter that line other than completely removing "too."

Take it or leave it. Just my thoughts. Enjoyed the lyric.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
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Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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Old 2011-07-24, 09:49
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I'm not being rude, but I have to ask if English is your second language. There's a few things in this and the other piece you posted that are leading me to believe that, and if it is so, I'll explain my alterations a little differently.

Good read overall. It's nice to see more lyrics on here.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2011-07-24, 09:59
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Another singable piece, but one verse threw it off for me.

But there is undying doubt
If light burns like fire -Those two lines flow well.
Then fire just can warm either - This line is where it falls off.
And might take you higher - I'm not sure if this line weakens the verse since the previous line is unclear.

Just a little to consider to polish your song.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2011-07-25, 10:40
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Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
I liked this, but the chorus seemed to have a couple nits.

Drowning to the lake of melancholy -"to" sounds awkward. "Drowning in a" sounds a little smoother there.
Just head above a surface - instead of "a surface" maybe "the surface." "a surface" makes me wonder surface of what?
Can´t get out all walls are slippery - okay
My eyes looking to a white haze - The "to" here seems tricky. I'm getting different interpretations of that. That can be a good thing if that's your intention.
Drowning to the lake of melancholy - See above
Sands below me falling down - okay
Shall it last eternally? - okay
Take it or leave it. Just my thoughts. Enjoyed the lyric.


Hi L,B'XXX

Thank you for your advices. I edited them.
You´ve got great feeling about a lyrics flow.

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Or will my head go down too? -I like this idea, but having "too" at the end seems to make it less powerful. I'm not real sure how I'd alter that line other than completely removing "too."


You´re right. I´ve got the same feeling about "too" doesn´t fit to melody.
 
Old 2011-07-25, 10:43
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
I'm not being rude, but I have to ask if English is your second language. There's a few things in this and the other piece you posted that are leading me to believe that, and if it is so, I'll explain my alterations a little differently.

Good read overall. It's nice to see more lyrics on here.


That´s ok. You´re right. English isn´t my native language. I´m from Czech republic (Europe).
 
Old 2011-07-25, 10:45
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Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Another singable piece, but one verse threw it off for me.

But there is undying doubt
If light burns like fire -Those two lines flow well.
Then fire just can warm either - This line is where it falls off.
And might take you higher - I'm not sure if this line weakens the verse since the previous line is unclear.

Just a little to consider to polish your song.


You´re right again about the line where it falls.
I can´t figure out another line. Any advice?
Thank you.
 
Old 2011-07-25, 10:48
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Questions

Is it my destiny
To suffer all the time?
Is it meant to be
Easy living is a crime?

Is it precious for me
A simple happiness?
Is it so usual
To (be) drowning in sadness?

Is it so hard for me
To reach aims day by day?
Is it the same for all
With all hurdles on their way?

Why´s someone born here
Under blue sunny sky?
Why´s a rain falling
Just on me tell me why?

Bridge:
When I feel bad
It´s in my head
Appearing pain
Dwells in my heart
A big question mark
Again and again

Chorus:
Questions
Questions – without answers
Questions
Questions – eat me like a cancer
Questions
Questions – another whys
Questions
Questions – they´ll never die

Chorus:
Questions
Questions – without answers
Questions
Questions – eat me like a cancer
Questions
Questions – another whys
Questions
Questions – they´ll be until I die

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Old 2011-07-25, 12:00
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Explain a little bit about what you're trying to get across there and we'll see if we can come up with something, okay?
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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Old 2011-07-25, 18:35
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That's cool. I'll try to come close to what you're saying in your lyrics, but if I miss the mark let me know.

I´m just a shadow of a child
I used to be
All beatiful inside´s been - All beauty inside has been
broken by years


Even though you slur to make it sound like "inside's" it reads easier with the word "has" there. It's not a good contraction to use, but if you want to keep it there that's okay. I see why.

Everyday there was something new
To see and learn
Time after time all unknowledges
Were burnt

-Can you clarify what you mean by "unknowledges?" I don't think that's a word.

Bridge:
When has it happened - When did it happen or What has happened - if either of those fit your meaning.
Who is to blame
The change shattered
With all my life and broke my game
- Do you mean "The change shattered All my life and broke my game?"

I used to live in my free world
With no cares
Of the god called money that rules
Everywhere

I´ve never really thought that
My soul could bleed
That I would ever meet with
All lies and greed

-Nice flow to that stanza.

Bridge:
When has it happened
Who is to blame
The change shattered
With all my life and broke my game

Chorus:
I don´t wanna be
I don´t wanna be an adult since now - an adult anymore
I don´t wanna see
I don´t wanna see the world goes down - the world go down or the world sink down?

Indifference and selfishness
I had to fight
Obey work pay die is life with
We all satisfied
-The last 2 lines are a little unclear. Could you explain them a little more?

Bridge:
When has it happened
Who is to blame
The change shattered
With all my life and broke my game

Chorus:
I don´t wanna lose
I don´t wanna lose sweet innocence
I don´t wanna feel
I don´t wanna feel blood of childhood on my hands


I hope that helps out a little bit.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2011-07-26, 07:33
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Explain a little bit about what you're trying to get across there and we'll see if we can come up with something, okay?


I want to say what I said in lines but maybe with another words or synonyms.
 
Old 2011-07-26, 07:55
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That's cool. I'll try to come close to what you're saying in your lyrics, but if I miss the mark let me know.

I´m just a shadow of a child
I used to be
All beatiful inside´s been - All beauty inside has been
broken by years


Even though you slur to make it sound like "inside's" it reads easier with the word "has" there. It's not a good contraction to use, but if you want to keep it there that's okay. I see why.


I leave this as it is ´cause of a melody flow.

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Everyday there was something new
To see and learn
Time after time all unknowledges
Were burnt
-Can you clarify what you mean by "unknowledges?" I don't think that's a word.


This verse means when you´re young you learn everyday something new and get everyday a new knowledge. Then you learned everything and nothing new is waiting for you, nothing knowledge to get, so it means all "unknowledges" are gone (were burnt).

Maybe there should be "all unknown is burnt"

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Bridge:
When has it happened - When did it happen or What has happened - if either of those fit your meaning.
Who is to blame
The change shattered
With all my life and broke my game
- Do you mean "The change shattered All my life and broke my game?"



Yeah. Exactly. I will edit it.

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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Chorus:
I don´t wanna be
I don´t wanna be an adult since now - an adult anymore
I don´t wanna see
I don´t wanna see the world goes down - the world go down or the world sink down?


"an adult anymore" doesn´t fit to melody.
"The world go down" is ok.

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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Indifference and selfishness
I had to fight
Obey work pay die is life with
We all satisfied
-The last 2 lines are a little unclear. Could you explain them a little more?



It means "Obey!" "Work!" "Pay!" "Die!" are commands we are given in our lives nothing more like fun or "do what you like" and we are even satisfy with this life.


Thank you for your great advices that lead me to my improvement

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Old 2011-07-26, 08:07
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S.M.C.

Blow!

When I saw you by a bar
Fire caught me tight
Face like angel of midnight star
My C. started to rise

I decided you must be mine
Tonight or never
Now I´m looking to your eyes
And feel your shiver

Bridge:
Face to face
To see your grace
Skin on skin
Let the love begin

Chorus:
Do it do it do it tonight
You are the girl of my life
Do it do it do it to me
You are the girl of my dream

Babe I hope you understand
Want no love just sex
If you have got the same plan
Just spread your long legs

Bridge:
Face to face
To see your grace
Skin on skin
Let the love begin

Chorus:
Do it do it do it tonight
You are the girl of my life
Do it do it do it to me
You are the girl of my dream
 
Old 2011-07-26, 08:21
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What is "either" in reference to in the third line of the stanza? Are you meaning the "you" as well as the person doing the talking? I hope that's not too confusing.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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Old 2011-07-26, 08:38
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Okay. For the line with "unknowledges" would this work? -
Time after time all unknowns
Were burnt

I thought the line "Obey work pay die" was how you described it. If you want those to be more forceful I'd punctuate it with the exclamations right in the piece.

Indifference and selfishness
I had to fight
Obey! work! pay! die! -is all life is (or - is all life)
All are satisfied - I reworded this for clarity, but tried to keep the same rhythm going.

I'm glad to help out. When you're writing from a translation or directly in another language sometimes the wording can be awkward for those that speak that language so I'm trying to help you bridge the two.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2011-07-26, 08:48
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The second stanza, second stanza -

To (be) drowning in sadness?

or

Is it so usual
Drowning in sadness?

If you use the second one it doesn't mess up the rhythm by adding the extra word.

The only other place I can see is -
Questions – another whys

Questions - more whys
Questions – constant whys
Questions – always whys

That can be fiddled with to fit and still get your meaning across.

Other than that it's a self reflective piece that seems to be working over life's hurdles that one can either sink into or eventually rise above. Nice job.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2011-07-26, 08:56
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Okay, you've got a conflict of idea here because in the bridge you have "Let the love begin" and then you say "Want no love just sex." If you can find a way to replace the first "love" the conflict will be gone.

Let the magic begin
Let the moment begin
Let impulse begin

Or you could change that line entirely. That's always an option.

Oh, one other thing. Right at the beginning is she standing inside at a bar or outside the bar like on the sidewalk? "A bar" makes it sound like she's outside. If you mean inside, change "a bar" to "the bar" and it will make that clearer.

And the line "My C. started to rise." I'm sure I know what that's supposed to say, but if you want the piece a little more user friendly you can substitute

My want started to rise
My blood started to rise

I think you get the idea.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!

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Old 2011-07-26, 10:03
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To me, the "change of tone" reads like a workably-horrible, anticlimactic twist. Made me . Whether the twist was intended or not is another matter.
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Old 2011-07-26, 16:05
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What part are you referring to specifically, Unanything?
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
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Somewhere around "Babe I want you to understand". I felt that one too.

And wahey, if it isn't our good old existentialist(?) scotsman come back for a visit.
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Old 2011-07-27, 08:39
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What is "either" in reference to in the third line of the stanza? Are you meaning the "you" as well as the person doing the talking? I hope that's not too confusing.


It means, they tell you "Don´t look to the light, ´cause it burns like fire, but you doubt if the light burns like fire then the fire can warm you too.

So it could be
"But there is undying doubt
If light burns like fire
Then fire just can warm you (too)
And might take you higher
 
Old 2011-07-27, 08:45
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Okay. For the line with "unknowledges" would this work? -
Time after time all unknowns
Were burnt

I thought the line "Obey work pay die" was how you described it. If you want those to be more forceful I'd punctuate it with the exclamations right in the piece.

Indifference and selfishness
I had to fight
Obey! work! pay! die! -is all life is (or - is all life)
All are satisfied - I reworded this for clarity, but tried to keep the same rhythm going.

I'm glad to help out. When you're writing from a translation or directly in another language sometimes the wording can be awkward for those that speak that language so I'm trying to help you bridge the two.


I used what fits to melody. Thank you.
 
Old 2011-07-27, 08:48
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Again I used what fits to a melody. Thank you.
 
Old 2011-07-27, 09:05
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Okay, you've got a conflict of idea here because in the bridge you have "Let the love begin" and then you say "Want no love just sex." If you can find a way to replace the first "love" the conflict will be gone.

Let the magic begin
Let the moment begin
Let impulse begin

Or you could change that line entirely. That's always an option.


You´re right about the conflict of idea. I mean love in bridge like "love-like". Bridge is about you´re talking to the girl who you want to screw, so you´re talking about love.

the only one word I can figure out it´s
"Skin on skin
Let the f*ck begin"

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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Oh, one other thing. Right at the beginning is she standing inside at a bar or outside the bar like on the sidewalk? "A bar" makes it sound like she's outside. If you mean inside, change "a bar" to "the bar" and it will make that clearer.


Yeah. She´s standing inside at the bar, so it should be
"When I saw you at the bar"

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Old 2011-07-27, 09:16
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Nothing to live for

Wake up again
To this world of pain
Everything is in vain
´cos nothing will remain

Never get what you want
Every right turns to wrong
All your goals are in haze
Of falling human race

Broken dreams are unseen
In sad daily routine

Prechorus:
Why are we here?
What is the meaning of our lives?
Defeated by fear
Each try to change the world is melted in lies

Resignation
Takes away destination
Of promised land in your head
That is out of your hands

Burning hell you are in
Just a step from givin´ in
Whenever you can try
Leave all this world behind

But remember a score
there´s nothing to die for

Prechorus 2:
Why are we here?
What is the meaning of our lives?
Defeated by fear
Each try to change the world is melted in lies

With tears in your eyes
You realize

Chorus:
When you´re crawling on the edge
Of the world that´s killing you
When you´re feeling like a dead
Then you realize the truth
There is nothing to live for
And even nothing to die for (either)

Prechorus 3:
With silent cries
You realize

Chorus:
When you´re crawling on the edge
Of the world that´s killing you
When you´re feeling like a dead
Then you realize the truth
There is nothing to live for
And even nothing to die for (either)

You´re hanging at a place
Between life and death
Not one of two worlds
is worth to go there
no reasons to care
no gain if you dare!

Prechorus 4:
With anger inside
You realize

Chorus:
When you´re crawling on the edge
Of the world that´s killing you
When you´re feeling like a dead
Then you realize the truth
There is nothing to live for
And even nothing to die for (either)

Last edited by Hugozhor : 2011-08-08 at 17:10.
 
Old 2011-07-28, 08:21
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One my TV show

I´m sitting in my living room
And reading newspapers
There are no ordinary men
Just murderers thieves and fakers

They get fortune to be there
Tasting sweet fruits of fame
They have done terrible crimes
But I know they can´t be insane

PreChorus:
I´ve been only suffering so far
Now I know how to be a star
I must find a right victim
To fullfill my lifetime dream

Chorus:
One my TV show – where I´ll be a star
One my TV show – millions will watch me
One my TV show – 45 minutes of fame
One my TV show - I´ll shape my destiny

Now I realize my fault
I´m very merciful
Oh God please give me a power
To do something terrible

I´ve got only a chance to do
To get to morning press
I´ll wait ´till someone dies
Then guilty of his death I confess

PreChorus:
I´ve been only suffering so far
Now I know how to be a star
I must find a right victim
To fullfill my lifetime dream

Chorus:
One my TV show – where I´ll be a star
One my TV show – millions will watch me
One my TV show – 45 minutes of fame
One my TV show - I´ll shape my destiny
 
Old 2011-08-04, 15:26
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Creeping decay

Something wrong with the world today
Can´t find a name for it
Something wrong in people´s minds
A feeling that I feel

You choose the right way in a mud
According to your plan
Smaller evil of two evils
Good intensions in your head

PreChorus:
Full of good intensions
Is road to hell
Each good deed is punished
Unjustly as well

Chorus:
Creeping decay – who is responsible for
Creeping decay – who is sensible to feel
Creeping decay – who is responsible for
Creeping decay
Human corrosive
In our veins live
And feeding
Creeping decay

Clear conscience is your guide in life
To stay on the right way
But there is always one waiting
Your trust to betray

PreChorus:
Full of good intensions
Is road to hell
Each good deed is punished
Unjustly as well

Chorus:
Creeping decay – who is responsible for
Creeping decay – who is sensible to feel
Creeping decay – who is responsible for
Creeping decay
Human corrosive
In our veins live
And feeding
Creeping decay
 
Old 2011-08-05, 16:35
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Take me as I am

After a long search
I have come to view
I was just looking
For a dream never comes true

Now I realize
I´m not without faults
That is why I have
To expect the same from all

PreChorus:
I can´t change you
Now I see
Human nature
Is stronger than me

So you can´t change me
You should view
My nature within
Is stronger than you

Chorus:
Take me as I am or leave me
´cos I take you as you are believe me
If you want me to change better leave me
´cos I don´t want you to change believe me

Our rules are set
We´ll both obey them
Or we´ll break it up
Pretending causes me pain

PreChorus:
I can´t change you
Now I see
Human nature
Is stronger than me

So you can´t change me
You should view
My nature within
Is stronger than you

Chorus:
Take me as I am or leave me
´cos I take you as you are believe me
If you want me to change better leave me
´cos I don´t want you to change believe me
 
Old 2011-08-08, 12:38
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Hugozhor
Wake up again
To this world of pain
Everything is in vain
´cos nothing will remain - I'd eliminate the whole stanza. The rhyme is so common sounding and the thought adds nothing to the piece as a whole.

Use this as the first stanza instead. It draws people in instead of turning them off.
Never get what you want
Every right turns to wrong
All your goals are in haze
Of falling human race

Broken dreams are unseen
In sad daily routine

Prechorus:
Why are we here?
What is the meaning of our lives?
Defeated by fear
Each try to change the world is melted in lies -The last 2 lines are strong. The first two are much weaker. If you can get the same syllable count in the first 2 lines I'd change those.

Resignation
Takes away destination
Of promised land in your head
That is out of your hands

Burning hell you are in
Just a step from givin´ in
Whenever you can try
Leave all this world behind

But remember a score
there´s nothing to die for

Prechorus 2:
Why are we here?
What is the meaning of our lives?
Defeated by fear
Each try to change the world is melted in lies

With tears in your eyes
You realize

Chorus:
When you´re crawling on the edge
Of the world that´s killing you
When you´re feeling like a dead -Like a dead what? Or do you mean 'like you're dead?'
Then you realize the truth
There is nothing to live for
And even nothing to die for (either)

Prechorus 3:
With silent cries
You realize



You´re hanging at place - You're hanging at 'a' place?
Between life and death
Nur one of two worlds -Nur? Did you mean 'not?'
is worth to go there -'is worth going there'
no reasons to care
no gain if you dare!

Prechorus 4:
With anger inside
You realize

Chorus:
When you´re crawling on the edge
Of the world that´s killing you
When you´re feeling like a dead
Then you realize the truth
There is nothing to live for
And even nothing to die for (either)-- 'And no reason to die' gives closure without sounding like a scramble for words. It also eliminates the repetition.


Hope that helps a little.
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Old 2011-08-08, 12:44
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It's not bad. It doesn't really grab me, but that's just my opinion. The right music might make it stand out more.
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Old 2011-08-08, 17:09
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Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Originally Posted by Hugozhor
Wake up again
To this world of pain
Everything is in vain
´cos nothing will remain - I'd eliminate the whole stanza. The rhyme is so common sounding and the thought adds nothing to the piece as a whole.

Use this as the first stanza instead. It draws people in instead of turning them off.
Never get what you want
Every right turns to wrong
All your goals are in haze
Of falling human race



I´m not sure about this. I think the first stanza might be common but it starts good with "wake up again"

Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Broken dreams are unseen
In sad daily routine

Prechorus:
Why are we here?
What is the meaning of our lives?
Defeated by fear
Each try to change the world is melted in lies -The last 2 lines are strong. The first two are much weaker. If you can get the same syllable count in the first 2 lines I'd change those.

Resignation
Takes away destination
Of promised land in your head
That is out of your hands

Burning hell you are in
Just a step from givin´ in
Whenever you can try
Leave all this world behind

But remember a score
there´s nothing to die for

Prechorus 2:
Why are we here?
What is the meaning of our lives?
Defeated by fear
Each try to change the world is melted in lies

With tears in your eyes
You realize


Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Chorus:
When you´re crawling on the edge
Of the world that´s killing you
When you´re feeling like a dead -Like a dead what? Or do you mean 'like you're dead?'
Then you realize the truth
There is nothing to live for
And even nothing to die for (either)


Yeah. I mean feeling like you´re dead. I think it´s good in lyrics,this isn´t novel, just lyrics


Prechorus 3:
With silent cries
You realize

Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
You´re hanging at place - You're hanging at 'a' place?
Between life and death
Nur one of two worlds -Nur? Did you mean 'not?'
is worth to go there -'is worth going there'
no reasons to care
no gain if you dare!



Ok. I´ll change it.

Prechorus 4:
With anger inside
You realize
Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Chorus:
When you´re crawling on the edge
Of the world that´s killing you
When you´re feeling like a dead
Then you realize the truth
There is nothing to live for
And even nothing to die for (either)-- 'And no reason to die' gives closure without sounding like a scramble for words. It also eliminates the repetition.


I´m not sure about the last line "and even nothing to die for (either)" but your line "and no reason to die" isn´t fit to melody.

Thank you for your comment.
 
Old 2011-08-08, 17:11
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Thank you for your honest comment.
 
Old 2011-08-08, 17:17
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Short cut through cemetery

What the hell are you doing here?
It´s just moonlit night but you don´t care
You are going careless without fear
Creatures of the night are waiting everywhere

I´m not coward I want to be
In short time at home to go to bed
So I´ll take a short cut through cemetery
Don´t try to sow doubts into my head

PreChorus:
The graves are opening
You see skeletons
Who are rising

Chorus:
Tower clock is striking midnight
Welcome to night scenery
You will see incredible fright
On your way through cemetery

Meanwhile you are praying on your knees
You can forget about the sleep in your bed
It´s time to meet some nice zombies
To become one of them undead

PreChorus:
The graves are open
You see skeletons
Who are rotten

Chorus:
Tower clock is striking midnight
Welcome to night scenery
You will see incredible fright
On your way through cemetery
 
Old 2011-08-08, 19:27
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Rather tame compared to MJ's "Thriller" and my "Pizza of Terror" which was set partly in a cemetery.

I liked the chorus lots. It has a nice flow and imagery in it.
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Old 2011-08-09, 16:52
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Thank you L,B'XXX.

I wrote these lyrics just for fun not seriously and it was really relaxing
 
Old 2011-08-09, 16:55
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Judgement day

Now transfermission has been done
Here stands naked man
In his head´s the only one aim
To save the woman

But watch out there is another
Robot without a will
It´s programmed destination is
The same woman to kill

PreChorus:
They are both from the future
They are both enemies
They are here with the same aims
To change our destiny

Chorus:
She must live
Life to give
To leader
Of future

Innocent people had to die
I must be faster
There´s not much time to find her
And pretend disaster

Please listen to me and believe
From future I flew
I was sent by the leader
Of rebels who´s in you

PreChorus:
They are both from the future
They are both enemies
They are here with the same aims
To change our destiny

Chorus:
She must live
Life to give
To leader
Of future

Woman speaking:
"I can´t believe it
It can´t be true
That fate of mankind depends on me
How could a woman
Like me
Decide about the future of our destiny"

PreChorus:
They are both from the future
They are both enemies
They are here with the same aims
To change our destiny

Chorus:
She must live
Life to give
To leader
Of future

You´re dying
I´m alone
It´s closer in every moment
Now
This button
Gonna be your end

Red light in your eye…fades out!
 
Old 2011-08-10, 09:37
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Lonely as a leaf

Lonely as a leaf
That´s fallen from a tree
With no one all around
To set it free

Lonely as a leaf
that´s far away from a tree
with no one all around
to help it reach

PreChorus:
If there´s no one to care
I know what my way bears

Chorus:
Just don´t know what´s it for
Someone´s a choice from more
When someone has no choice
No one hears his silent voice
His last hand´s wave
But no one seems to care
Lonely as a leaf
That´s fallen from a tree

Lonely as a leaf
That´s shaking in a breeze
With no one all around
To cover it

Lonely as a leaf
Without water so lean
No one seems to care
For its destiny

PreChorus:
If there´s no one to care
I know what my way bears

Chorus:
Just don´t know what´s it for
Someone´s a choice from more
When someone has no choice
No one hears his silent voice
His last hand´s wave
But no one seems to care
Lonely as a leaf
That´s fallen from a tree
 
Old 2011-08-11, 08:05
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On a banana peel

No nothing comes easy to me
No nothing I get just for free
Rise and fall
But more falls

Nothing I get by happenchance
Everything I must hard arrange
Rise and fall
But more falls

PreChorus:
On every way I take
there´s a peel waiting to break
my certain foot (step)
it might be stuck on my boot

Chorus:
I try to set
All my things safe
To reach my aims in order
It seems to me
My fortune I´m searching
Is hiding around a corner

And more I try
More hurdles lie
Before me on my way to beat
When I take a chance
To set my balance
I´m slipping on a banana peel

If I have my guardian angel
And if he controls my fortune
Rise and fall
But more falls

He must be laughing all the time
Throwing peels on my way of life
Rise and fall
But more falls

PreChorus:
On every way I take
there´s a peel waiting to break
my certain foot (step)
it might be stuck on my boot

Chorus:
I try to set
All my things safe
To reach my aims in order
It seems to me
My fortune I´m searching
Is hiding around a corner

And more I try
More hurdles lie
Before me on my way to beat
When I take a chance
To set my balance
I´m slipping on a banana peel
 
Old 2011-08-12, 09:09
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The weight of the world

Have you ever been all alone in the night
Have you ever seen a moon shining so bright
Have you ever breathed smogless fresh air
Have you ever listened to silence everywhere

PreChorus:
It seems to me there are no borders
I feel like all the world lies on my shoulders
And then I realize
That behind all lies
A solution exists
For everyone of us

Chorus:
The world could be a place for you and me
Where everyone gets a chance to be free
To give not take to love not hurt
And then we can stand the weight of the world

Have you ever stopped your life for a while
Have you ever tried to supress your pride
Have you ever looked to the eyes of nature
Have you ever resisted your moneyeating creature

PreChorus:
It seems to me there are no borders
I feel like all the world lies on my shoulders
And then I realize
That behind all lies
A solution exists
For everyone of us

Chorus:
The world could be a place for you and me
Where everyone gets a chance to be free
To give not take to love not hurt
And then we can stand the weight of the world

When someday you´ll be all alone in the night
When someday you´ll see a moon shining so bright
When someday you´ll breathe smogless fresh air
When someday you´ll listen to silence everywhere

Chorus:
The world could be a place for you and me
Where everyone gets a chance to be free
To give not take to love not hurt
And then we can stand the weight of the world
 
Old 2011-08-12, 17:50
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The nature of reflection

Yea well, what the heck. I'm thinking that if I throw out this to some sharks, it might just improve the odds that I'll get around to finishing the whole thing. This is from a short story I'm writing, guess you could call it horror/sci-fi; it's written by the main character as a sort of lead-in to what's actually going down. Just finished that section, along with this, so yea. Enjoy. Or don't. Not really my headache!


You will take
Only what you recall
You will have
Only what you bring
Nature of reflection

Turn everything around
You're beautiful in there
Something in my room
A universe
And the thickness
Of a possibility away

Turn everything around
You're beautiful in there
Reflection waving goodbye
When you know, be sure to tell
How you know
That you were the one
Waving first
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Old 2011-08-13, 09:31
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Alien

„High comand high command:
Wake up the crew of spaceship Nostromo 180246
From your interplanetary sleep
S.O.S. calling from planet LV 426
So follow it and save them from fall“

Three crewmembers have landed
On a planet in the night and storm
To follow S.O.S. calling
To the center of black underworld…where evil is born

„Let us in with mate who´s hurt
To save him from what´s on his face“
„The quarantine law´s been broken
who´s threaten all crew with infection…of the unknown space?!“

PreChorus:
Acid pumping through her veins (S.O.S. calling is nothing but warning!)
Instead of blood
New xenoform on her way (S.O.S. calling is nothing but warning!)
To protect what she´s got

Chorus:
Alien
Creature of the black and slime
From a different space and time
Alien
If you´re caught by her long tail
Then your life is bound to fail
Alien
In a shell of slime you´ll dwell
Until she´ll send you to hell
Alien
And use your body for
Her young ones to grow
Alien

I am sole survivor now
Crewmates are servants of Alien
Now I´m running to escape
To blow damned planet out to space…and make an end

I´m back again on spaceship
Heading for home to see again the sun
I´ve caught a sight of black and slime
The final duel now has begun…just one on one

Chorus:
Alien
Creature of the black and slime
From a different space and time
Alien
If you´re caught by her long tail
Then your life is bound to fail
Alien
In a shell of slime you´ll dwell
Until she´ll send you to hell
Alien
And use your body for
Her young ones to grow
Alien

Your chance to erase the human race
Is blown with your body out to space…space…space……or not?!
 
Old 2011-08-14, 13:42
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Life´s inferno

I´m sitting here and wondering
Questions in my burning mind
Why is the world like it is?
What is a meaning of our lives?

Looking back through history
From ancient times to nowadays
Why has all happened what is
A purpose on mankind´s path

When you wondered the same as me
At least one time in your life
Let me take you on a long journey
Through unexplored places in time

In primeval ages
Man was born naked
With nothing to this world

He lived in harmony
With nature and took
Only how much he needed

After time he learnt well
Animals to kill
And enemies in defense

He worked only when it
Was needed for living
No bad thoughts of abuse

But one nature in him
That was overwhelming
Started to going out

Hidden danger inside
Started to rule his life
Inferno´s broken out

PreChorus:
Laziness – part of our lives
Laziness – in everyone of us
Laziness – neverending fight
Laziness – how long will we deny?

Chorus:
Don´t have to be a scientist
Or high – educated man
After a lot of research works
To ancient question understand

Don´t have to be a reader
Of all books in history
Don´t have to be a clairvoyant
To find an answer that dwells in me

Laziness became a gear
For all who didn´t dare
To fight it with a work

They have been using lies
To justify their crimes
To confirm a primal nature

Hand in hand with religions
And politic persuasions
To live on the highest level (and not to work)

Moral speeches of fakers
Bloodhanded moneymakers
In their own built world order

PreChorus:
Laziness – part of our lives
Laziness – in everyone of us
Laziness – neverending fight
Laziness – how long will we deny?

Chorus:
Don´t have to be a scientist
Or high – educated man
After a lot of research works
To ancient question understand

Don´t have to be a reader
Of all books in history
Don´t have to be a clairvoyant
To find an answer that dwells in me

Reasons and alibies – Reasons to be pharaoh (to be served)
Built up with lies - to be king (not to work)
Reasons and alibies - to be president (to command)
Reasons and alibies – Reasons to have slaves (to be served)
Built up with lies - to have privileges (not to work)
Reasons and alibies - to have grades (to command)
Built up with lies
Alibies
Lies!!

Regimes are changing through history
Terms are changing along with it (slave to citizen
Nobleman to politician)
But under all these changing stripes
Laziness rules and enforce our lies

Chorus:
Don´t have to be a scientist
Or high – educated man
After a lot of research works
To ancient question understand

Don´t have to be a reader
Of all books in history
Don´t have to be a clairvoyant
To find an answer that dwells in me

Again sitting here and relaxing
Answer in my tired mind
Reason why the world´s like it is
What is a gear of our lives

Last edited by Hugozhor : 2011-08-14 at 13:48.
 
Old 2011-08-15, 13:49
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Blessing in disguise

I wasn´t born with a playboy face
But neither with a monster grace
Blessing in disguise

Don´t live in a golden tower
Never felt misery power
Blessing in disguise

PreChorus:
Never too high…no
Never too low…never
Never too up…no
Never too down…never ever

Some of my dream missions failed
Some of them came true someday
Blessing in disguise

When I´m close to destruction
Here comes always a salvation
Blessing in disguise

PreChorus:
Never too high…no
Never too low…never
Never too up…no
Never too down…never ever

Chorus:
Blessing in disguise - I´m in the middle
This is all my life – neverending riddle
Blessing in disguise – everything I do
This is all my life – is going to…be
Blessing in disguise
This is all my life

When it all comes down again
Always find how to ease my pain
Blessing in disguise

I´m not a superstar
But I have gone enough far
Blessing in disguise

PreChorus:
Never too high…no
Never too low…never
Never too up…no
Never too down…never ever

Chorus:
Blessing in disguise - I´m in the middle
This is all my life – neverending riddle
Blessing in disguise – everything I do
This is all my life – is going to…be
Blessing in disguise
This is all my life
 
Old 2011-08-16, 08:11
Hugozhor
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Reasons to hate

All I wanted was to share your dream with you
All I needed was to help me through
So beatiful with blue eyes
Now I know you you´re devil in disguise

PreChorus:
All your looks
All your smiles
Nothing but
Fake and lies

Chorus:
You give me reasons to hate
You give me reasons to hate
You give me reasons to hate babe
You give me reasons to hate
You give me reasons to hate
You give me reasons to hate babe

You´re playing your game day after day
Like a toy you threw me away
You didn´t care what I felt
In one moment you left me in hell

PreChorus:
Your emotions
Hard as steel
Your promises
Were not real

Chorus:
You give me reasons to hate
You give me reasons to hate
You give me reasons to hate babe
You give me reasons to hate
You give me reasons to hate
You give me reasons to hate babe

No tears shed
Just hate left!
 
Old 2011-08-17, 08:23
Hugozhor
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On wings of time

Darkess is surrounding me
I´m standing
And waiting
Expectation´s filling me
Waiting for
Curtain fall
In a sea of waving hands
I can hear
Storm is near
Intro´s coming to an end
They hit the lights!
And start!

It doesn´t matter
What is colour of your skin
It doesn´t matter
What religion you´re praying
It doesn´t matter
What is language of your own
´cause here we are as one
Singing this song

It doesn´t matter
What is year today and now
It doesn´t matter
If we are in or we´re out
It doesn´t matter
How old are you or look like
´cause here we are as one
Ready to ride

PreChorus:
What a great feeling
To be a part of something
What happened years ago

What a great feeling
To see what just from telling
And from pictures I have known

Chorus:
On wings of time
We fly tonight
On wings of time
Rhyme by rhyme

PreChorus:
What a great feeling
To be a part of something
What happened years ago

They have just made it
This hall is a time machine
And we are passangers on

Chorus:
On wings of time
We fly tonight
On wings of time
Rhyme by rhyme
 
Old 2011-08-18, 08:45
Hugozhor
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Pain

It came at night
Like an unexpected guest
Invader without warning

Usurpator
That will never rest
Its power was drawing

I am a slave
It rules over me
Crushing stones are rolling

Still on the run
To escape from the
Abyss of pain I´m still falling

PreChorus:
I´m shaking with a cold
In land of ice and snow
Where it leaves me

Chorus:
Pain ah
Pain ah
What is real
Only what I can feel
Pain ah
Pain ah
What is left
When I´m almost dead
Just Pain ah

It marches through
All areas
With fully occupying

Its aim isn´t
Mysterious
It leads me to dying

PreChorus:
I´m hot with a fever
In desert of hot weather
Where it leaves me

Chorus:
Pain ah
Pain ah
What is real
Only what I can feel
Pain ah
Pain ah
What is left
When I´m almost dead
Just Pain ah
 
Old 2011-08-19, 08:41
Hugozhor
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Always too late

In this faceless world
No one seems to care
Bored souless people
With their empty stares

Everybody lost
A faith to lead his life
Justice without help
Is alone and blind

PreChorus:
Silent cries of warning
No one wants to hear
Writings on the wall
Behind haze burning so clear
But ´till you clear the haze
it´s

Chorus:
Always too late – to see the system´s failing
Always too late – too see your faults
Always too late – to recognize it´s coming
Always too late – to open up your eyes
And realize
To no one has to die again

Evil´s rising ´cause
There´s no opression
We´ve been starting to
Used to live along

Aftermath is done
You´re searching for them
Reasons and causes
And how to pretend

PreChorus:
Silent cries of warning
No one wants to hear
Writings on the wall
Behind haze burning so clear
But ´till you clear the haze
it´s

Chorus:
Always too late – to see the system´s failing
Always too late – too see your faults
Always too late – to recognize it´s coming
Always too late – to open up your eyes
And realize
To no one has to die again

When sorrow is done
I see a little spark of humanity
In human minds
Hope´s crawling out of the dark on its knees
But still alive…to help to clear the haze
Before it´s

Chorus:
Always too late – to see the system´s failing
Always too late – too see your faults
Always too late – to recognize it´s coming
Always too late – to open up your eyes
And realize
To no one has to die again
 
Old 2011-08-20, 11:03
Hugozhor
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Ship of fools (in a sea of madness)

As child in under-deck
I thought that someday
I´ll be setting a course
With others to sail
To richest and the most beatiful seas

Grown up living on a board
I have realized
That path to captain´s walk´s
Paved with blood and lies
And for few not for democracy

PreChorus:
In a sea of madness
We´re sailing on and on
And only sadness
For Justice´s sons

I left to find another
Ship where justice rules
Been living on four ships
Always led by fools
Who have no skills and justice they knock

In this sea of madness
Astray ships sailing
Until sink crashed by rocks
Innocent dying
And leaders will find another flock

PreChorus:
In a sea of madness
We´re sailing on and on
And only sadness
For Justice´s sons

Chorus:
On ship of fools - where madmen rule
Never change a course
As member of crew
On ship of fools - where madmen rule
Leading us on rocks
Wrongly chosen few
On ship of fools - where madmen rule
On ship of fools
And only sadness
On ship of fools
In a sea of madnes
 
Old 2011-08-21, 08:30
Hugozhor
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Who wants to live forever

Life is so beatiful
So nice and so fine
Everyday something new
To learn to live to find

Life´s full of occasions
Waiting just for me
All of my destinations
In turn I will reach

PreChorus:
Point of view – will never change
My point of view – always the same

Chorus:
I´m the one – who wants to live forever and ever
I´m the man – who wants to live forever and ever

Who do you think you are?!
You must be crazy!
Know nothing about life
Talking just bullshit!

Life is just fear and pain
You can trust no one
Disapointments again
And again bring you down

PreChorus:
Point of view – time will change
Your point of view – years will change

Chorus:
Ask myself – who wants to live forever?...never
Just madman – who wants to live forever?...never

Wait for a while he seems
Quite familiar to me
When I minus some years
It´s just younger me

PreChorus:
Point of view – will never change
Our point of view – life will change

Chorus:
I´m the one – who wants to live forever and ever
I´m the man – who wants to live forever and ever

Chorus:
Ask myself – who wants to live forever?...never
Just madman – who wants to live forever?...never

Last edited by Hugozhor : 2011-08-21 at 08:34.
 
Old 2011-08-22, 15:34
Hugozhor
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Animal

It has been in everyone of us
Since the beginning of mankind´s path
You can try to hold it back inside
But be aware it will never die

You´ve been teaching me to hold it since school
In a bay of restrictions and rules
In my mind with words it´s wrong and shame
Supressing my nature leads to pain

PreChorus:
Don´t try to tame a power
That dwells in me
´Cos if I don´t let it out
It will break out you´ll see

Chorus:
I´m an animal – upright on two feet
I´m an animal – satisfaction I need
I´m an animal – do what I feel
I´m an animal – shout it out and scream

I feel no shame I´m coming from an ape
I let my instincts unleash and escape
It is deep in everyone of us
Realize it or you´ll cross law lines

Chorus:
I´m an animal – upright on two feet
I´m an animal – satisfaction I need
I´m an animal – do what I feel
I´m an animal – shout it out and scream

Chorus:
I´m an animal – upright on two feet
I´m an animal – satisfaction I need
I´m an animal – do what I feel
I´m an animal – shout it out and scream
I´m an animal – no shame on my side
Nevermore – no prison in suit and tie
 
Old 2011-08-23, 08:43
Hugozhor
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Different (but brave) in 3 parts

Different (but brave) in 3 parts

I. Different

I was raising with other children
Same like they were
´till puberty started in us all
Looking for lovers

Girls were looking for handsome boyfriends
And boys for girls
As we were learned since we were born
And saw everywhere

On my first date I realized
And was so scared
That I felt more attraction to
Boy than that girl

Chorus:
Oh no I am different – what am I gonna do?!
Oh so different – my secret to cover
Oh no I am different – it makes me feel so down
Oh so different – I am the only one

So I had to pretend what
I could never feel
Afraid of these dirty names like
Bugger and queer

Chorus:
Oh no I am different – what am I gonna do?!
Oh so different – my secret to cover
Oh no I am different – it makes me feel so down
Oh so different – I am the only one

Trying to live in delusion
Struggle within
It was taking my lust for life
I could not win

Chorus:
Oh no I am different – what am I gonna do?!
Oh so different – my secret to cover
Oh no I am different – it makes me feel so down
Oh so different – I am the only one


II. Revelation

All alone in my dark appartment
Just TV´s blue light
Drunk again with bottle and pills
So close to suicide

Then I caught a voice from TV
Pop singer´s talking:

„This is a official statement of mine
And I hope it will help all other people
Who are suffering like me
From pretending someone they can´t ever be…I am gay“

I could not believe in my ears
He broke a fear within
He had gutts to tell the truth
He stopped pretending

He gave me a light in sorrow
A strength to carry on
I realized there are more like me
I am not all alone!


III. Brave

Stop pretending
Who I can´t ever be
Now I have gutts
To show you all…my real me!!

What is just normal
No one can really say
No one has right
To justify…my own way!!

PreChorus:
All you law-makers – who decide what´s right
Keepers of morals – take a look inside
So scared to be real
Obey majority

Chorus:
Oh yes I am different – and I´m proud of it
Oh so different – no more pretending
Oh yes I am different – and more brave than you are
Oh so different – I´m not the only one

PreChorus:
All you law-makers – who decide what´s right
Keepers of morals – pretenders outside
So scared to be real
Obey majority

Chorus:
Oh yes I am different – and I´m proud of it
Oh so different – no more pretending
Oh yes I am different – and more brave than you are
Oh so different – I´m not the only one
 
Old 2011-08-23, 22:29
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Quite brave indeed to put this into lyrics. Seen you've been posting quite a lot of lyrics on here lately and though there's some grammar issues and whatnot, the subjects etc always somehow bring a small smile to my face.
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Old 2011-08-24, 09:20
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Thank you for your comment. English isn´t my native language so every grammar advices are welcomed
 
Old 2011-08-24, 09:24
Hugozhor
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Now or Never

It´s coming again
A feeling you´ve been knowing for thousand times
Your shaking hands
Sweat is running down your neck breakdown in sight

Desert in your mouth
Tongue has turned to stone and died doubts are growing
Feel small like a mouse
Uncertainty taking control defeat is drawing

PreChorus:
Do what you feel
Don´t think twice
Every second of waiting
You´re losing your pride
Don´t hesitate
Until it´s too late

Chorus:
Now or never – do it now or you never will
Now or never – anxiety is here to be killed
Now or never - don´t be afraid what it may bring
Now or never – better try and fail than only waiting

Don´t waste your time
Don´t care what is meant to be follow your heart
Light up your mind
Experiences day by day improve another start

PreChorus:
Do what you feel
Don´t think twice
Every second of waiting
You´re losing your pride
Don´t hesitate
Until it´s too late

Chorus:
Now or never – do it now or you never will
Now or never – anxiety is here to be killed
Now or never - don´t be afraid what it may bring
Now or never – better try and fail than only waiting

Chorus:
Now or never – do it now or you never will
Now or never – anxiety is here to be killed
Now or never - don´t be afraid what it may bring
Now or never – do what you feel and you will win

Last edited by Hugozhor : 2011-08-24 at 09:28.
 
Old 2011-08-25, 09:16
Hugozhor
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The last drop´s fall (1 of trilogy)

I was lullabied
In the state of mind
That I´m after all
Nothing can me knock
Oh no

Know my enemies
Want me on my knees
And I made an end
With my so called friends
Oh yeah

Get rid of parasites
My relatives disguised
Shared no more feelings
To avoid grieving
Yes I did

PreChorus:
But in my fortress behind a wall
When I thought everything´s in control
I was convinced I was safe
Didn´t see a water
Leaking from the most
Unexpected way

Chorus:
It´s the last drop´s fall – a bowl has overflown
It´s the last drop´s fall – in a sea of charge
It´s the last drop´s fall – the most precious let me down
It´s the last drop´s fall – from familiar side

I´m not gonna be the same
Never ever more
Nothing´s gonna be the same
Never ever more
I´m not gonna be the same
Never ever more
No one I can trust again
Now I know for sure

PreChorus:
In my fortress behind the wall
Putting trust in you I´ve made a fault
I stopped to be on alert
And sharp razor tongue
Was digging in my wall
With spitting poison words

Chorus:
It´s the last drop´s fall – a bowl has overflown
It´s the last drop´s fall – in a sea of charge
It´s the last drop´s fall – the most precious let me down
It´s the last drop´s fall – from familiar side

Chorus:
It was the last drop´s fall – to break down my rotten wall
It was the last drop´s fall – in a sea of lies
It was the last drop´s fall – brick by brick they´re falling down
It was the last drop´s fall – disguisting surprise
From familiar side
It was the last drop´s fall

The wall my fortress
My shelter from a cruel world outside
Has been broken and sunk
By the most precious from inside
I have to go
Now I´m leaving all behind…
 
Old 2011-08-26, 07:53
Hugozhor
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Leaving all behind (2 of trilogy)

Now I´m leaving all behind
Too long I´ve been drowning in a sea of your orders and dictates
Now I´m leaving all behind
Too long I´ve been waiting for a rising sea of pain to fade away
Now I´m leaving all behind
Too long I´ve been trying to swim in your stream and just obey
Now I´m leaving all behind
Too long I´ve been pretending that all your world was alright for my taste

But it was still…not enough for you
You wanted to
Have total control
Of my views
My thoughts
And myself

But it was still…not enough for you
You wanted to
Have me just like a pawn
To nod your truth
Your thoughts
And yourself

But you´ve crossed the line
You overflowed the bowl of my patience
With the last drop´s fall
My anger burst out from all the held-back tension

Chorus:
Now I´m leaving all behind
Set me free for the first time
Rising from the sea of friction
Heading for a new horizon…of my own…
 
Old 2011-08-27, 13:59
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New horizon of my own (3 of trilogy)

Many upsets were outbroken
They solved nothing at all
Many solving words were spoken
But beaten by ego

PreChorus:
Why talking as someone who is
Never meant to be heard
The only left solution is
Leaving all behind

Chorus:
New horizon of my own
Is my destination
In conformity of my thoughts
In a world of my conviction

New horizon of my own
No selfish alibies
In conformity of my thoughts
Peace of mind
I will find

Many tries to set compromise
They all failed one by one
Many tries to open your mind
Ruled by ego´s pride

PreChorus:
Why talking to someone who thinks
Only his truth is right
The only left solution is
Leaving all behind

Chorus:
New horizon of my own
Is my destination
In conformity of my thoughts
In a world of my conviction

New horizon of my own
No selfish alibies
In conformity of my thoughts
Peace of mind
I will find
 
Old 2011-08-28, 13:50
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Dark emptiness of black darkness

Nothingness is overwhelming me
Piece by piece
I can feel as it´s pushing me
To my knees
Black darkness is entering through me
Black by black
Human evil sucking my life out
No way back

To nowhere I am disappearing
On my way
All my heart´s still heavy bleeding
Day by day
Dark black hole is a place where once
Was my soul
Killing pain is eating my sick brain
To the core

PreChorus:
As I´m drowning in my lake of tears
You are just pulling me deeper
As I´m shaking with all my fears
Another strike…is ready to complete…my disaster

Chorus:
Living dead…in my head
No emotions…devastation
No feelings…existing
Just ruin…my doing
Soul is burnt…no return
Empty shell…is myself
 
Old 2011-08-29, 08:06
Hugozhor
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To live again

Give me one more chance
To rearange
My life

Do it all again
Without hate and pain
Of strife

Erase memories
That are hunting me
From past

Change what I have done
Turn to right the wrong
At last

PreChorus:
Oh God give me one more try
To start it all again
From bad mistakes I´ve learned
How to live my life in better way

Chorus:
I´m going to regret
For what could be my life
My head in shaking hands
Falling tears out of my eyes
Lord help me with what I have done
And give me one more chance…to live again

Realize who´s right
Who stands by my side
To see

Not to do something
Fix my shortcomings
In me

PreChorus:
Oh God give me one more try
To start it all again
From bad mistakes I´ve learned
How to live my life in better way

Chorus:
I´m going to regret
For what could be my life
My head in shaking hands
Falling tears out of my eyes
Lord help me with what I have done
And give me one more chance…to live again

Chorus:
I´m not gonna regret
For what could be my life
No head in shaking hands
No falling tears out of my eyes
Stand proudly for what I have done
Everyday is a chance…to live again!
 
Old 2011-08-30, 08:10
Hugozhor
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Fireraiser (Keep on searching)

Fireraiser (in 5 parts)


I. Keep on searching

Chorus:
Keep on searching my love
Keep on searching for me
In remains of ashes
Keep on searching my love
Keep on searching for me
In remains of ashes
Keep on searching my love
To see what´s set me free
In remains of ashes

Spoken:
„As always it is
A love is a cause
Of every tragedy in life…“


You were my first love
And the last who´d know
I was so in love with you

Careful when we´re dating
Hidden was my secret
I hoped you´d never find I fool

Chorus:
Keep on searching my love
Keep on searching for me
In remains of ashes
Keep on searching my love
Keep on searching for me
In remains of ashes
Keep on searching my love
To see what´s set me free
In remains of ashes


II. The curse

When making love was
Just before us both
Excited like never before

You´re touching me and
Kissing me then
I was getting hot to the core

Unwary was I
A flame on my palm
Appeared and I didn´t notice

You started to shout
She: „Oh my God watch out!“
„There´s a fire on your hand can´t you see?!“

She:
Why haven´t you told me?
We can control it
You´ve been just out of your hot mind“

He:
„This curse upon my soul
Did let me lose control
And then it will take you tonight“

She:
„Give us one more chance
And we can adapt
To this strange thing of your own“

He:
„No you will never live
With monster like me
I´m leaving you forevermore!“


III. Alone with a heart of stone

I used to live alone
Never dared to get know
Another girl to scare her like you

One day in my sight
With another guy
Going to his house I saw you


IV. Vengeance

My anger was rising in me
Vengeance would be so sweet
„What´s the different between me and him?!
He will pay with my burning!!“

Chorus 2:
I´m Fireraiser – on stairs from hell I´m coming
Fireraiser – flame by flame I am burning
Call it obsession
Danger deviation
Call it what you like
But don´t get in my sight
Or you will die…by Fireraiser!

Quickly I got myself to his house
With red flames on my palms
Set the goddamned house on fire
Frying him alive was my desire

Then I saw her face
Innocent disgrace crying:
She:
„Where have you been all the time
I tried to help you somehow
But you disappeared?!“


V. Ashes to ashes

So I got her out (from the burning house)
And saved him too (from almost fallen house)
Then turned myself and went (back to burning house)
To join my only love (fire burning fire)
And become ashes (ashes to ashes)
With the last words on my lips (last words on his lips)
Keep on searching my love…

Chorus:
Keep on searching my love
Keep on searching for me
In remains of ashes
Keep on searching my love
Keep on searching for me
In remains of ashes
Keep on searching my love
To see what´s set me free
In remains of ashes
 
Old 2011-08-31, 15:06
Hugozhor
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Parody of life

What is this I can´t believe my eyes
This is hell not a paradise
People work all day to stay alive
Even at work they do not like

At school we are taught how to think
Instead of teaching to learn to think
There´s no money politicians say
They know where all taxes fade away

Spend millions to the stars to fly
Meanwhile jobless trying to survive
National lies start a new conflict
The only point´s to increase profit

General truth written in the press
Following it lead you to success
A prisoner of majority
Or you will die in madhouse free

PreChorus:
We all used to lies
This is God´s order
We´ll never realize
We´ve been concerned in

Chorus:
Parody of life – we are living in
Parody of life – neverending wheel of insanity
Parody of life – smiling with a grin
Parody of life – who will see through absurdity?
 
Old 2011-09-01, 08:40
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Stronger than me

It comes to me slowly
First I can control myself
Then it starts to show me
Hell is rising in my shell

PreChorus:
Without warning it´s here
My emotions get clear
I taste a pressure
I´m out of my mind
Something that has to come out

Chorus:
Every night
And every day
I can´t resist it´s stronger than me
Lose my pride
When it´s over
I can´t stand it it´s stronger than me

I will do anything
To satisfy my immoral need
No matter what price is
No matter how I will bleed

PreChorus:
Without warning it´s here
My emotions get clear
I taste a pressure
I´m out of my mind
Something that has to come out

Chorus:
Every night
And every day
I can´t resist it´s stronger than me
Lose my pride
When it´s over
I can´t stand it it´s stronger than me

I can´t fight alone the loving damnation in me!
Is there someone to make it through and help me?!

PreChorus:
Now I know it is here
I have lost all my fear
I want now pleasure
It´s trapped me tight!

Chorus:
Every night
And every day
I can´t resist it´s stronger than me
Lose my pride
When it´s over
I can´t stand it it´s stronger than me
 
Old 2011-09-02, 08:50
Hugozhor
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Heaven or Hell

There are just two places to come
When you are leaving and you´re gone
Heaven is for all god slavers
And Hell is for evil sinners
It´s been and it´s going to be…for you and me

PreChorus:
It´s easy to believe something
That´s nice fairytale
It must be really amazing
To the other side to sail

Chorus:
Heaven or Hell - there is no place when we are leaving
Heaven or Hell - it´s a make of our thoughts
Heaven or Hell - on our Earth we are creating
Heaven or Hell - it´s our choice

Heaven or Hell is here and now
Not up above or down below
Which an empire is ruling
It depends on our doing
There are just devils and angels…but among us

PreChorus:
Stop thinking of life after death
Wake up from dreaming
We can create Heaven on Earth
During our living

Chorus:
Heaven or Hell - there is no place when we are leaving
Heaven or Hell - it´s a make of our thoughts
Heaven or Hell - on our Earth we are creating
Heaven or Hell - it´s our choice

Believe me it´s not a lie
As it is you´re gonna die

Have a nice afterlife in Heaven or Hell
 
Old 2011-09-03, 14:40
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My rude attitude

Now I don´t care what people say
About a way of my life
I was trying to live by their rules
But they have brought me to fight

I´m tired of all f*cking assholes
Who are convinced they are right
I can´t stand more motherf*ckers
Who promise me paradise

PreChorus:
Don´t show me your face!
The thing I want to hit
I´m not the right one
who´s eating your sh*t!

Chorus:
This is my life I´ll enjoy it well
No servant in heaven but king in hell
Live for today not afraid of fall
I´ll do what I like and f*ck ´em all!

You´re trying to change my way of life
About you think it´s wrong
Don´t you see frustration in me
That overwhelming me so strong

PreChorus:
Don´t show me your face!
The thing I want to hit
I´m not the right one
who´s eating your sh*t!
Your bloody sh*t!!

Chorus:
This is my life I´ll enjoy it well
No servant in heaven but king in hell
Live for today not afraid of fall
I´ll do what I like and f*ck ´em all!

I don´t hear your bloody words
That are telling me to stop
I´m gonna do what I like to do
And make it up to the top

PreChorus:
Don´t show me your face!
The thing I want to hit
I´m not the right one
who´s eating your sh*t!
Your f*cking sh*t!!!

Chorus:
This is my life I´ll enjoy it well
No servant in heaven but king in hell
Live for today not afraid of fall
I´ll do what I like and f*ck ´em all!
 
Old 2011-09-04, 18:43
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When the idol falls

Since I was born he´s been my idol
I have worshiped him he´s my model
He´s taught me all he´s the king
I have imitated all his doing

PreChorus:
Take care – you are growing up
Beware – now it´s time you are going to see
Danger doubts – are eating your mind
No way out – to avoid knowing all reality

Chorus:
When the idol falls – I don´t want to believe
When the idol falls – I am close to desperation
When the idol falls - it´s too great blow for me
When the idol falls – now where can I find salvation?

Adulting now I realize
My truth contains a part of lies
He´s not as perfect as he seems
Have I lived all the time only in dreams?

PreChorus:
Take care – you are growing up
Beware – now it´s time you are going to see
Danger doubts – are eating your mind
No way out – to avoid knowing all reality

Chorus:
When the idol falls – I don´t want to believe
When the idol falls – I am close to desperation
When the idol falls - it´s too great blow for me
When the idol falls – now where can I find salvation?

He is no king he´s a man like me
But he´s honesty as he can be
And in spite of his shortcomings
Like him I still want to be

PreChorus:
Take care – you are growing up
Beware – now it´s time you are going to see
Danger doubts – are eating your mind
No way out – to avoid knowing all reality

Chorus:
When the idol falls – I don´t want to believe
When the idol falls – I am close to desperation
When the idol falls - it´s too great blow for me
When the idol falls – now where can I find salvation?
 
Old 2011-09-05, 07:42
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Words

I´m sitting here for ten minutes
It seems to me like thousand years
Your words flowing like waterfall
Cover my ears and ready for a role

Noddle my head with agreeing
Like fascinated I´m looking
My mind starting to fly away
To stand it with my patience today

PreChorus:
Words words words – but no deeds
Words words words – my ears bleed
From hearing you talking on and on
With no break you carry on

If words were made to understand
Why communications break again
Why don´t we use them in right way
But to hurt and lie we abuse them

With power of big words so great
On TV they manipulate
people´s minds changed by their speech
even if they don´t practice what they preach

PreChorus:
Words words words – but no deeds
Words words words – my ears bleed
From hearing you talking on and on
With no break you carry on

Chorus:
Words and words - that are hollow
Words and words – we all follow
Words and words – tell us nothing
Words and words – keep on confusing

Talking of love justice and peace
Proudly with passion but no deeds
Words should find a way to the truth
But it´s in feelings not in words „I love you“

Chorus:
Words and words - that are hollow
Words and words – we all follow
Words and words – tell us nothing
Words and words – keep on confusing

„Are you listening to what I´m telling you?!“

„Excuse me I have to go“
 
Old 2011-09-06, 17:56
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This place (is the right place to be the last)

This place
Is so quiet and peaciful
Without people they can only hurt

This grass
Is so green and beatiful
Without machines polluting our world

This plain
Is so dark covered with night
Without lasers looking for preys

This space
Is so tender full of delight
The delight that leads to railway

PreChorus:
Distant sound from far away
Has fallen on my ear

This place
Is so quiet and peaciful
Without people they can only hurt

This grass
Is so green and beatiful
Without machines polluting our world

This plain
Is so dark covered with night
Without lasers looking for preys

This space
Is so tender full of delight
The delight that leads to railway

PreChorus:
Tender shiver from railway
is drawing to me here

Chorus:
This place
Is going to end my past
This place
Is the right place to be the last
 
Old 2011-09-07, 19:53
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Another chapter / No more fear

Another chapter (Intro)

I´m on a top of the hill
And there is no turning back
I will go down and low
If I go way straight ahead

There is a border now I finally see
No advice of elder can change my destiny
This is the end of one season of my past
Another chapter´s begun but in happiness it won´t last


No more fear

I am not afraid of death
Death is scared to death of me
I´ve looked to its eyes
Been so close to it

I have gained a courage
A knowledge I have never had
A strength to carry on
And not to be dead…yet

Chorus:
If you were ready to pass away
And you returned here to stay
Now you´re living everyday
Like it´s your dying day

No trouble can be so big
To drive me almost insane
No poison speech of man
Can cause me pain

I have found a protection
From world that´s dehumanized
Best days are gone
I have realized

Chorus:
You have no fear of future
Of people turning to creatures
´cos you can do it whenever
To leave this world forever
 
Old 2011-09-08, 21:16
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Neverending search

One day falling on your back
Other day you´re rising step by step
A meaning of life you have none
After the rain there´s always the sun

PreChorus:
Thoughts of give in of surrender
All this world to leave
Must be replaced with what you´ve found
Something you believe

Chorus:
Find something to believe – a strength to carry on
It will throw away all grief – that is pulling you down
Find something to believe – the sun will shine again
Its rays will burn all grief – hapiness without a pain
Find something to believe

When all your dreams went away
Don´t stop searching for reasons to stay
Don´t stop to go carry on
Find something to believe to push you on

PreChorus:
Thoughts of give in of surrender
All this world to leave
Must be replaced with what you´ve found
Something you believe

Chorus:
Find something to believe – a strength to carry on
It will throw away all grief – that is pulling you down
Find something to believe – the sun will shine again
Its rays will burn all grief – hapiness without a pain
Find something to believe

Neverending search - must go on
Neverending search - carry on
Neverending search - must go on
Neverending search - carry on carry on
Forever
And ever
Go on
On and on
 
Old 2011-09-09, 20:13
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On a mission

Chorus:
I´m on a mission – I must carry on
I´m on a mission – many things to be done…one by one
I´m on a mission – fullfill my setting goals
I´m on a mission – by deeds I will be known…when I´ll be gone

What is it all about
Ask myself everyday
Before I wake up?

Is it all worth for it
All suffering on my way
Isn´t better to stop?

Chorus:
I´m on a mission – I must carry on
I´m on a mission – many things to be done…one by one
I´m on a mission – fullfill my setting goals
I´m on a mission – by deeds I will be known…when I´ll be gone

This whole world is not fit
For me to living in
Life fuel dissapears

Wanna live peaceful life
Not running scared and nor
Live in constant fear

PreChorus:
If to be young means
To learn to live I´ve realized
Then to be old means
To learn to die

Chorus:
I´m on a mission – I must carry on
I´m on a mission – many things to be done…one by one
I´m on a mission – fullfill my setting goals
I´m on a mission – by deeds I will be known…when I´ll be gone

Sinking in my sorrows
Responsibility
Was covered with tears

Part of my time I owe
To them who helped me live
Easier life here

PreChorus:
If to be young means
To learn to live I´ve realized
Then to be old means
To learn to die

Chorus:
I´m on a mission – I must carry on
I´m on a mission – many things to be done…one by one
I´m on a mission – fullfill my setting goals
I´m on a mission – by deeds I will be known…when I´ll be gone
 
Old 2011-09-10, 20:16
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Lord of eternity

See your celebration
Of eighty years living
See your faking smiles
Your shaking lips lying

Don´t believe in your words
Wanna live one more your life
That life is so beatiful
All you have lived you liked

Be true to yourself
How much time have you wasted
To fullfill what human should
Half time´s adequated

I´m too young to die
Too old to live
I´m too proud to cry
Too tired to give

I´m here
At the end
Of my path

Chorus:
Lord of eternity – give me few more years to live
Lord of eternity – that´s all I want from life
Lord of eternity – almost fullfilled my destiny
Lord of eternity – a little bit more of my time

Life can be so short
Everything´s relative
Life can be so long
It´s your right not a gift

I´m too young to die
Too old to live
I´m too proud to cry
Too tired to give

I´m here
At the end
Of my path

Chorus:
Lord of eternity – give me few more years to live
Lord of eternity – that´s all I want from life
Lord of eternity – almost fullfilled my destiny
Lord of eternity – a little bit more of my time
 
Old 2011-09-11, 12:58
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Never see me cry

When you´re looking to my eyes
You see no disguise
My pretending seems so real
Never show what I feel
I´m laughing at problems
Careless for future mess
Playing my role of happy man

Merciless world learnt me
This untrue acting
In my refuge I can
Cope with my feelings
Never share them outside
They are so fragile
Would be broken by painspreading men

PreChorus:
I know what you want
To see me in
A state of crying man
Close to givin´ in
But you´ll never win!

Chorus:
Out of my refuge with smile on my face (you´ll never recognize)
Always in good mood no sorrows on my way
Never give you chance to see my real side (my masguerade is tight)
To enjoy my sadness never see me cry

PreChorus:
I know what you try
To break my defense
Of my naked feelings
To squeeze them in your hands
But your fight´s useless!

Chorus:
Out of my refuge with smile on my face (you´ll never recognize)
Always in good mood no sorrows on my way
Never give you chance to see my real side (my masguerade is tight)
To enjoy my sadness never see me cry

Never see me cry – my emotions inside
Never see me cry – my feelings inside
Never see me cry
 
Old 2011-09-13, 20:38
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Who´s behind the wire fence?

Every morning when I´m heading
To face another day
I am leaving my sanity
And sense at home to stay

Experiences have taught me
This madness I can´t fight
More it´s spreading over the land
Senselessness beats my mind

PreChorus:
No senses and no reasons no
In people´s acting nowadays
No skills and no real care
For our doing if it´s ok.

Everyday I have to work with
Decisions from above
That are made incontinently
And make more loss than behalf

Everyday I have to deal with
Laws and regulations made by
People who are not connected
To reality we are

PreChorus:
I can´t stand it anymore
To hold my mind away of sense
Behind madness I´ve closed the door
And go behind the wire fence

Chorus:
I´m standing here in mid-way of my walk
After a lunch I´m out of my room number ten
When I got here my fear fell off my back
I´m saved from all fools who´re behind the wire fence

Every night I have to listen
To news of nonsenses
Bad politicians´ decisions
Wasting our taxes

PreChorus:
I can´t stand it anymore
To hold my mind away of sense
Behind madness I´ve closed the door
And go behind the wire fence

Chorus:
I´m standing here in mid-way of my walk
After a lunch I´m out of my room number ten
When I got here my fear fell off my back
I´m saved from all fools who´re behind the wire fence
 
Old 2011-09-14, 09:08
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Careless mind

I don´t care about this world anymore
I live in my own fantasy
I´m leaving this place behind the door
Heading for setting me free

PreChorus:
Free from all sorrows
Nevergrowing boy
It´s my final destination
Free from tomorrows
Only pleasure and joy
Where will lead my transformation

Chorus:
Careless mind – forever free
Careless mind – free from all bad
Careless mind – bright clarity
Careless mind – in my head

My body will be a prisoner of
This crazy place for all my life
But my mind is ready to go
To find its own paradise

PreChorus:
Free from all sorrows
Nevergrowing boy
It´s my final destination
Free from tomorrows
Only pleasure and joy
Where will lead my transformation

Chorus:
Careless mind – forever free
Careless mind – free from all bad
Careless mind – bright clarity
Careless mind – in my head
 
Old 2011-09-15, 08:10
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Unerasing smile

You can scream so high
And put the blame on me
With your red turning face
Try to get me…on my knees

You can rise the load
On my bending shoulders
You can tell me lies
And hurt me with your words

Your tries to get me are in vain
Can´t ever infect my mind
My mind is flying away
You´re never gonna erase my smile
You´re never gonna erase my smile
You´re never gonna…erase my smile

No you´re never…ever…gonna erase my smile
Even if I die
You´re never gonna erase my smile
My f*cking smile!
Smile!
Smile!!
Smile!!!
 
Old 2011-09-16, 09:11
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The price (you want me to pay)

Behind your smiles your beatiful scent
Behind your words „I love you“
Behind your touches of excitement
Is an aim to overrule

Behind your motions and sweet lies
„You are my sun in the haze“
Behind your make up and blue eyes
There´s something bad in your gaze

All you want – is to own me like a thing
All you need – is to decide about everything
Command by command
You´re unveiling your iron hand

Chorus:
The price you want me to pay is much too high for me
A sacrifice without the rights you´ve slain isn´t worth to be
The more I give much more you take never giving back
All my tries of equality you never respect
The price you want me to pay
The price you want me to pay is much too high for me

In your web - I´m caught just like a fly
All you do – is to eliminate my rights
Thread by thread
You´re tightening a rope round my neck

Chorus:
The price you want me to pay is much too high for me
A sacrifice without the rights you´ve slain isn´t worth to be
The more I give much more you take never giving back
All my tries of equality you never respect
The price you want me to pay
The price you want me to pay is much too high for me

„The inner voice had warned me
But my blood was boiling down
I´d have done almost everything for you
But the price is much too high
Much too high“

Sick of your rules
I´ve broken your web and leaving you

Chorus:
The price you want me to pay is much too high for me
A sacrifice without the rights you´ve slain isn´t worth to be
The more I give much more you take never giving back
All my tries of equality you never respect
The price you want me to pay
The price you want me to pay is much too high for me
 
Old 2011-09-17, 14:27
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Parasite

„I knew that to my thirty
I will have got my baby“
When I heard you´re telling
Then I realized everything

PreChorus:
No truth no emotions and no feelings
Is your life filling with (when you have to suck then just a golden c*ck)
Use and abuse all human beings
To get what you want to win (when you have to suck then just a golden c*ck)

Chorus:
Parasite – raping with your fingernails
Parasite – smiling with an angel face
Parasite – answering no begging please
Parasite – bleeding victims at your knees

Direct setting future plan
You´re filling again and again
With your body and your mouth
To get to the golden house

Future for my kids your why
To make your heart speak turn down
Famous example for young chicks
Who wants to know where their luck is

PreChorus:
No truth no emotions and no feelings
Is your life filling with (when you have to suck then just a golden c*ck)
Use and abuse all human beings
To get what you want to win (when you have to suck then just a golden c*ck)

Chorus:
Parasite – raping with your fingernails
Parasite – smiling with an angel face
Parasite – answering no begging please
Parasite – dying victims at your feet

When you have to suck
Then just a golden c*ck
 
Old 2011-09-18, 18:42
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I´m healed

Honest I have been trying to be
Set my true feelings free
Reach naturally my aims

Ordinary decent behaviour
Isn´t required at all
And taken for a shame

PreChorus:
You made me do it
I had no other opportunity
To satisfied my needs
You forced me

I was opened to play a false role
In spite of my bleeding soul
No bad I realized

Losing your chance still wait for your prince
Of never coming true dreams
The fault was on your side

Trust no one is the rule I have learned
From this ungratefull world
No more disapointments

PreChorus:
You made me do it
I had no other opportunity
To satisfied my needs
You forced me

Chorus:
Now I´m healed of romance
It all was just my fool dance
Now I´m cured of love season
I was the object of filthy treason
I am healed of sweet dreams
Rough reality healed me
I am cured of illusions
Dreamer got lost in confusion
I am healed
 
Old 2011-09-19, 19:02
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I don´t believe in love

Fool again!

Chorus:
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love anymore! Oh no!

You are looking like an angel
Want to see no signs of danger
Your beauty´s overwhelming me
Do anything what you please

You´re talking about a voice of heart
As you´re checking my credit cards
Your beauty and my trust you use
To catch me tight and abuse

PreChorus:
Another try
With the same rule
In the end
I´m just a fool…fool again!

Chorus:
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love anymore! Oh no!

As you´re touching me so softly
I don´t notice you are ready
To tear my emotions apart
And leave me before another start

PreChorus:
Another try
With the same rule
In the end
I´m just a fool…fool again!

Chorus:
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love
I don´t believe in love anymore! Oh no!
 
Old 2011-09-19, 21:00
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But do you believe in love after love (after love after lover after love)?!
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Old 2011-09-19, 23:08
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Only with you, Dyl'.

"And leave me before another start" just didn't seem to make sense. It fits the meter, but not a feasible part of a sentence.
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Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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Old 2011-09-19, 23:14
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The chorus had a lot of intensity to it. The rest is a little fragmented. I think there's a typo in "No bad I realized."

And these lines don't flow well either thought-wise.
"Losing your chance still wait for your prince
Of never coming true dreams"

If you can do something with those lines it won't be a bad piece.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2011-09-20, 01:27
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Quote:
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But do you believe in love after love (after love after lover after love)?!
Show the man some respect :\

To be honest, from reading this work, I can feel something inside me say that I really don't think you're strong enough, no. Was this piece inspired by your first love? Because you know what they say, the first cut is the deepest (and baby I know). If it was your first love you shouldn't give up on the idea so quickly, turn the page and love again, oh yeah.

I can also tell from reading this piece that this woman isn't representative of all women, she was clearly a cunt. You should have kicked her to the curb and told her "no, I don't want no scrubs".
 
Old 2011-09-20, 22:13
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Quote:
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The chorus had a lot of intensity to it. The rest is a little fragmented. I think there's a typo in "No bad I realized."


I mean "No wrong I realized", like "I didn´t realize something was wrong or bad"

Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
And these lines don't flow well either thought-wise.
"Losing your chance still wait for your prince
Of never coming true dreams"


It´s guite difficult vocal lines in these verses.

Thank you for your comment
 
Old 2011-09-20, 22:15
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But do you believe in love after love (after love after lover after love)?!


Of course. It was my first love so it reflects my feelings that time. It doesn´t mean I don´t believe in love forevermore
 
Old 2011-09-20, 22:21
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Only with you, Dyl'.

"And leave me before another start" just didn't seem to make sense. It fits the meter, but not a feasible part of a sentence.


It means: She leaves me to get to know another girl (to start another try to get to know another girl)
 
Old 2011-09-20, 22:24
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Originally Posted by Paddy
Show the man some respect :\

To be honest, from reading this work, I can feel something inside me say that I really don't think you're strong enough, no. Was this piece inspired by your first love? Because you know what they say, the first cut is the deepest (and baby I know). If it was your first love you shouldn't give up on the idea so quickly, turn the page and love again, oh yeah.

I can also tell from reading this piece that this woman isn't representative of all women, she was clearly a cunt. You should have kicked her to the curb and told her "no, I don't want no scrubs".


Of course. It was my first love so it reflects my feelings that time. It doesn´t mean I don´t believe in love forevermore

You´re right she was a cunt.
 
Old 2011-09-20, 22:28
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A while in dreamland

No this feeling is rising up again
Thoughts of life meaning and frustration cause me pain
I know a way out to throw it all away
I know a place where dreams come true everyday

PreChorus:
Two fallen angels on their path
Lined with blood and fire
We are not afraid of a death
Obey just lust and desire

Met for the first time by little happenchance
You showed me a way to dreamland with your hands
Your body and your mouth a gate out of misery
We are erupting as one in exctasy

PreChorus:
We don´t really care what´s been saying
That is wrong or is right
We just listen to our instincts
True feelings burn inside

Chorus:
A while in dreamland – I have been
A while in dreamland – never seen
A while in dreamland

PreChorus:
I wish this moment could last
Forever and ever
You´re the only one you´re the best
To make me cry and shiver

Chorus:
A while in dreamland – I have been
A while in dreamland – never seen
A while in dreamland
 
Old 2011-09-21, 08:58
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The enemy within

You can´t hear me
You can´t see me
You can´t touch me
But you can feel me

Without warning something´s growing
Watch out
Danger is here reasons to fear
No doubt

Pay for your sin you´re my victim
To hurt
Invisible invincible
In my world

Took my chances you´re defenceless
Prey
Getting worse no remorse
From my pain

Chorus:
The enemy within - I´m going to win
The enemy inside – eating you alive

Temptation and lust
Stronger than everything else
A new kind of pleasure
Was way out of emptines

You stepped over the line
Didn´t care of warning
Blinded by ecstacy
Didn´t see danger coming

Chorus:
The enemy within - I´m going to win
The enemy inside – eating you alive

You didn´t think about
It could be just you
After first signs
You realized the truth

Stains of damnation
On your white pale skin
Your body´s on fire
I´m going to win

Chorus:
The enemy within - I´m going to win
The enemy inside – eating you alive

Chorus:
The enemy within – closer to the end
The enemy inside - you´re going to die
 
Old 2011-09-22, 10:28
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Love

Love (Intro)

Love – more pain than pleasure
Love – more tool than feeling
Love – more chain than treasure
Love – more fool who´s believing in
Love


Love

Love is an enemy
Love is the old killer
Love is not blind
Love is a cannibal…with pure sharp sight

Love is like an insect
That keeps being hungry
Hungry for friendship
Eats friendship and don´t worry…if pain strikes

PreChorus:
We thought that nothing could
Tear apart our friendship
Maybe love´s making you blind
Not to see our crumbling ship

Love is a pure feeling
Or just a tool to reign
Love brings pleasure
Love as well can bring pain…with a smiling face

Love can make you happy
If you know how to use
Love´s also a weapon
That can be abused…to destructive aims

PreChorus:
We thought that nothing could
Tear apart our friendship
Maybe love´s making you blind
Not to see our crumbling ship

Chorus:
You have been taking my friends one by one
So don´t be surprised
That I´m scared to…get you closer to my mind

Now you´re reaching out for my best friend
That I´ve ever had
So I´m fighting to…hold the same place in his head

PreChorus:
We thought that nothing could
Tear apart our friendship
Maybe love´s making you blind
Not to see our crumbling ship

Chorus:
You have been taking my friends one by one
So don´t be surprised
That I´m scared to…get you closer to my mind

Now you´re reaching out for my best friend
That I´ve ever had
So I´m losing to…hold the same place in his head
 
Old 2011-09-23, 12:40
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Reasons to laugh (Reasons to hate part II.)

Somebody´s speaking
Of you brings me memories
How you´re doing
Brings a smile on my lips

Screams of your baby
A gift you brought from outland
Makes me think
If your life is in your hands

PreChorus:
Looking for
Noble father
You became
Unmarried mother

Chorus:
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh at our love
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh at your stuff

When we were dating
To surprise others you used
The biggest surprise
Has been waiting for you! Ha Ha

I was there to show
You some mistakes on your way
Maybe you´re satisfied
Not my business anyway

PreChorus:
Summary
Of this news
A saying
Of blonds is true

Chorus:
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh at our love
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh
You give me reasons to laugh at your stuff

Tears falling
From laughing
 
Old 2011-10-04, 06:06
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In a blink of an eye

Journey through the night
Your destination´s far away
Snow falls heavily
But at home you can´t stay

It´s you job your bread
That´s feeding you for so long time
Jobless you can´t be
Your family would die

PreChorus:
As you´re looking to the eyes of a death
Your hands are shaking
Like tree in a wind
This moment is taking your last breath
Now who decides
´bout your life and your end?

Your eyes hurt you much
Due to gazing through a white night
Tiredness and deep sleep
Try to overrule you tight

Driving for six hours
Death creeping around you
Stop now or who´ll die
Won´t be your family but you!

PreChorus:
As you´re looking to the eyes of a death
Your hands are shaking
Like tree in a wind
This moment is taking your last breath
Now who decides
´bout your life and your end?

Chorus:
In a blink of an eye
You can die – or survive
Just one right move – and you are saved
Just one wrong move – and you´re in grave
When deadly fate strikes
In a blink of an eye!
 
Old 2011-10-05, 05:23
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Modern slavery

Take your money back
I´ve had no interest in your job
In your golden cage
You controlled me like a cop

PreChorus:
Another victim I´m not gonna be
I´ve got a strength to let it be and leave
Enough I am brave
Not to be your slave…in

Chorus:
Modern slavery – nothing less and nothing more
Modern slavery - I´m not your wh*re
Modern slavery – who you are now I see
Through instant clarity – modern slavery

Your expensive suit
Cannot cover your dirty hands
There is no such price
That could buy my clear conscience

PreChorus:
Another victim I´m not gonna be
I´ve got a strength to let it be and leave
Enough I am brave
Not to be your slave…in

Chorus:
Modern slavery – nothing less and nothing more
Modern slavery - I´m not your wh*re
Modern slavery – who you are now I see
Through instant clarity – modern slavery

What have you done to
My work I´m doing with my heart
You´ve corrupted all
Because of your f*cking charts

You as*hole!
Spartacus waits!!

PreChorus:
Another victim I´m not gonna be
I´ve got a strength to let it be and leave
Enough I am brave
Not to be your slave…in

Chorus:
Modern slavery – nothing less and nothing more
Modern slavery - I´m not your wh*re
Modern slavery – who you are now I see
Through instant clarity – modern slavery

Chorus
Modern slavery – nothing less and nothing more
Modern slavery - I´m not your wh*re
Modern slavery – who you are now I see
Through instant clarity – modern slavery

Modern slavery – nevermore
Modern slavery - ´till another wh*re!
 
Old 2011-10-06, 04:18
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On the road again

On the road again
It´s been a long time of waiting
Preparation and pain

Destination´s set
We are closer now to our dreams
That are worth for all strain

PreChorus:
We roam anywhere we want
And whenever we please
Over cliffs and mountains
And sailing across the seas

Chorus:
Ride like the wind – free like eagles in the sky
Ride like the wind – all sorrows just have died
Ride like the wind – gonna make our dreams come true
Ride like the wind – follow our hearts in me and you
On the road again
Ride like the wind

No one can stop us
The road´s the only one we must obey
With wind in our hairs

Our minds are troubles
We feel as freedom takes the shape
And there´s nothing to care
If you dare
To break through the wall of routine

PreChorus:
We roam anywhere we want
And whenever we please
Over cliffs and mountains
And sailing across the seas

Chorus:
Ride like the wind – free like eagles in the sky
Ride like the wind – all sorrows just have died
Ride like the wind – gonna make our dreams come true
Ride like the wind – follow our hearts in me and you
On the road again
Ride like the wind
 
Old 2011-10-07, 04:17
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Like to fly

So hollow is the entertainment you all enjoy
With untrue feelings and money-making aims
So empty is your laughing at a dull decoy
That doesn´t make you think about or speculate

PreChorus:
No brain no pain
Eat what is served and what is in
Use another brain
Just swim on in mainstream

(It´s your choice) choice you´ve made a long time ago progress slowly perish
Only acceptor of fading brainless fun
(Follow the voice) voice of majority ´cos you´re afraid of banish
Be coward but don´t critize the other ones

PreChorus:
No brain no pain
Eat what is served and what is in
Use another brain
Just swim on in mainstream

Chorus:
I like to fly higher and higher
No more disguise no belief in liars
I like to fly with my soul on fire
No more deny my tempting desire

I like to fly higher and higher
One more use of brain to feel in my head fire
I like to fly with my soul on fire
One more go astray of mainstream of liars
 
Old 2011-10-08, 05:09
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Matrix

Matrix (in 7 parts)


I. Programme

Sitting in my office
The same yesterday´s today
Everything seems solid
No surprise on my way

Delivered cell phone´s ringing
Unknown voice is warning me
„Danger in your way coming
Stand up and you will see“

Three men coming
In suits and black glasses
I see them running
I am what their aim is

I have to run
Down a scaffold through window
I´m not the one
No chosen hero for the world

Why have they come?
If because of my hacking crimes
But they have come
To change all my life
And maybe all entire world!

II. The truth

Take red pill and you´re gonna know
True reality
Take blue one and you´re gonna stay
Things slave in dreams
I´ll take red!

The world around you is a programme
Your eyes used to see
But behind your nerves connections
There´s rough reality
It´s too mad!

Chorus:
Matrix – simulates
Everything you see is just a fake
Matrix – depends on you
If you want to live in fake or true

I have thought you wouldn´t believe
So now take a ride
I´ll unplug you from the Matrix
To know what´s behind
Ride on!

Chorus:
Matrix – simulates
Everything you see is just a fake
Matrix – depends on you
If you want to live in fake or true

III. Rough reality

I don´t want to believe what my eyes have to see
Under neverending steel grey sky
There are human embryos connecting to machines
To feed them with their energy
This is a real enslaved world where Matrix with its tricks
Fooling people not to realize their slavery! No!

IV. Zion

Zion – the last free city
Is waiting for its saviour and its son
The prophecy said about a man
With a miracle behaviour…you´re the chosen one!!

V. The Oracle

The Oracle:
„I am the Oracle
And I may be a clairvoyant
And I may forsee a future
I can answer your questions
That will bring other questions anyway…
I just can show you a way
But know how is in you my son“


Chorus:
Matrix – simulates
Everything you see is just a fake
Matrix – depends on you
If you want to live in fake or true

VI. Revolution

The choice is the key
The fear of all machines
No purpose no programme
Just do what I please

And I will fight
To come real feelings alive
´till all machines are gone
And see another true dawn…

…not software
so beware…machines!
War has just begun
And I am the victory´s son!

VII. A new dawn

Chorus 2:
Matrix – breaking down
Everything you see is real again
No tricks – on you depends
If you want to be a flock or man
 
Old 2011-10-09, 04:46
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Nothing´s gonna stop me (On the road again II)

Weather is not perfect
Here comes the rain
I don´t care at all
I´m on the road again

It´s been a long waiting
And I left alone
But I don´t mind at all
My destination is known

PreChorus:
Wheel in my
Hands and roaring
Of housepower below
Music is loud and heavy
That´s what I love the most

Chorus:
Nothing´s gonna stop me – on my way to paradise
Nothing´s gonna stop me – from the land of delights
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where is all it should be
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where I want to be…to set me free

Problems are here to be
Beaten in a fight
The sun has shown its face
All seems to be alright

Miles and miles per hour
Up to the limit
Leaving all behind me
Forget all daily sh*t

PreChorus:
City gates
Wide opening
For me to be its quest
Music is loud and heavy
Metal never ever rest

Chorus:
Nothing´s gonna stop me – on my way to paradise
Nothing´s gonna stop me – from the land of delights
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where is all it should be
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where I want to be…to set me free

Bridge:
This is real
Vivid dream
Don´t want back
To daily schemes

Chorus:
Nothing´s gonna stop me – on my way to paradise
Nothing´s gonna stop me – from the land of delights
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where is all it should be
Nothing´s gonna stop me – where I want to be…to set me free
In land of the free
 
Old 2011-10-10, 04:39
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Running scared

After attack of deadly striking force
Paralyzed with fever and headache
I´m on fire I´m looking for remorse
Ask myself „Why me for heaven´s sake?!“

I am trying to escape from my fate
I´ve realized running´s my salvation
Now I have known how to ease my pain
But question is „How long will I hold on?!“

PreChorus:
If I stop…I will cry…Run!
From pain killing me…Run! Run!
If I stop…I will die…Run!
No one will save me…Run! Run! Run!

Chorus:
Ah…I´m running scared endlessly
Scared of fuel getting dry
Ah…Ah…Happy end I´ll never see
Only way to survive

PreChorus:
If I stop…I will cry…Run!
From pain killing me…Run! Run!
If I stop…I will die…Run!
No one will save me…Run! Run! Run!

Chorus:
Ah…I´m running scared endlessly
Scared of fuel getting dry
Ah…Ah…Happy end I´ll never see
No chances to survive

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