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Old 2003-03-13, 11:21
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"Abandonment"

Just a little something different than most of the other pieces I've put here. Bitching and whining appreciated. Thanks for reading.

"Abandonment"

I stand at the edge of the cliff
As the wind whips my hair across my face.
I shudder at the notions going through my head.
Clouds billow through the blue sky
And the ocean's color reflects from my eyes.
My breath immeasurably deep with longing-
As my outstretched hand reaches into the portal.
Transformation to something wonderfully free
Beckons the woman in me.
The smile of madness wanting me to delve deeper
Into the passions that have woven into my life.
A single thread that if pulled could release all the things
That have kept my traveled road safe.
And yet I feel like the strange comfort I'd feel
Would be who I really am.
Dropped about my feet the soft rose petal robe
That has wrapped itself around me.
I see myself taking the step to abandonment.
And your open arms are there to catch my fall.


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Old 2003-03-13, 11:56
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i think i missed something here...where are you going...
you, a woman????...you start it okay, then you lost me...
then you ended the weird part okay...either i just don't
understand at all or you skipped a papragraph.
sorry i'm weird.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


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Old 2003-03-13, 12:36
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Lemme check...yep...I'm a woman...I meant that the woman in me was being drawn out like a butterfly comes out of the cocoon and becomes something new and revitalized. Is that a little clearer?
Anything else?
Anyone else?
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Old 2003-03-13, 15:23
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.....is this another joke one then?
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


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Old 2003-03-13, 17:23
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noooooo...how did you get that out of that ? If you don't mind me asking? I was metaphorically speaking. Maybe that threw ya off?
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Old 2003-03-13, 23:42
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Dude sorry to say but that sucked, this is liek American Idol dude where I have been reading everyones song's and judging them telling them they suck and for those of you who don;t know what American Idol is, it's a show in America where they have peopel sing to see whos the best and theres these peope tht will tell other peopel how they did at singing and they are alway liek that sucked or something
Lol hard to explain. Hail!!!
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hide from obscure trees listening
winter brings gloom, brings remnants of our shadows
twilight casts spells on those who espouse their fate

ice pricks necks like knives, leaving shards of cadaverous skin
tears spout from eyes, shunned from mankind's den
(Prayer For Cleansing/ "A Dead Soal Born")
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Old 2003-03-15, 02:54
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noooooo...how did you get that out of that ? If you don't mind me asking? I was metaphorically speaking. Maybe that threw ya off?


whatever.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


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