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Old 2003-01-21, 06:40
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Dm Love Song

THIS SONG, WHEN RECORDED, TURNED OUT TO BE BRUTAL BUT THE LYRICS DON'T REALLY MATCH THE MUSIC

A PRODUCT OF LOVE (SUICIDAL PASSION)

WE CREATE AND REPRODUCE, WITHOUT A GUN, A KNIKE, OR A NOOSE.
AS WE SLAY INNOCENT YOUTH, WE HATE TO LOVE CHOOSE TO LOSE.
THE ONLY ONES THAT EVER CARED, THE ONLY ONES THAT TREAT US FAIR.
ONCE LOVE IS GONE YOU'LL NEVER DARE, TO TRY AGAIN IN YOUR DESPAIR.
AT FIRST IT'S BEAUTIFULL AND PASSIONATE, BUT LATER ON PARANOIA SETS.
AND JEALOSY MAKES YOU FORGET, ABOUT THE LOVE THAT STARTED IT.
WHEN FEELINGS DIE YOU DIE AS WELL, WHEN LOVE IS GONE YOU FEEL LIKE YOU'RE IN HELL.
IT'S LIKE A POOL OF TORMENT IN WHICH YOU FELL, REGRETFULLY NOW IN GRIEF YOU DWELL.
WHEN YOU LOVE SOMEONE ENOUGH TO DIE, WHEN THAT LOVE IS GONE YOU COMMIT SUICIDE.
AS YOU CRY AND BURN INSIDE, YOU'VE GOT NO WHERE TO GO, NO WHERE TO HIDE.

(CHORUS)
THE LOVE BETWEEN A FATHER AND SON, THE JOY THAT YOU FEEL WITH YOUR SIGNIFICANT ONE. YOU LOVE SOMEONE ENOUGH THAT YOU WOULD SACRIFICE, ANYTHING IN THE WORLD TO COMPLETE EACHOTHER'S LIVES.

WE FALL IN LOVE AND THERE'S NO USE, STILL WE FIGHT OUR FEELINGS AND BECOME CONFUSED.
WE TRY TOO HARD TO FIND THE CLUES, OF WHEN AND WHERE INFIDELITY WILL INTRUDE.
YOU HEAR THE GOSSIP AND PULL OUT YOUR HAIR, THINGS YOU FEARED, THOUGHTS THAT MADE YOU SCARED.
YOU ACT WITH OUT THINKING WHICH ISN'T RARE, AND THE LOVE THAT WAS WILL NO LONGER BE THERE.
BOTH YOU AND YOUR LOVE ARE LEFT IN TEARS, FOR YOU THINK YOU'VE KILLED YOUR ONLY FEARS.
BLEEDING INSIDE, YOU FEEL DEATH IS NEAR. YOU RAN FROM SOMETHING THAT WAS SINCERE.
THESCARS IN YOUR HEART WITH NEVER HEAL, YOU FEEL THIS WAY BECAUSE TE LOVE WAS REAL.
IT'S NOT ABOUT LOVE OR SEX APPEAL, IT'S ABOUT THE WAY A PERSON MAKES YOU FEEL.

(CHORUS)

SCARED TO LOVE, WE CAN'T BE AMUSED. AFRAID TO CARE BUT CAN'T REFUSE.
WE'RE LEFT TO DIE, FEELINGS ARE THROUGH. WE'RE VICTIMS OF EMOTIONS ABUSE.



YEAH YEAH I KNOW, IT'S A PANSY ASS SONG. I JUST THOUGH I'D SHOW PEOPLE MY SOFTER SIDE.
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Old 2003-01-22, 17:46
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it's not THAT bad.
i may see into another title.
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Old 2003-02-04, 04:27
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Ok. not bad. keep up the shit.

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Old 2003-02-04, 13:35
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not bad at all, not bad at all
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Old 2003-02-04, 15:25
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THANKS FOR THE FEED BACK


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Old 2003-02-04, 15:51
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uhm, some parts are pretty neat, but I don't like some choices of words, but I'm just a bitch when it comes to lyrics.

It's not bad, I wanna hear the music with it, if you got an mp3 online, post the link!
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Old 2003-02-05, 16:21
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UNFORTUNATELY I DON'T HAVE AN MP3 ONLINE, I DON'T KNOW HOW TO DO THEM. I HAVE A WMA THOUGH, BUT IT'S NOT THE SAME SONG. HTTP://HOMETOWN.AOL.COM/EROCKBAY2/CYNICAL_MACABRE.WMA IF YOU WANT TO HEAR IT.



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Old 2003-02-06, 08:13
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I didn't think it was too bad either. I did think the last part was a lot smoother than the first though. But you've got lots of imagery in it that flows with a main idea. Personally, I think if you ditched all the capitals and made it a little more reader friendly it would be less 'bumpy' on the read, but that's just my opinion. Not bad at all though.
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