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Old 2009-07-02, 11:29
Last Man Standing Last Man Standing is offline
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Beautiful face

BEAUTIFUL FACE

Beautiful face
That she had
It's gone
Gone forever

Whisper: What happened?

Beautiful face
That she had
Cut to pieces
Smashed!!!

Whisper: Why?

Driving to fast
Through the valey of fear
Cost her
A beautiful face
That she had

It's gone
Gone forever

Comment guys....comment..!!!
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Old 2009-07-02, 12:48
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Usually something this basic I'm not crazy about, but the verse added enough and the fact there's 2 places with "dead man's curve" which both have a slight valley to them made this more easy to relate to. My first impression was a "Leader of the Pack" sound, but it just didn't make it at that sound. Something mellow would probably do it justice. And this is something you could either use as a fill between songs or even add to, but it could stand on its own.
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Old 2009-07-20, 20:14
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Beautiful face

I like this too.
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