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Old 2008-12-19, 23:53
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Cold

Cold cold cold
You're cold cold cold
Your blue blue blue
I'm through through through with you

I'm not following your pseudo (pronounced Seudo) Life with out a clue
You should've stayed true to the few that know you
Instead of thundering off with your ice cold brutality
A Lacking mentality for understanding.

Your cold cold cold
Blue blue blue
I'm through through through
Not done with you

You've got to stop looking at me
I've cooked no care for you
My kiss burns your cold blue fist

Your cold cold old
Blue blue untrue
Im drew drew drew to you

I don't know
I won't know
Until you're through through through


Bored, off the wall song.. roughly 1.30 seconds wrong, grungish style possibly crossed with a little pop medley or possibly more noise/mathcore styled music :3
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Old 2008-12-20, 17:22
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After the first 2 stanzas it looks like a bad translation of a lyric. I think you better proof read this and see if there's errors because like this is ain't so hot even for the style you say it is.
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Old 2008-12-25, 22:27
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bad... bad bad.
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Old 2008-12-26, 15:32
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Old 2008-12-27, 16:28
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Bored, off the wall song.. roughly 1.30 seconds wrong, grungish style possibly crossed with a little pop medley or possibly more noise/mathcore styled music


Worst ending line i've ever seen for a song.
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Old 2009-07-20, 20:19
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cold

I'd try to use another word that cold all the time.
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