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View Poll Results: are my "songs" good??
yeah!!!!! they all rules !!!!! 4 44.44%
yeah!!!! two of them rules!!!! 0 0%
yeah!!!! one are good , others are ok 2 22.22%
yeah!!!!! there are ok 1 11.11%
shame on you!!!! they all sucks!! 2 22.22%
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Old 2002-11-28, 21:52
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some death/grind songs:)

there's some (brutal) death/grind songs about 2 girls i really love
I have no title so i you have an idea plz help me
*****SONG 1*****

Hated, despied, raped, killed
You must suffer
You shame
You mess of a women
Death is too good for you
Life isnt too cruel for you
YOU MUST SUFFER!!

I waited this time
now revenge is mine
no pity for you
orgasm to see you crying!

I'll cut you
mutilate your body
spit on your grave
Do you see how I hate you?

***SONG 2***

I hold my knife
i'm behind you
in silence...
just before you cry

ARGGHHH!!!!!!!! (ultra big scream)

i want to kill you
and your damn friend
she cant hope to survive
I'll hunt her with my axe
I'll keep your head
IN MEMORY OF YOUR PATHETIC EXISTENCE!!!!


*****song 3 **

your life is wasted
why still hope?
death is only solution
FOR YOU!!!

(beak, with normal voice)
"death be proud
You're strong and mighty
come with me
lets kill the damed!"


The scythe cut her in two
the other still runs
not for too long
my knife is in her bleeding head!!!


****
thanx

any comments??
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Old 2002-11-28, 22:26
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i thought they were too short. the lyrics in the first one were good. but "my knife is thrown in her head"(from the 3rd song)??? that makes no sense
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Old 2002-11-29, 12:04
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ok, i corrected that
you know, i was drunk when I composed thoses songs
more comments please??
and yeah, the lyrics are suposed to be short
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Old 2002-11-29, 13:09
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thats alot better. very good
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Old 2002-11-29, 18:03
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Thats some funny shit right there, they rule!
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Old 2002-11-29, 18:26
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thanx dude

i'm proud, its my 300th post here
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Old 2002-11-30, 22:06
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its my 1567th
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Old 2002-11-30, 23:58
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who is the fucker that voted the last choice

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