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Old 2002-11-12, 01:05
MeTaLDrUmFrEaK MeTaLDrUmFrEaK is offline
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new song! tell me what ya think

tell me what ya think of lyrics?

I FEEL IT AGAIN

You write what you know, you bleed what you feel,
The deeper you go, the more it seems real.
Return to that place, the show must go on,
I'll make it a hit, cuz I lived this song.

oh, I feel it again,
oh, I live it again,
This heartache I feel, is my only home,
Return to that place, to sing you this song.

Revisit those pains, these words do express,
I feel it again, like a knife through my chest.
There's blood on these blessings, and torment within,
Reliving those heartbreaks, again and again.

oh, I feel it again,
oh, I live it again,
I am what I am, and I face it alone,
Return to that place, to sing you this song. This music I write, is all that I know,
Lord this pain, I just can't let go.
I know that I'm stuck here, my futures the past,
Rewriting my sorrow for a song that might last.

oh, I feel it again,
oh, I live it again,
This heartache I feel, is my only home,
Return to that place, to sing you this song.
I am what I am and I face it alone,
Return to that place, to sing you this song.

oh, I feel it again,
oh, I live it again,
This heartache I feel, is my only home,
Return to that place, to sing you this song.

I feel it again, Still feel it again.


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Old 2002-11-12, 16:14
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this sounds like a heavy metal song, or hard rock,
ya know, kinda like repeated anthems or something, ...
like an ameture version of dio or something...
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Old 2002-11-16, 21:34
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If Nikki Sixx had done about 27 thousands more speed snorts in his life he might have written more repetitive crap like that
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Old 2002-11-17, 07:24
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they are right, I'm sorry to say it but it isn't a really good song or something, try not to repeat everything etc... it sounds like something a real old metaldude would yell out in the shower
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Old 2002-11-19, 12:55
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uhu, theyre right.
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Old 2002-11-26, 19:44
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Make it a Death Metal song!
LOL.....That peice is pretty good, wish I had the same talent
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Old 2002-11-27, 16:14
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this is really, really bad.............
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Old 2002-11-28, 11:01
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you just made me waste .05% of my bandwidth, shame on you
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Old 2002-11-28, 14:17
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uhm guys, I think we already scared him away...
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Old 2002-11-29, 17:55
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damn you metal drum freak, those lyrics made me think of PAPA Roach
YOU SHALL PAY DEARLY. fuck you, fuck you up your stupid ass
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