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Old 2007-12-24, 10:13
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no soul

it just seems like noone's got a soul anymore
and when i die i wanna fade into the floor
i could scream until my voice was sore
if its all the same to you don't ask me for a thing
i've given all i've got and i'm down to my veins
but nothing i do will take away this pain
i could have all the false love in the world and this monster would remain

it just seems like noone's got a soul anymore
sometimes i gotta stop and ask myself
what's in store?
it just seems like noone's got a soul anymore
it just seems like noone's got a soul anymore

sure i hurt but do i suffer?
it's hard to tell when you're under-cover
i've asked the heavens for so many things
for example
please let me love myself
please let me be loved
give me a rock or turn me into stone
cause all my life i've been alone

when i saw you the other night everything felt right
but the very next day my whole world was blown away again
maybe i don't got no soul
so when i die i'll be happy to rot in a hole

it just seems like noone's got a soul anymore
sometimes i gotta stop and ask myself
what's in store?
it just seems like noone's got a soul anymore
it just seems like noone's got a soul anymore
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Old 2008-01-17, 16:47
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"maybe i don't got no soul" That line I didn't like because of the way it's phrased. The rest of the piece had a gloomy, heavy feel to it, but that line ruined the feeling. I thought this was a really cool piece otherwise.
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