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Old 2007-08-30, 07:00
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Well, I PM-ed by thoughts to you, but i guess I'll post them here too.

That was pretty epic. I liked it. It wasn't what I was expecting, but it is great. Who am I to expect or want something of someone else's music?

Very gloomy too! Did you invoke or raise J.S. Bach from the dead for some help with this?
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Old 2007-08-30, 19:37
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I really didn't enjoy it at all. Attributed to poor songwriting imo.
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Old 2007-08-30, 20:17
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as in riff structures? or did you not like the riffs at all
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Old 2007-08-30, 22:33
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no just reduce your intro and few riffs, i can be good, you need to work on it. work on your style. I had the same problem too, and i still have to work on it, so continue your work upgrade it and you will have good result!
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Old 2007-08-31, 04:00
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Forget what Bob is saying, the intro is aight.

Some or most of the bass harmony lines were pretty funk in a non musical way.

Then some of the riffs just seemed really boring. Maybe better with drums but I doubt it.
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Old 2007-08-31, 14:03
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Forget what Bob is saying, the intro is aight.

Some or most of the bass harmony lines were pretty funk in a non musical way.

Then some of the riffs just seemed really boring. Maybe better with drums but I doubt it.


yeah it's my first time using bass lines but that's no excuse anyways.
which riffs sucked to you

hopefully not the :



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----------------9-10---8-7-
--0000000--610------8-----4-----

one.
i love that one.
i also love the:

--------4-4--4-4-------------3-3-3-3
--4444-4-4--4--4----3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3

one

i realize that the bass line which harmonizwes with the circle of 5ths type riff needs a different degree of harmonization. the major 4th is not working out
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Old 2007-09-02, 11:33
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yeah it's my first time using bass lines but that's no excuse anyways.
which riffs sucked to you

hopefully not the :



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--0000000--610------8-----4-----

one.
i love that one.
i also love the:

--------4-4--4-4-------------3-3-3-3
--4444-4-4--4--4----3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3

one

i realize that the bass line which harmonizwes with the circle of 5ths type riff needs a different degree of harmonization. the major 4th is not working out


Major 4th?! Perfect 4th, or major 3rd did you mean? Sorry, being a nitpicker, but...

And how about the other guys lay off, the song is already very strange and distinct, how can you possibly speak as if there is some checklist of good form for this?!?! This is down to JOAM 's taste alone.
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Old 2007-09-02, 18:41
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Major 4th?! Perfect 4th, or major 3rd did you mean? Sorry, being a nitpicker, but...

And how about the other guys lay off, the song is already very strange and distinct, how can you possibly speak as if there is some checklist of good form for this?!?! This is down to JOAM 's taste alone.



o0h yeah
i cofuse fret markers with degrees
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Old 2007-09-19, 21:24
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here it is.
My sprawling 12 minute prog composition for all those interested.
organ, bass, and guitar.
oops forgot to upload
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Old 2007-09-20, 10:35
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Old 2007-09-21, 20:59
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hello?
anyone wanna listen?
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Old 2007-09-30, 01:10
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PROG PIECE OF ABOUT 12:22 minutes
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Old 2007-09-30, 19:55
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Old 2007-10-02, 16:12
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maybe its me, but it sounds completely random (maybe too progressive for my ears).

you should pay way more attention to the harmony of this piece, theres too much dissonace going on, or you might did that on purpose
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Old 2007-10-02, 16:23
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maybe its me, but it sounds completely random (maybe too progressive for my ears).

you should pay way more attention to the harmony of this piece, theres too much dissonace going on, or you might did that on purpose

dissonance?

i don't hear dissonance at all?
how is it random. did i post the right thing?

EDIT; where is there dissonance to you?
like could you post times? cuz this is meant to have some RUsh parts and some Genesis parts. maybe you just don't like the sound of the organ?
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Old 2007-10-03, 03:40
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maybe my midi settings fucked shit up, but it's sounds completely off most times (well, actually i only listened the first minute).

im not intro prog at all, hahaha
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Old 2007-10-03, 18:30
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weird.

EDIT:
ha of all the death metal songs i write, you listen to the prog one
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Old 2007-10-09, 17:05
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I think you have some cool ideas in all of your songs. I especially like the dissonant feel, Gorguts around From Wisdom to hate / Obscura era, I was stuck on that stuff as well for some time. I listened to Colossus Pulse and it had some very cool riffs that would make a great song, however it was too long for my taste and without drums and stuff it's not much variety.

But yea, you should definitely record some of your songs. Cheap recording gear would be V-amp 2 / Pod XT for recording guitars + cubase and ezdrummer to fix the drums and recording, that's kinda what I use and you can make some pretty damn decent recordings with those if you know your stuff (see Periphery).
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Old 2007-12-08, 12:21
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New track in the works.

I won't say anything about it before anyone listens
so go ahead and try it!
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Old 2007-12-08, 18:45
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acoustic stuff is nice ... kind of baroque hetfield haha sry that's probably not what you want to hear. real nice though.

when the strings start to take off around bar 96 it gets interesting, kind of like emperor with the intricate runs interlocking.

the finale is kind of plunky and weird without percussion, i'm having trouble envisioning how it's supposed to sound.

this is definitely the most listenable stuff you've posted yet. i think your melodies and counterpoint are really good ... looking forward to you putting some of your parts together into a cohesive song. (with drums too!)
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