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Old 2002-10-10, 02:13
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ok... heres one of my texts:


Gaught in the woods
of immortal shadows
waiting for morning to rise

lost from the path
beside the creatures
of the eternal despise


I may add couple of lines more...
im not sure yet...
so how is it... its meant to be short
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Old 2002-10-10, 03:05
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i cant get into it...by the time i start reading it i've finished.
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Old 2002-10-10, 15:29
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cant really say much, there's not really that much there...
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Old 2002-10-10, 18:07
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no offense but they're right...and I hate all the walking in the woods stuff so I'm probably the wrong person to ask
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Old 2002-10-18, 08:54
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its like i'm paying to go see a movie but as soon as i walk in, the movie's already started and i trip and hurt myself and dont see anything cept the first 6 lines of dialogue. sorrry. its too abrupt, maybe if you completed it, it'd be mroe understandable
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Old 2002-10-22, 01:20
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yeah... I guess youre right...It's just that I'm out of ideas what to write...
maybe i will complete it some day...
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Old 2002-10-25, 11:44
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it really a small text, but if you say it like hundred times, people will still dont have a clue what youre talking about, but its more of a poem, than lyrics. keep on writing dude.
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