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Old 2006-11-05, 16:03
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is this good

Song Title: Dripping Axe


the foul stench of blood fills the air
blood is on my hands
it is in my dreams
blood is on my axe
blood curdling screams for there death
destruction creating the construction of my
prison a cage for me and the un named

if u wish to join them feel the blade of my
blood dripping axe


bow face the facts
u cant relax a killer is on the loose u ar tightening th hangman's noose
around ur neck no die and face your gorey fate
feeling hate unlock the gate to insanity
destroying all humanity you have no sanity
at leat not any more



you want some more of my
blood dripping axe



buried in wax
because of my axe
no you pay the price of taking from me my life


















this song isn't that good but you get the idea
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Old 2006-11-05, 16:57
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Old 2006-11-06, 03:07
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this song isn't that good but you get the idea

true words. and yes, i got the idea... over, and over, and over.
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Old 2006-11-07, 20:11
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I read it, but it's just not my thing. The mechanics of it weren't bad, but the subject matter didn't grab me.
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Old 2006-11-30, 06:23
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I do not like the utilized cliché to use 'u' instead of 'you' in lyrics. It was original one day. It looks too custom nowadays.
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Old 2006-11-30, 09:29
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Song Title: Dripping Axe


the foul stench of blood fills the air
blood is on my hands
it is in my dreams
blood is on my axe
blood curdling screams for there death
destruction creating the construction of my
prison a cage for me and the un named

if u wish to join them feel the blade of my
blood dripping axe


bow face the facts
u cant relax a killer is on the loose u ar tightening th hangman's noose
around ur neck no die and face your gorey fate
feeling hate unlock the gate to insanity
destroying all humanity you have no sanity
at leat not any more



you want some more of my
blood dripping axe



buried in wax
because of my axe
no you pay the price of taking from me my life


















this song isn't that good but you get the idea


sounds like power metal
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Old 2006-12-07, 20:13
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um sounds like u wrote it in 4 seconds try those classes they where talking about
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