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Old 2006-10-29, 05:33
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Thief

I am the thief that takes what he wants
And never questions
As I steal all of the dwindling years
I take the life from my loved ones
Making time fly faster
While death is in haste
To show myself a wasted life
And as if to counter balance
Steal from the ones that mean most to me
Without consideration
But what I am doing
To bring them all down as fast as myself
Is only selfish
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Old 2006-10-29, 18:04
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I really found the tone of this pleasant. The content was a nice balance of thought and I didn't really have to read it multiple times to grasp it like I have some of yours. That's not necessarily anything about you, but the way I comprehend sometimes.

I can hear this read as a poem, but I also hear it as an open ended piece ending on a hanging note mid-phrase musically.

Nice one. Cool imagery, too.
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