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Old 2002-09-18, 07:04
morbid_death
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Thumbs up havn't posted one in a while...so here it is!! Nostalgic Coma (Longus Vivere Satanas)

i havn't posted a song in a while because i havn't had much inspiriration and i didn't want to force anything.....and this place was lacking with quality *modest ^_^* . but i'm back with a newie and the 'message' is far more blatent than my other songs because you people seem to not understand them so i tried to be less metaphoric and at times more straight to the point....enjoy!

(atmospheric black metal mixed with a bit of tradition death metal)

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-Nostalgic Coma (Longus Vivere Satanas)

Bittersweet, the virgins weep
Bleeds the weak and monogamous deep
Demons creep, lamens seek
Rendered bleak the vile scorns are all that reaks

Foul and tainted, I step from darkness
A chalice of blood, holding my fears
Marauding your faith, you look away
Drapped in black, for me they morn

Day in dusk, night in dawn
Dripping wet, figures misdrawn

Mongered hate you condemed
Premature Persecution
Blinded jury in Jahova's court
Callous intentions
Disfigured, dismembered
False depiction, a malediction

My path is drawn with blood
My path is forged with steel

Longus Vivere Satanas!

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p.s: sorry that its a bit shorter than me other writings
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Old 2002-09-18, 18:45
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FUCKING REMINDS ME OF SUICIDE NOTE PART 1
ITS AWSOME. WHEN I WRITE MY LYRICS THE SAME FUCKING WORDS SEEM TO APPEAR IN MY FUCKING HEAD. MAYBE AS I GET OLDER I'LL HAVE A BETTER KNOWLEDGE OF ENGLISH LIKE U DO CAUSE MAN THIS IS FUCKNG AWSOME.

BAD ASS
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Old 2002-09-18, 20:30
morbid_death
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when writing always have a theasaraus at hand. you'll use it alot to begin with, and after a while you won't even need to look words up. you'll end up speaking words and family members will look at you stupid

btw: where in Aus you from?
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Old 2002-09-20, 00:41
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i'm impressed.

when i write i some times make a word up and then go see if
its a real word. sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't
i have like three or four differently published dictonaries
with no theasarus and no rhyming book, but i get by good
because every week in english we have a vocab test over new words.
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