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Old 2002-09-21, 15:54
xDarkestHourx xDarkestHourx is offline
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little Hardcore love song

"To You And The Faith I Lost"

You bowed to him
And his every fucking whim
Used, abused, a tool in his eyes
How does it feel in your world?
No self respect in your life

What's it like, being taped for posterity
With his dick in your mouth?

He can dress you up, but can't take you out
Wallowing with the skeletons of your closet
Dialated Eyed and Stupified
Your life ripped out of your chest

Led to self restoration
Kicking and Screaming
Bent down to taste dignity
You bit the hand that fed

Tossed to the curb, face planted
How does it feel in your world?
Cast aside like each one before you
Forgiveness, your chance was lost

Distraught cunt, lose my prescence
Fell me fade
Who's by your side?
Alone

When you have no where to turn
Remember my back
With your knife planted within


yeah...true thing about my fuckin ex-girlfriend. Needless to say, I wrote in class a little while after the fact. I don't like swearin in music cuz it usually loses it's impact, but here I made an exception. It's for a chaotic hardcore song in the vain of the Dillenger Escape Plan/Converge/Deadguy but with more of a throaty death vocal backed behind it...I dunno, just thought I'd post.

Cheers,
xx
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Old 2002-09-21, 20:04
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your right about hardcore, really does remind of something Hatebreed, Diecast, etc, would do
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Old 2002-09-21, 20:10
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hell yeah dude, thats fuckin great... keep that shit up
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her body twitches
as she chokes
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Old 2002-09-22, 05:41
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yeah man it's pretty good, converge fucking rules btw, you probably also know backfire and hatebreed and raised fist etc...

i've also posted some hardcore stuff on this forum, it's called merge for the kill, also pretty hardcore like..
yeah, anyways, keep up the good work man, it's stupid, but the shit that happens to yourself is really good for songwriting inspiration.
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Old 2002-09-22, 18:11
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thanks for all the replies guys. I'm glad everyone liked it, when I get a god damn drummer it'll all be complete with music and all. Again, thanks for the praise.

Cheers,

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