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Old 2006-09-19, 22:02
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Wow dude...you need some new hobbies.

I only need two new hobbies; fucking and drinking. then I'll be complete.
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Old 2006-09-19, 23:48
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I only need two new hobbies; fucking and drinking. then I'll be complete.



i used to have both of those. Now i'm just stuck with the one. Drinking and thinking about the other.. haha boy does that suck.
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Old 2006-09-20, 00:31
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Haha. Well, I have only thinking about fucking with no drinking because I can't stand the taste of beer. I have a sweet tooth; I drink Coca Cola.
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Old 2006-09-20, 01:12
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Old 2006-09-20, 07:06
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Old 2006-09-20, 09:22
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Haha. Well, I have only thinking about fucking with no drinking because I can't stand the taste of beer. I have a sweet tooth; I drink Coca Cola.



Thats just sad. Wake up get some ballz and drink some cold ones!
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Old 2006-09-20, 09:31
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We keep 'em good and cold so you can't taste 'em too well. It works. Try it.

You should really try to avoid swearing in a Star Wars song. As far as I can tell, all the profanity in that world is made up and vaguely reminiscent of 30's movie substitutions for profanity. In any case, if you're not going to write it as they're written, I don't really see the point to this.
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Old 2006-09-20, 18:30
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Yeah, that's the point I was trying to make.
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Old 2006-09-20, 19:07
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We keep 'em good and cold so you can't taste 'em too well. It works. Try it.

You should really try to avoid swearing in a Star Wars song. As far as I can tell, all the profanity in that world is made up and vaguely reminiscent of 30's movie substitutions for profanity. In any case, if you're not going to write it as they're written, I don't really see the point to this.

I know the swearing is a little ridiculous, and it can be immature. But let me ask you this. Which statement would catch your attention a little more?

"The government is corrupted."

"The government is a festering pile of maggot shit that needs to be fucking cleaned."
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Old 2006-09-20, 19:52
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I know the swearing is a little ridiculous, and it can be immature. But let me ask you this. Which statement would catch your attention a little more?

"The government is corrupted."

"The government is a festering pile of maggot shit that needs to be fucking cleaned."



To be honest that was a horrible example. For instance kind of brings up something i heard in my philosophy class today. If you want to make an impact with an argument, build up the other side strong and THEN break it down with your opinion and analysis. You completely failed to do that. Like my professor said, is there much impact to building up an argument of straw that you can just blow away? Not really.

Profanity.... to be honest in decient lyrics there isn't ALMOST no place for.. Now i'm saying almost because i think sometimes it can fit. But for the most part its something Slipknot would do, and their lyrics are just seriously horrible. Or any Nu-metal actually. They show their lack of creativity with extensive profane words.
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Old 2006-09-20, 20:56
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You have a good point. I'll try to avoid using profanity in my lyrics..... I can use cunt, right? Because I've had ideas for another song, and I'm gonna try to go for a more gorey thing. Trying everything.
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Old 2006-09-20, 21:40
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is there much impact to building up an argument of straw that you can just blow away?


He had a lot of good points. Go back and read what he said again.

As far as profanity goes:

Listen, you shit-eating bitch, there's nothing wrong with fucking cocksucking profanity, you uncle-fucker. But the fuck of it is, asslicker, the less you use, it, the more impact it will have with your reader.

Profanity can be a distraction if it is overused. However, every so often, one could use a specific curse word that will have an impact.

If you see what I mean, you cunt.

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And I agree with that too.
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Old 2006-09-20, 21:46
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I would never go overboard with swearing. Fuck, it would fucking get so fucking ri-goddamn-diculous and shit, god-fucking-damnit.
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Old 2006-09-21, 03:25
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The statement that would get my attention would, obviously, be "The government is a festering pile of maggot shit that needs to be fucking cleaned." However, what it would draw my attention to would be the fact that the person making the statement is incapable of any kind of sophisticated expression of his attitude towards the government and has substituted the easy impact of a string of profanities for any genuine passion.

Swearing's easy and usually indicates that you're not taking the time to do this well. And if you're not, and it's voluntary, why do it at all?

tmfreak is also right.
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Old 2006-09-21, 11:21
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The statement that would get my attention would, obviously, be "The government is a festering pile of maggot shit that needs to be fucking cleaned." However, what it would draw my attention to would be the fact that the person making the statement is incapable of any kind of sophisticated expression of his attitude towards the government and has substituted the easy impact of a string of profanities for any genuine passion.

Swearing's easy and usually indicates that you're not taking the time to do this well. And if you're not, and it's voluntary, why do it at all?

tmfreak is also right.

Mainly because I'm good at the instrumental part of music that I need to work in an area that I'm bad at, but yeah. I'll try to find alternative wordings.

What makes cursing also more convenient is when I'm playing the rhythm in my head, it goes smoother and sounds even with the song when I add like "fuck" or something to a sentence.
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Old 2007-03-03, 00:07
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Sorry for digging this old topic back up, but I made some revisions to the song.

(Intro)

Verse 1;

From our fleet in space
Through the storming skies
We descend in our Basilisk
Vibroswords at our sides

Cower if you feel
Hide behind the innocent
Shield yourself
Prepare for oblivion

Nothing you do will stop us
We know battle, we know war
We fly through your front
We are here to slay

For Mandalore!

(Bridge)

Verse 2;

You come at us with all your might
We show our respect by fighting back
Courage is great, but itís strength you lack
That will be your wrack

The frailty is so thick
We cut it with our swords
Axes and shields in our hands
Death is the only way out

We validate our existence through war
What principle in this life do you follow?

(Bridge)

Chorus;

We are the Mandalorians
Glory is what we seek
Wealth means trifle to us
Itís in war we find our peak

We are the Mandalorians
Honor is what we find
You shouldn't fight if you can't win
Your bones are what we grind

Bridge:

FOR MANDALORE!!!

Verse 3:

The Sith War was a loss for us
We pay it no mind
It was a glorious war that made us strong
The next one would be our time

From the Duxn moon we commanded an army
We conquered Onderon, Cathar, the whole Outer Rim
No resistance held us back once our Basilisks rained down
This tedious trend soon ended

A man, a Jedi, was all it took
He took command and brought it on
This conquest of ours was miniscule
He took this game and made it a war

Chorus:

We are the Mandalorians
Glory is what we seek
Wealth means trifle to us
Itís in war we find our peak

We are the Mandalorians
Honor is what we find
You shouldn't fight if you can't win
Your bones are what we grind

(Bridge)

Interlude:

In the skies of Malachor V
Red and green light blazing about
The stench of carbon and ozone hung
Men and women went down in flames

Jedi verses Mandalorian
Both sides crumbling
Everyone fought with dark fury
The Force was extraneous, this was WAR!

From a battle into a slaughter
At the hands of an angry Zabrak
He turned to his leader and received his command
In a matter of nanos we were all damned

The war ended in an apocalypse
Jedi and Mandalores, a tremendous cost
Crushed in Malachor's own gravity well
The destruction was clear; we had lost

(Guitar Solo)

Bridge;

Victory means naught to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls
Victory means naught to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls
Victory means naught to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls
Victory means naught to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls

Outro;

We are the Mandalorians
Glory is what we seek
Wealth means trifle to us
Itís in war we find our peak

We are the Mandalorians
Honor is what we find
You shouldn't fight if you can't win
Your bones are what we grind

We are fighting a crusade
Find the strong, destroy the weak
From Cathar to Corusant
We'll make your souls shriek

We can never die...
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Blizzard Beast is absoulutely right, there is no othere way he would mention vibrosords
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Do you know what a vibrosword is?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vibrosword
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Old 2007-03-03, 16:53
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