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Old 2006-08-22, 20:15
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Why do i see this?
A second glimpse
It was yours wasn't it?
I see your life

Parished years ago
I see you're visions
I feel your wisdom
When will i know?

What are you showing me?
Autonomosly guided
On our pace
We are connected

Lost long ago
Your soul has settled
Vapors of death we breathe
Enhale your reality


This is straight out of my note pad from OCS. I have some much better stuff in my notebook but i left that back at my house... oh well.

I'm in a lyric writing mood, so i'll probably have something fresh by the end of tonight.
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Old 2006-09-05, 22:27
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whoa this piece is really cool i read over it real quickly like i do to most i see and i thought "meh" now reading back over it i can see how great it is GOOD WORK KEEP POSTING YOUR LYRICS
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Old 2006-09-05, 22:55
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whoa this piece is really cool i read over it real quickly like i do to most i see and i thought "meh" now reading back over it i can see how great it is GOOD WORK KEEP POSTING YOUR LYRICS



Thanks i appreciate the 2nd look. Actually i do like this one as it has alot of significant meaning behind it. And when i wrote it i was definately tuned into the subject.
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Old 2006-09-06, 02:57
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Its good, but spelling spelling spelling! And I hate the word vapours... But it's cool man.
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Old 2006-09-06, 11:50
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Its good, but spelling spelling spelling! And I hate the word vapours... But it's cool man.



Spelling... what are you talking about? hah
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Old 2006-09-06, 17:23
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I don't have the faintest idea what he means.


I didn't think this was bad, but I've liked others you've written better. I just didn't get into this one.
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Old 2006-09-06, 19:01
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I don't have the faintest idea what he means.



Me neither!
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About requiem. Aint it the truth...

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Hmm? You better reread what I wrote.
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Old 2006-09-06, 22:32
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Hmm? You better reread what I wrote.



I did and i still don't know!
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Old 2006-09-08, 07:36
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That's all I'm gonna say on that subject.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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