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Better Kill Yourself 1 50.00%
Insane fucker ! 0 0%
Ok 0 0%
what the fuck?!! 1 50.00%
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Old 2002-09-10, 21:47
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Insane Fucker

Rotten Meat - Bastard Fuck
Kill a friend - eat his brain
Fuck your dog - rape a nun
cut your veins - drink your blood
INSANE FUCKER !!! (x3)

Kill a priest - cut his dick
call your aunt - cut her throat
go to school - shoot them all
kill a horse - eat his shit
INSANE FUCKER !!! (x3)

Sell your soul - kill Bill Gates
burn a church - masturbate
meet Fidel - blow his head
kill yourself - go to hell !
INSANE FUCKER !!! (x6)



well ... this is just some shit i wrote while I was in my math class
I know is not very good but what the fuck !
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Old 2002-09-10, 22:13
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dude that pretty funny....
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Old 2002-09-11, 05:10
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My suggestion would be to stop writing completely (at least in english).

If that won't work....use dictionnaries, thesauruses, anything that'll help.
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Old 2002-09-11, 10:14
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hahahaha .... I better stop posting shit here
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Old 2002-09-11, 10:43
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i rate the quality of songwriting around about.....2. from 10.
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Old 2002-09-11, 10:53
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yeah ... I know it sucks ... I just did it because I was bored ...
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Old 2002-09-11, 15:58
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Good effort and all man......you said yourself in another thread that you aren't very experienced with English....so i'll give you credit on effort.
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Through me you pass into the city of woe
Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here

Against the concert of the Immortals he cannot stand alone.
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Old 2002-09-11, 19:48
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never write in math class again,
at first i thought it would be funny
to write a nice funny lyric, instead of the
hacking,loving,hating, eating flesh, or
whatever is usually written here. well
i guess nobody likes it *cough*memnoch*cough*
so i'll never do it again.
and to your writing, if you want to write in english,
at least try to use a thesaurus, instead of taking after
me, and pissing everyone off.
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Old 2002-09-12, 05:18
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i guess nobody likes it *cough*memnoch*cough*


Damn right.
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Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here

Against the concert of the Immortals he cannot stand alone.
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Old 2002-09-18, 10:17
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sounds like a nirvana song
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Old 2002-09-19, 20:44
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Well i liked it. Fucking hillarious if you asked me, but I am an idiot so..............
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Old 2002-09-24, 04:25
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After listening to elevator music for an hour and a half in my boss's car, I think this lyric is great!!!
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