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Old 2006-06-07, 01:13
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Ancient am I

VERSE:
Long ago,
I was flung from what you would call grace.
Rejected by a system that excepts all.
I was apalled by their hypocritical ways,
until I learned of my gift.

The darkness that lied dormant inside
was slowly seeping into my brain.
Finally I was free from the chains,
called faith.

CHORUS:
Yet I was shunned for being truly pure,
beaten and cursed like a dog.
You'll rue th day you crossed me.
I'll make you wish for death.

Ancient am I, and black is my heart.
I can call upon plagues far worse than death,
and I intend to make you suffer

VERSE:
I spit on your lord,
For he's as fake as your power.
I know he is all that you have

BRIDGE/OUTRO:
When I'm done with you I'll toss your body in the
pit and the flames will consume your filth.

I wrote this at 4 in the morning.
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Old 2006-06-07, 01:34
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Is this so bad that no one will reply?
Any opinions are welcome!
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Old 2006-06-07, 02:02
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It should be Ancient I am, that being said I haven't read it...
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Old 2006-06-07, 02:15
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I was thinking of Ancient I am, but it doesn't flow with the music. Is it improper grammar? I seriously doubt, maybe a little dated but not improper.
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Old 2006-06-07, 02:34
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Oh, whatever works...
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Old 2006-06-07, 07:20
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Ancient U B

heya,
It isn't bad. I don't know about Ancient, Am I. Kind of sounds like Yoda or something. It might sound sort of 'gothic' or whatever, but I don't think it works. Then again, I'm not hearing it set to music so what the fuck do I know?
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Old 2006-06-07, 10:04
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its cool. It sounds like a direct reference to satans descendence from heaven and his hate and stuff.
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Old 2006-06-07, 10:14
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Its pretty good reminds me of Old Mans CHild
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Old 2006-07-16, 00:17
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i like it the chorus is pretty cool
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Old 2006-07-17, 02:33
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Old 2006-07-22, 19:42
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Ageless, Still I Am.
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Old 2006-07-23, 08:51
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That sounds good, too. It changes the meaning a tad, but that could be okay if he likes that idea. Ancient, Still I Am would keep it the same.
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No no, he was referring to the Morbid Angel song Ageless, Still I Am
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