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Old 2006-06-05, 13:39
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white spirit within

White skies, angels dancing in holiness
the smiles in the wind caress your hair
here I stand In tears, draining out sins
if you want to know I always care...
about you or anyone, hold my hand
ill guide you through the comfort
of darkness into something more
that love you need and always will
if you want someone to be there
no matter how cold the moon gets
as refreshing, as good as it feels
no matter if you dont even know me
Im talking to you right now
I will help you with everything I can
and I can, bring you out of there
be scared because its normal
be whatever what you want to be
because the darkness isnt you
even if I seem so indifferent
and I seem so unreal and a lie
Ill be waiting outside your window
waiting for you to open your heart
open your mind and your soul
Ill be waiting...inside the light
K this song is from my heart, I know theres going to be alot of jokes or whatever, but if you know what im talking about pm me and ill give you my email and we can talk - No Heart
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Old 2006-06-05, 15:38
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This isnt an emo forum, mate. Spill your shit out at myspace.
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Old 2006-06-05, 19:43
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emo huh? I post a poem about helping people that have problems much like yourself and you throw it in my face? why dont you get a life, because people like you are just gonna grow up like losers, you probably think your all that because your "big in a forum" wooooowwwwww, now why dont you go write a poem about how shitty the world is and make everyone else feel like shit and cut yourself
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Old 2006-06-06, 03:10
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Old 2006-06-06, 11:39
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you paint yourself out as the dude whos kinda like the obsessive/jealous,humorless, way too intense to deal with, distraught ex-boyfriend with a possible restraining order whos not gonna hesitate to write a 400 page love letter/suicide note to this<built up in your brain> end-all-be-all, one of a kind,your only salvation/her only salvation, girl who most likely wants nothing to do with you.

this is the road you are going down with this kind of material. thats what im being told between the lines.


"Ill be waiting outside your window
waiting for you to open your heart"

ok stop right there romeo.........chill the fuck out. the whole heart-on-my-sleeve gag has been done to death. im sure Shakespear borrowed heavily from Seneca alot of the cliche tradegy themes,so that marks possibly 2000 years of stones to be thrown at windows worldwide for chicks waiting to get wooed<in the literary world>. real life is not so the case.

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Old 2006-06-06, 16:25
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OH yeah im romeo now, actually i wrote that poem because of my personal reasons, It didnt have anythign to do with a girl, maybe in your view because your the dumb fat kid who never gets laid, and quit trying to say im emo, because your the one whos so fucking emo you cant even get your shit right about me, quit trying to read me because your totally wrong.
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Old 2006-06-06, 16:34
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Calm down. I'm only going to say that once.
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Old 2006-06-06, 17:05
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emo huh? I post a poem about helping people that have problems much like yourself and you throw it in my face? why dont you get a life, because people like you are just gonna grow up like losers, you probably think your all that because your "big in a forum" wooooowwwwww, now why dont you go write a poem about how shitty the world is and make everyone else feel like shit and cut yourself

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OH yeah im romeo now, actually i wrote that poem because of my personal reasons, It didnt have anythign to do with a girl, maybe in your view because your the dumb fat kid who never gets laid, and quit trying to say im emo, because your the one whos so fucking emo you cant even get your shit right about me, quit trying to read me because your totally wrong.


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Old 2006-06-06, 17:14
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Gonna give you a bit of advice man, if you're going to get that pissed off about people giving you a little shit, you're not going to last long here.

As far as everyone else, it's more PST's place to say than mine, but I don't recall there ever being rules as to what people write about in here, especially if it's on topic and an actual poem. So the next time you find yourself telling someone to go away or just imputting a "this thread is retarded" sort of post, hit a delete key and shut your fucking mouth.

No Heart, I can identify with certain parts of this, but it's a part of me I don't particularly like. Certain parts sort of throw me off though, maybe it's because I'm really tired, but it seems to just be a bunch of random thoughts more than a steady flow. I'll give it another look after I get some sleep. Not saying that it isn't good, and if this holds meaning for you, then it doesn't matter what we all say anyway.
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Old 2006-06-06, 19:26
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OH yeah im romeo now, actually i wrote that poem because of my personal reasons, It didnt have anythign to do with a girl, maybe in your view because your the dumb fat kid who never gets laid, and quit trying to say im emo, because your the one whos so fucking emo you cant even get your shit right about me, quit trying to read me because your totally wrong.


well it seems like you are addressing a women, i mean, who else would you wait by someones window for,especially for them to "open thier hearts", that is a very commonly used theme. i took it as a specific reference,hence calling you romeo. everything else was more or less,to me, vague on who you were addressing up to that point.

so if i totally read it wrong, im just telling you why
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Old 2006-06-06, 19:48
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Hahahahahahahaha. I love you No Heart.
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Old 2006-06-06, 21:25
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Old 2006-06-07, 17:55
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wally's right. If you don't have anything helpful to say about the poem - and mean things can be helpful so long as they're constructive - you really have nothing to say in this forum. That's been a rule for a while now, so, please, follow it.
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