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Old 2006-05-24, 21:31
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It's a rather complicated story how I came upon the story that this sprang from. But nevermind. Just thought it might be fun to get some comments.


To a wanderer on uncertanity's road
To a begger for a wish
She came and kissed the toad
Fear and uggliness ideas amiss

What of thunder, rain and fire I expected
A stone and ledge were enough
You kissed me on the mouth
Smiled, and was no more
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Old 2006-05-25, 06:36
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Lots of imagery for such a short piece. I liked the fairytalelike quality. Cool stuff.

I was thinking of music for this and it gives me a medieval feeling. Something similar to Strawbs "Witchwood" only with more instrumental focus since the lyric is more brief. Just a thought.
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Old 2006-05-26, 14:57
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Well, I went to their site and listened some of the music. Maybe. Maybe. It's not all that far from some of the things I try to aim at when writing.
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