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Old 2006-04-11, 13:03
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"Blood Stain (Big Man)"

"Blood Stain (Big Man)"
Jacob Fitzlaff
4/11/06

You're a big man,
Carrying a big gun.
Staring down the barrel,
You're going to shoot that mother's son.
What makes you think that
You can kill another man?
You keep on running
But the blood stays on your hands.

You're a gangster,
Drawing out a switchblade.
You're always talking,
And now you've got to make your name.
You're a virgin,
You ain't never killed a man,
You keep on running,
And the blood's still on your hands.

You're a mobster,
Paying for your bread with death.
It's your lifestyle,
Another day, another hit.
Is the high life
Worth killing your fellow man?
You keep on running,
With the blood stains on your hands.

You're a redneck,
Toting 'round your shotgun.
It's a friday night
And you're out killing fags for fun.
Sunday morning
Justifies your crimes 'gainst man.
You keep on running,
But the blood stays on your hands.

You're a member,
And the KKK is collecting dues.
You lit the cross,
And you killed that helpless nigger too.
You know it's wrong but,
Everyone calls you a man.
You keep on running,
With the blood stains on your hands.

You're a nazi,
Killing everyone you're told.
It's your duty,
Breeding out the weak's your goal.
In the Third Reich
You'll be praised as a man.
You keep on running,
But the blood's still on your hands.

You're a big man,
Carrying a big gun.
You're a big man,
Yeah you're number one.
You're a big man,
Yeah you own the world.
You're a big man,
But those blood stains won't wash out you know.
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Old 2006-04-11, 13:54
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Intresting one. I liked the common flow throughout. The repitition obviously made this a pretty good one.
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Old 2006-04-11, 15:13
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Good stuff, Tullie! Loved the flow. It really has a good feel to it. Another punkish piece?
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Old 2006-04-11, 20:17
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Of course another punkish piece. The Sex Pistols rule
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Old 2006-04-12, 01:49
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Mothers son made me go like this: "Urghhh... "

Alright, repetitive.
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Old 2006-04-12, 11:50
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The repitition was intentional, Myles.
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Old 2006-04-12, 21:09
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Yah, but you said it was a song, I couldn't imagine it as a punk song because it would be too repetitive but as a poem it sure works.
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Old 2006-04-12, 21:14
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Yah, but you said it was a song, I couldn't imagine it as a punk song because it would be too repetitive but as a poem it sure works.



Psssh What punk songs do you listen to? In my old street punk band we had a song called Jon is drunk, and the entire song was the same riff played again and again and my friend saying jon is drunk and some other same phrases. And we had another called Get the fuck out. Get the fuck out was said nearly 30 times in that song haha.

I miss those days.
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songs that go less than a minute?
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