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Old 2006-05-10, 21:43
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The revolutions of stale premonitions

Finally a new one. This has music to it, and its actually one of my favorite songs to date.


Verse
Its the same everywhere you go
the lack of change kills me inside
Same places same people,
Its nowhere and they've nothing to show

Cities of collected souls
Huddled inside for protection
Same cause same reason,
Its going nowhere, and i'm moving too slow

Break
Fade back and look at it
Do you see it all before you?
The faces everywhere

Verse
The street lights light the path
The same path that's trampled
Same places same people,
Its nowhere and they've nothing to show

This is the only path i know to take
Somewhere i gave up on spontaneity
Same cause same reason,
Its going nowhere, and I'm moving too slow

Another Break
Something unexplainable is at work
I get these hazy premonitions that this isn't it
Where are we going? Where's purpose and reason

The relations of those around do not exist
At least in part, these are merely fallacies
We liked to consider them important but
In the end they're but a crutch

Solo


Verse
Predetermined to the end
Unable to set you're own path
Same places same people,
Its nowhere and they've nothing to show

It's always dark in these cities
Cold unforgiving unrelenting
Same cause same reason,
Its going nowhere, and I'm moving too slow

I've lost track of where i am
There are thousands of miles behind me
New places old feelings
I've gone nowhere now far from home
New places old feelings
I've gone nowhere now far from home
New places old feelings
I've gone nowhere now far from home
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Old 2006-05-11, 06:39
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This has to be one of my favorites I've read on here. I'm not sure what style you're using on this, but it reminded me of "Wildwood" by Paul Weller in the content and dusky feeling. Great job. I wouldn't change a thing in this. I'd love to hear it.
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Old 2006-05-11, 11:01
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Thank yeah this was actually a song i mostly wrote while i was sitting on my "lunch break" At work. It was night time where i lived, and i kind of.. examined my surroundings. I basically asked.. hey whats going on here?

All i need to record is the bass and i'll post a link to get to it on here, so you can check it out.
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