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Old 2006-04-07, 17:05
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schitcofrenic

Do u know the feeling when you´re trying 2 climb and someone gribs ur wrist and tries 2 pull u down thats the reflection of your life thats the reflection of the backstabbing knife.

Chorus:

Its like an face of evil that never looks away, its like an face of evil that is forcing u 2 pray ,its like an face of evil that looks deep inside of u , its like an face of evil that one day will take u ! :P

Do u know the feeling when u are falling down and never seems 2 reach the ground thats the reflection of your life , that some times feels wors then 2 die.....


chorus:

Its like an face of evil that never looks away, its like an face of evil that is forcing u 2 pray ,its like an face of evil that looks deep inside of u, its like an face of evil that one day will take u
the face of evil that is u ! our trappet in side your self ..........


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Old 2006-04-07, 17:08
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Lol the chorus reminds me of an old Linkin Park song (The first song on their old CD I think..)
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Old 2006-04-07, 17:15
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Lol the chorus reminds me of an old Linkin Park song (The first song on their old CD I think..)


yeah yeah yeah :P


i dont lisent 2 em :P
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Old 2006-04-07, 17:20
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lol i read the lyrics on that linking park song and they are pritty alike :P
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Old 2006-04-07, 18:48
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You...To...goddamn, I need a break. All of that typing out of full words and shit hurt my hand.

Schizophrenic...AHHH!! That attacked my phobia of spelling words correctly.

(Just kiddin' ya, man. But I couldn't resist.)
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Old 2006-04-07, 19:08
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I suppose it would be okay for a screamy type anger song. You might use it to wrap around some verses with more meat and taters in them to make it more original. Just a thought.
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Old 2006-04-07, 22:09
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Itsss liiiiike a faaaaaceeeeee..... that puuuuulllllssss awaaaaay tthhheee liiiiiiiiight!!!!!!!! Chug chug chug chug. I Caaaaaaaant waaait tooo geeeeeeeeeet, awaaaaaay!!!!!!!! chug chug chug chug
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Old 2006-04-07, 22:22
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Old 2006-04-08, 00:48
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i agree, substance more to the song would definately be in order. I think a good start is there. A lil more....... i guess expression would do more justice.
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Old 2006-04-08, 04:13
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Okej i have 2 say that i like the verse anyway :F


hheehe the chorus is a bit gay i know xD
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