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Old 2006-03-06, 08:26
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No Regret

Greed is it's own reward
Humility won't find me.
The erosion of a memory.
My mouth is a weapon
And she is the key.
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Old 2006-03-09, 07:30
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Just because this hasn't gotten any replies I'll give my opinion. I didn't like this one as much as some of the others you've done even after several reads since you've posted it. It just didn't grab me.
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Old 2006-03-09, 07:52
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Maybe so. But this one actually holds a little more meaning than the others to me. Oh well not everyone likes what I do.
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Old 2006-03-09, 10:23
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That's cool. I'm only one person. Many things mean more to the author then the random reader. If I thought you would be offended by me saying something of that nature I might have not said anything or just pm-ed you. But negative as well as positive comments can help us grow as writers. I didn't think you'd take it personally. You should know I respect your writing.
Seeing a lot of hits on a piece, but no comments doesn't give the author any feedback on it. That's why I posted.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2006-03-09, 14:24
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I actually like this one quite a bit. I'm not going to say why, but it just worked for me.
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