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Old 2002-08-07, 08:23
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Fairy Tails - comments? My first post...

Fairy Tails

In a neat little pile
In the corner of the room
Is my little present
To the world, and to you

A reminder of misconception
Of how fickle you are
You thought truth was trustworthy
Dare you push the door that's ajar?

It's asking to be opened
Just like the truth
Nothing lasts forever
Belief is like youth

A reminder of misconception
Of how fickle you are
You think truth is trustworthy
Yet you hear tales from afar

The passing whispers
Fly through the wind
You dismiss them as lies
Are you ready to rescind?

A reminder of misconception
Of how fickle you are
You still believe the truth?
Yet you see the tails in my jar...

Do you dare to believe
Or are your eyes wrong?
Or is this that true fear
That staved off sleep, for so long?
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Old 2002-08-07, 09:43
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Pretty mature... much better than the usual fare here. I'm trying to hear the tune and it's not working... what's the structure?
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Old 2002-08-07, 13:45
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I wrote it kinda with Strapping Young Lad's "Room 429" in my head, if that's any help. There'd have to be a different rhyth for the chorus than the verses, and the speed'll be either fast or slow, not imbetween. Maybe something incorporating both, I'm not sure yet - haven't got a tune to go with it. Yet.
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Old 2002-08-11, 22:55
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i really cant find the Strapping Young Lad element. i think more of Nevermore with the vocal style and maybe Dream Theatre's style music cranked up a notch, maybe even Theatre of Tragedy or Orphanage style.
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Old 2002-08-16, 12:35
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Morbid Death, have you ever heard Room 429? Just wondering, it's kinda..un-Strapping Young Lad-ish. I can see where you're coming from with the lyrics, though.
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Old 2002-08-16, 17:58
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i cant say i have heard it so i really cant say sorry
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