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Locking Doors

2006-01-30, 06:58

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Locking Doors

In the habit
Of locking doors
Behind yourself
As you close them.
"And throw away the key."

2006-01-30, 11:17

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How the heck do you do that? You can take something with so few lines and make something of it that has so much metaphor. Another one I liked.

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2006-01-31, 11:56

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I like writing like that, about 75% of everything I posetd here is like this

2006-02-01, 00:37

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Yeah i noticed that. Everytime i'm like.. more man! (not really telling you to write more, but its one of those things that makes you must hear the rest)

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2006-02-01, 19:37

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Sounds like a Grindcore song too me... only it sort of makes sence.

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