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Old 2005-09-07, 14:49
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2 short black metal songs

1. A Nuissance to the Pure
Entombed by the will of an infalible fool
transcending man into a stuttering tool
a nuissance to the pure
A slight nuance in what is wrong, the worst is yet to come
behold your own rapture
I can't feel the ways of an inane jinx
The rusted chain is losing links
a nuissance to the pure
2. Nonentity
Enmity instilled to the eager veins of pious elysium
Voids filled wih emptiness laceration of the soul
Obey the nonentity, become one with nothing
A noisome world this will become
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Old 2005-09-08, 06:54
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I read these last night and due to my simple brain decided to wait til morning to look up words I wasn't sure of. I had a better feeling about the second one and after my "research" I decided I was right. As brief as it was it had a nice meter to it and did flow well.

The first one was pretty good, too. There's only one 's' in nuisance though. Not a biggie. I do think that more could be elaborated on the first piece. It seems to only tell a partial story to me.

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Old 2005-09-08, 18:45
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Thanks i like the 2nd one way more I just need to lengthen it. I like big words as well
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Old 2005-09-09, 13:50
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Like a misanthropic, passionate Meshuggah. Like the metaphors, and the vocab's great. I substitute food with good, wholesome abstractness.
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Also, check out Autopsy, the vocalist sounds like hes about to eat your grandmother while fucking you in the eye. Brutal.


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Old 2005-09-10, 11:37
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wait a minute, do you own Dimmu Borgir's "puritanical euphoric misanthropia"?
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Old 2005-09-10, 19:47
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i'd give them 5/10.. not too bad
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Old 2005-09-10, 20:54
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i cant imagine someone doing any kind of grim vocals with the word "jinx"
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Thanks i like the 2nd one way more I just need to lengthen it. I like big words as well


The second one is excellent.
Do NOT lengthen it. I repeat, do not.
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Old 2005-09-21, 09:26
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This was pretty abstract and advanceed, but what I understood seemed really good!
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Old 2005-09-29, 19:31
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wait a minute, do you own Dimmu Borgir's "puritanical euphoric misanthropia"?


no, why?
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Old 2005-09-30, 20:27
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Here are some Black Metal lyrics I wrote...


Standing atop the icy mountain!
I realize its blacker than darkness.
I've been here for weeks.
So I decide to kill my guitarist!
And eat his brains!
Because im INSANE!
I wear bracelets with fragments of his skull!
And my singer Dead, shot himself!
Can you spell irony?
And I wear white make-up!
RARGH!!

That being said, I like a lot of black metal, and the lyrics I read here are pretty good...
Keep it up guys!

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Old 2005-10-03, 17:20
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I love my black metal to and those lyrics are fuken awsum keep it up ,and for the second song someone said dont lengthen it ....well i think if it needs lengthening do it but if it doesnt dont (i thought of that by myself hehe im brainy) keep it up
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