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Old 2002-08-26, 19:43
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Exclamation something

doesnt always rhyme...meh...what can you do...???

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no more pain...
no more cracks added
unto this broken heart
unto this broken soul
unto this broken girl
unto this broken whore
ive given up
given up on everything
everytime...i lose
its impossible to win
mutilation at its best
cut, slice, repeat
ive ripped at my own flesh
torn it off, and ate it raw
i cant stand myself
i cant stand this face
i cant stand this person ive become
yet i still wont change
i still wont try to glue myself back together
im out of place, im out of faith
and no ones here to reassure me that everythings alright
that everything will pull itself together in time
i have no one
i have nothing
i have blackness
emptiness
nothingness
ive lost myself to the empty void
and ive locked myself inside
my world has faded
my reality is somewhat damaged
inside myself i hide
this life has become so pointless
meaningless...
i dont need this
i dont need anything
all i need is to be cradled
in the arms of a mutilated death
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Old 2002-08-27, 03:58
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that, scares the shit out of me.

but I don't understand the story and the rhyme thingy
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Old 2002-08-27, 05:11
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It's pretty good. I'll rate it.....4.
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Old 2002-08-27, 08:18
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wow....someone actually read it. GO ME...heheh

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Old 2002-08-27, 13:38
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memnoch.......i mean, wait.....uh, brutal vagina
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Old 2002-08-27, 17:51
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i think i'm scared of vagina now
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Old 2002-08-27, 18:53
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hehehehehe... =P


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Old 2002-08-27, 19:21
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Old 2002-08-27, 20:40
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Old 2002-08-28, 05:04
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hehehehehe... =P


hehe, damn right!
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Old 2002-08-28, 07:30
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Old 2002-08-31, 00:35
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to me it sounds like a slow emo tune. with a slow constant beat in the back ground, maybe a slow bass going and possibly soft guitar chords just repeating over whilst a rather emotional struck voice 'cries' (not cries..but emotional) the words. i suppose a bit like a ballard. i have no idea how you intended it, but thats wat i hear.
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