|
2005-07-12, 05:36
|
 |
Post-whore
|
|
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Brisbane, Australia.
Posts: 1,023
|
|
|
The Penguinmen Stomp On Our Hearts
This one is odd, it is somewhat inspired by my current situation and other things. Just bits and pieces of thoughts coming together. There are 3 actors in this song, and I will highlight them with different colours.
Observer
Penguinmen
Prisoner
The Penguinmen Heighten The Pressure
On Our Hearts And Minds
They Increase It To Three Hundred Kilopascals
These ready-to-eat concentrates will be the staple food for your soul
Please adhere to our thought paradigm
We do not take kindly to deviations
You may suffer from our obvious paradox
I'm so amorous that I'm polyamorous
I request for myself a satanik funeral
There is blood on this tap, I think you've been using it...
Please release me from your self-evident legalities!
Let me remain a multifaceted dodecahedron!
I do not see how me being a sphere would benefit....
The penguinmen don football boots
So that they may stomp on our hearts
With a much greater efficiency
My deviancy will be acted on
They wield a diamond file of unwritten legalities
Six foot tall, all powerful penguinmen
Proceed and attempt to make me a sphere
I'm so amourous that I'm mega-amorous
Please release me from this nightmare
I wish to remain as I am
Please release me from this paradigm
I love myself as I am
and they stomp,stomp, stomp....
I was feeling very, very angry.
__________________
I <3 12 year olds.
|
|
2005-07-12, 14:58
|
 |
HES BAAACK
|
|
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: slaying all the giants
Posts: 9,967
|
|
|
id take this a hell of a lot more seriously if it wasnt penguins. unless that was intentional
__________________
www.myspace.com/crownedmusic
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j136/transient_shirts/Banner.gif
|
|
2005-07-12, 15:47
|
 |
Master Killer
Alumni Staff
|
|
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Utrecht, The Netherlands
Posts: 11,372
|
|
|
this is fucking weird..
|
|
2005-07-12, 16:00
|
 |
dsnt trust ne1 < 30
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
|
|
|
It sounds a bit like a more brutal version of Genesis' old stuff.
It wasn't bad, but I can't picture myself singing along with it. lol It had a good flow to it and the storyline had just enough structure that you could interpret to what you thought it was doing. Kinda weird but kinda cool ,too.
__________________
My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
|
|
2005-07-12, 16:26
|
 |
Post-whore
|
|
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: London, UK
Posts: 1,841
|
|
I like the idea of the 3 different voices, not too sure about the content though 
__________________
The Freedom of Chaos
The Secret of The Secret
The Truth of The Truth
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Undone
moonraven?....more like ass raven
|
|
|
2005-07-13, 13:44
|
|
Post-whore
|
|
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Brisbane, Australia.
Posts: 1,023
|
|
|
The Penguinmen are intentional, and it's for a song that's not written in 4/4 but Meshuggah style messy, so no singy alongy feel like my other stuff.
Hmm, maybe I've made a bad choice when I represented those feelings/people as penguins, they just reminded me of penguins somewhat.
The 3 voices are there because everyone except one other person from my project skiddodled and I have one possible person on hold, so it's made for 3 people.
Yay.
__________________
I <3 12 year olds.
|
|
2005-07-13, 15:29
|
 |
bugfucker strikes back.
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: 19713, Delaware
Posts: 5,739
|
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by BrokenCrimson
The Penguinmen are intentional, and it's for a song that's not written in 4/4 but Meshuggah style messy, so no singy alongy feel like my other stuff.
Hmm, maybe I've made a bad choice when I represented those feelings/people as penguins, they just reminded me of penguins somewhat.
The 3 voices are there because everyone except one other person from my project skiddodled and I have one possible person on hold, so it's made for 3 people.
Yay.
|
If I knew the Aussie word for "therapy," you had better believe i'd be recommending it.
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Nihilist
The one time I go to check this thread, it mentions me getting fucked by a dude.
Awesome.
|
|
|
2005-07-13, 17:43
|
|
dsnt trust ne1 < 30
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
|
|
Diss'--Oh, you're one of those that thinks because something is a little out of the ordinary metaphorically the author needs therapy. Well, you go get poopy on someone else's parade then Mr. Conservative-pants. I bet you don't like Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds because it's metaphoric. I'm teasing.
I don't think it's a bad choice to use penguins if that's how you saw what you were writing about. And I was being sarcastic about the singalong bit, but that's cool. There's things in there that I'm sure mean a lot to you that unless we knew you personally we wouldn't understand. I still think it's cool.
__________________
My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
|
|
2005-07-14, 00:51
|
|
bugfucker strikes back.
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: 19713, Delaware
Posts: 5,739
|
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Diss'--Oh, you're one of those that thinks because something is a little out of the ordinary metaphorically the author needs therapy. Well, you go get poopy on someone else's parade then Mr. Conservative-pants. I bet you don't like Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds because it's metaphoric. I'm teasing.
I don't think it's a bad choice to use penguins if that's how you saw what you were writing about. And I was being sarcastic about the singalong bit, but that's cool. There's things in there that I'm sure mean a lot to you that unless we knew you personally we wouldn't understand. I still think it's cool. |
Haha. I was kidding, though.
Honestly, its fucking weird, with a hint of stupid, but thats just my dumbass opinion.
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Nihilist
The one time I go to check this thread, it mentions me getting fucked by a dude.
Awesome.
|
|
|
2005-07-14, 05:35
|
 |
Drugged Unholy
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Philadelphia Area
Posts: 2,458
|
|
|
Whatever you were on when you came up with that, give me some
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by MetalThrashingMad
I don't know about you, but I deadlift because I strive to be the first human tree stump pulling machine  |
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by viewer_from_nihil
the song serial cocksucker changed my life
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by BassBehemoth
Are you going to snort cheap pharmaceutical drugs with your lizard as well?
|
|
|
2005-07-15, 02:47
|
|
bugfucker strikes back.
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: 19713, Delaware
Posts: 5,739
|
|
Cock, if I'm not mistaken. Still want any? 
*edit* i'm talking about her, not me.
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Nihilist
The one time I go to check this thread, it mentions me getting fucked by a dude.
Awesome.
|
|
|
2005-07-15, 09:25
|
|
Post-whore
|
|
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Brisbane, Australia.
Posts: 1,023
|
|
|
Nope, it was PMS.
__________________
I <3 12 year olds.
|
|
2005-07-15, 11:12
|
|
dsnt trust ne1 < 30
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
|
|
*High fives Broken Crimson*
Must have been one of those times when no one can do anything right and you feel like biting the first person that bats an eye or breathes around ya. I hate those times when I get super emotional, but it sometimes gets some good verses out.
__________________
My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
|
|
2005-07-16, 15:41
|
|
bugfucker strikes back.
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: 19713, Delaware
Posts: 5,739
|
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by BrokenCrimson
Nope, it was PMS.
|
Hahaha, still want some TD?
That justifies all of it then.
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Nihilist
The one time I go to check this thread, it mentions me getting fucked by a dude.
Awesome.
|
|
|
2005-07-17, 03:07
|
 |
Supreme Metalhead
|
|
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Wurzburg, germany
Posts: 506
|
|
|
this is awesome.
__________________
just die and get it over with.
hi my name is whitney, but you can call me Scrumptious
|
|
2005-07-17, 17:04
|
 |
Forum Daemon
Forum Leader
|
|
Join Date: Aug 2001
Posts: 4,982
|
|
|
Fosters is Australian for 'therapy.' However, since I seem to recall that BC's some kind of Slav, I'd recommend vodka and unfiltered cigarettes, applied first in the morning and then at regular intervals throughout the day.
Aside from the odd choice of penguinmen I like it. Word choices that seemed unnecessary at first look right on a second reading. The penguinmen even work well with everything aside from the references to geometry, which don't really have anything to do with them. But aside from that I won't much complain.
|
|
2005-07-17, 18:22
|
|
bugfucker strikes back.
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: 19713, Delaware
Posts: 5,739
|
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by PST 88
Fosters is Australian for 'therapy.'
|
Hahaha! Signature worthy.
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Nihilist
The one time I go to check this thread, it mentions me getting fucked by a dude.
Awesome.
|
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
|
