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Old 2005-07-02, 10:49
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"Reflection on Leaves"

I was working on one piece, but then the idea came for this. Thanks for reading.

"Reflection on Leaves"

A pebble lost on the warm sand gathering nothing
But the heat absorbed as it topples downward.
Polished with the skill of nature's touch,
Cleansing and brightening what was rough and dim--
Into something smooth and richly patterned.
The veins clearly defined and still seperately acknowledged
As individual entities that were forced together forming a union.

Presenting itself in the spherical surface of darkness
The moon begs to be the comfort of sadness, the shield of security.
And the stars, the holes left from the needle that weaves
The strands back and forth to bind need firmly,
Occasionally allowing us to see it's thread travel through the sky,
Piercing the heart with joy that makes one cry out
And resting in the shadow of the darker side.
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Old 2005-07-02, 10:50
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Feathered swirls of gentleness against soft blue
Clinging to the heavens as day awakes.
Never the same way twice though the message is similar.
The sun worshipped as wine of life's breath.
Taste vibrant and joyful, meaningful.
So far away, but able to bathe warmth
Even in the chill of winter.

With eyes closed I can feel the sun slip through
The air that I breathe giving power and vision.
Stronger but still unseen in technicality and outcome.
The joy of the unknown inside the orbit of hesitation.
Pieced together a moment at a time.
The heat and the rain blended to steam and vaporize,
To fall against the sun as well as the moon.

Brilliance controlled by destiny.
Elemental factors providing the script
That the actor follows blindly.
Instinct providing the wandering gleem
Worn away and away, day after day.
The final destination someday reached
As the stone once again becomes the sand.

BJH
7/2/2005
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Old 2005-07-02, 12:42
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let me be the first to say well done. another great peice of work from L'B,
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Old 2005-07-02, 14:08
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Tard

With that said...

Wonderful. Lots of imagery going on with a very good flow. Stop looking for a job and be an author damnit.
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Old 2005-07-02, 15:51
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Bless your hearts. Thanks.

Tullie, why don't you just put " Wally's tard" in your sig and be done with it! lol
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2005-07-02, 20:17
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Old 2005-07-02, 20:44
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Bless your hearts. Thanks.

Tullie, why don't you just put " Wally's tard" in your sig and be done with it! lol


Because I only need to use it on occasion.
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Old 2005-07-03, 09:08
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Tullie--Yeah, like whenever I post. lol


YJM04-- Thanks much!
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2005-07-03, 09:35
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