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Old 2005-06-20, 22:46
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"Tragic Release"

"Tragic Release"
Jacob Fitzlaff

Passing storms overhead,
Moments of fright take hold.
With humanity I walk this path,
Counting breaths till I'm old.

Out amongst the maelstrom,
Head first into the storm.
With bravery in hand I walk on,
Holding my breath till morn.

Oh, I've let go.
Oh, I've let go.
Taking it all in with a smile,
I'll take the end with a smile.
Merciful defeat,
My tragic release.

Orange skies above me,
Depression grasps my hand.
With acceptance I walk away,
leaving behind the shadow of a man.

Oh, I've let go.
Oh, I've let go.
Taking it all in with a smile,
I'll take the end with a smile.
Merciful defeat,
My tragic release.

An angel guided me here,
She whispered words of deceit,
With understanding I walk no more,
This is my tragedy, oh sweet relief.
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Old 2005-06-21, 09:53
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So why the heck did you ask me for aid in writing when you write like this? Or were you just hittin' on granny here?
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Old 2005-06-21, 11:34
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Well...It took a tornado to get me to write this. That gave me the idea on how to start. I've had the chorus done for weeks. And yeah, grandma's are hawt

Though I still can't tell whether you like it or not.
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Old 2005-06-21, 12:32
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Good stuff Tulvox!
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Old 2005-06-21, 13:12
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Nice,very interesting,I love it.
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Old 2005-06-21, 13:33
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Oh, you can't read between the lines? Hmm. Yeah, I liked it. There's not a thing wrong with it that I can see except you spelled first wrong. Good flow. Good content. l Let's heat it.
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Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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Old 2005-06-21, 14:03
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I Let's heat it


Don't talk to me about spelling/grammatical errors...
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Old 2005-06-21, 14:07
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Don't talk to me about spelling/grammatical errors...


I keep saying I need an embarrassed smiley just for me. heehee Hey, I'm a cook! You have to heat it so we can hear it. (Sounds like that makes sense anyways.
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Old 2005-06-21, 14:08
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Get back in the kitchen and make me an e-pie woman!

(edit: added an "n" to the "a")

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Old 2005-06-21, 14:21
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Very good!
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Old 2005-06-22, 20:28
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Get back in the kitchen and make me an e-pie woman!

(edit: added an "n" to the "a")


Make your own e-pie fat boy!!!
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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Old 2005-06-25, 12:08
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Old 2005-06-25, 20:28
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Yeh, the song is pretty good, but why did you classify it metal??
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Old 2005-06-25, 22:00
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For the same reasons Metallica's Unforgiven is metal.
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Old 2005-06-26, 13:09
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For the same reasons Metallica's Unforgiven is metal.

Because you suck??????

I'm sorry! I couldn't resist. I love ya, Tullie. heehee
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2005-06-26, 15:46
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Tard

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Old 2005-06-27, 18:55
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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