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Old 2005-06-09, 17:18
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I did the poem of the metal of the English gore in the pigeon

This is just some lame gore lyrics that I made up, which I then translated to japanese and back to english, with babelfish, to get Pigeon English Gore Metal.

I month the woman who has died and become corrupted develop the crypt. The corpse whom it made become corrupted releases the stimulus characteristic stench of the corrosion which becomes dirty. I devastate her putrid which was opened, with the Uzi and tear the stomach which is turned, the meat which is filled up by pus have sexual intercourse. I eat the cat where she rots, the shirk her intestine and eat. Smell of the exhumed corpse gives construction to me. The external wound is sexy.



I repeated the translation to japanese back to english several times and this is what happened.

It is developed in the dies of those months of meaning and crypt where that that is purchased the woman who becomes. The corpse of unique stench of the stimulus which was made in the release where that is purchased becomes the corrosion which reaches to the point which reaches to the point which reaches to the point which reaches the point where it becomes dirty. Thing that, pulls I body fluids and the perfection which which the sexual intercourse which has the meat stomach which has been devastated turns the fact that you break and is purchased, the AM gun becomes she who was opened. The fact that them who have the cat in the point in regard to I her intestinal responsibility which is done is purchased, eats evasion is eaten. As for the smell of being dug there is a structure which is given to me of the corpse. The external scar is sexy.
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Old 2005-06-09, 17:42
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your submission isnt that easy to understand. the japanese therefore isnt that funny when its translated. startw ith something more basic?
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Old 2005-06-09, 19:57
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Do you really think it was worth the effort? I'm not diggin' this at all. No offense, but it's just a bunch of words. It doesn't even describe anything or evoke and emotion other that wtf? and that's an emotion around here.
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Old 2005-06-10, 05:17
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I like it. It just shows having tons of different languages sucks because nothing gets translated good at all.
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Old 2005-06-10, 17:55
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languages are essential in maintaining a cultural identity

maybe you think everyone should learn english?
well, they are

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Old 2005-06-10, 23:50
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This is just some lame gore lyrics that I made up, which I then translated to japanese and back to english, with babelfish, to get Pigeon English Gore Metal.



That's brilliant. The final version is hilarious.
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Old 2005-06-11, 18:00
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languages are essential in maintaining a cultural identity

maybe you think everyone should learn english?
well, they are

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No. It could be Spanish, German, Russian, etc. as long as it is just one.
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Old 2005-06-11, 19:56
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No. It could be Spanish, German, Russian, etc. as long as it is just one.

everyone IS learning english except the poor or simple working classes of countries that dont deal with us. that is happening. everyone i interacted with in italy spoke english, plenty of people in china spoke english, everyone IS learning english
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languages are essential in maintaining a cultural identity

maybe you think everyone should learn english?
well, they are

stop bitching


There's no point in trying to maintain a cultural identity because all it does is build delusions of superiority, tension, inequality, and hate. I'm still not sure why half the planet is obsessed with this idea. Why don't you try to explain what good comes of it? How exactly is it beneficial to mankind? That's a serious question, by the way, I really want to know how you think this benefits society in any way.
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Old 2005-06-13, 15:41
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i dont know enough about it to have an indepth conversation. have any books on the subject you could recommend or anything?

the basic negative (and positive) elements of human nature would remain the same if we all lived in the same country all spoke the same language all were the same color all recieved the same education, etc. people would still be greedy, people would still be murderous, people would still join the peace corps, etc.

culture and hertiage provides a very interesting topic to read and discuss. its really touchy, too. i like to read about old european culture. does anyone else in my demographic? probably not, maybe one or two. i like to read about something that happened in history in a certain location and be able to think "hey, in a way im related to what happened there"

gradually all cultural identity will probably be lost, but for my own part i like to read about language differences and history, etc
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A few of you are reading far too much into this. I put it up as a joke because it's just nonsensical babblings.

I probably should have put up the original to show how badly distorted it became after just one translation.
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I gotcha. It's sort of just showing like Chevy Nova's wouldn't sell well in South America because the name translates to "doesn't run" or something like that.
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A few of you are reading far too much into this. I put it up as a joke because it's just nonsensical babblings.

I probably should have put up the original to show how badly distorted it became after just one translation.


Actually, I found your 'song' quite humorous. I certainly found it a lot more humorous than your signature line. I just jumped off on a point Transient made to discuss something with him.

As far as studying older cultures goes, Tranny, I'd bet you'd be surprised how many people around here get into that kind of stuff. The Ancient World was one of the most interesting college courses I've taken so far, most of the time we stayed in Europe, the Middle East, and North and Northeast Africa. I haven't retained most of the information, but I intentionally kept my notebook from that class so I could refer to it in the future. It's very interesting stuff.

History is one of the easiest ways to discovery the various human frailties and natural tendencies. We really are an odd bunch.
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haha yes indeed, no other race like us

lets take this to AIM


and the original poster-

i thought you DID post the original. so it didnt seem that bad
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