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Old 2005-04-14, 17:31
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Hmm, i should make up some gore lyrics on the spot.






ok, where should i start, i like writing gore but im to lazy to type something up thats existing, so ill make some up right now



impaled
the rotting flesh
flies choking
the stench rising

puking blood
it smells of shit
and rotting organs
the bloody corpse

i eat the maggots
that crawl inside him
than i move on further
tearing his entrails from within

dull knife
carving slow
his head now nomore
it fell onto my plate

torturing the dead
only to ignore screams
i am one with vultures
and maggots

i dig inside
for his liver
and his heart
just to tear it apart

only from my grasp
you can scream
or its to the butcher shop
and im am king

strapping the dead
to a table
slitting their bodies
mutilation trio

us three kill
as we do will
when there is noone left
we go at eachother
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Old 2005-04-14, 19:29
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Nice.....however I want to see all of that on film!

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Old 2005-04-15, 08:02
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No offense, but after I read so many of these they just get funny after awhile. I'm going to have to try writing one. lol
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Old 2005-04-15, 11:49
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No offense, but after I read so many of these they just get funny after awhile. I'm going to have to try writing one. lol


That's because most of these guys prefer Cannibal Corpse style gore over Carcass style gore. Cannibal Corpse style becomes unintentionally funny through it's complete and utter inanity and repetition, whereas Carcass style intends to be tongue-in-cheek and is usually quite funny. Read the lyrics to a song like Inpropagation or Carneous Cacophony by Carcass, they are hilarious.
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Old 2005-04-15, 12:10
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I think that this guy, his first language is not english... hahaha.
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Old 2005-04-15, 19:26
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Part of its charm is how humerous it is. Carcass is funnier though, because they just strung together various medical terms. But gore lyrics in general are tedious after a while.
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Old 2005-04-15, 19:35
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