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Old 2005-03-12, 11:14
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Gun Drunk

Another round
A shell barrage
He yelled "Get out tha way!"
A stack of bodies
On the ground
A pretty violent day

<Chorus>
He told 'em once
He told em twice
To leave him be or die
The guy was drunk on shotgun fire
A buckshot rampage high

The man was deadset
Who knows why
Ammo hoarding fiend
Took the world on
Almost won
Till the Swat team made him bleed

XchorusX

He staggered back
A bit perplexed
Bullets striking as he fell
The end then came
He didn't care
He knew he'd end up back in hell

XChorusX x 2
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Old 2005-03-13, 12:04
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Very quick paced. I got a lot of colorful distorted echoes of rarr's behind the ends of some of the lines and a lot of trebley shrill, high end guitar. Pretty cool stuff. Good balance of thoughts, too.
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Old 2005-03-13, 17:47
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Thanks. I actually thought it was a bit thrown together. I may be posting some recorded stuff soon. I tend to have some songs with lyrics, and some songs instrumental with spoken intros.
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Old 2005-03-14, 00:13
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I liked this, it was peiced togeather well. It has a nice flow to it as well. I can imagine it chanted by a bunch of drunk people, like a slow drinking song (though im sure that probably wasn't your intention) or somebody reading poetry (but with drunk people and chanting)
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Old 2005-03-14, 09:54
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I liked this, it was peiced togeather well. It has a nice flow to it as well. I can imagine it chanted by a bunch of drunk people, like a slow drinking song (though im sure that probably wasn't your intention)



Actually it was. I happened to be listening to Flogging Molly and Black Dahlia Murder at the time, and the combination was a kind of death metal drinking song. Thanks!
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Old 2005-03-16, 23:06
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Well, now that you say that I suppose Shane McGowan could do it.
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