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Old 2005-02-21, 02:35
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ahhh....here we go.

Hmmm, my first real poem in like...months.

Sink into the Darkness

Time is healed as the sun kisses the Earth
Below the sky where the darkness begins
Fading the frivolous light into a shirne
Made fresh when the evening cloaks rise

In the darkness a new world fogs above
Black against the moonlite winteresque
A dagger in the sky about the wind
Slowly rising beyond the canopy of trees

I can feel the triumph of darkness
As it surrounds my body with intensity
Breeding itself within my hate
Ever so slightly caressing my actions

Here, time is still, a becon to the void
An expression of dreams and I breathe
And sigh with a theme of great blindness
Languished and sustained into an abyss

Taking the first dive into my darkest place
The most dreary cave of my insanity
Black, but dimly shaded with a bleary red
Opened wide the gates, I plunged in...
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Old 2005-02-21, 13:48
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You know what the coolest thing was about reading this? Hearing SpongeBob da-da-ing the Blue Danube Waltz while I was reading it.

Lots of imagery as usual. You did have a typo with 'beacon,' but I know that was accidental. I liked the element of madness and this was much better than that one piece you did as far as content and style.

Nice job. Is it a band piece?
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Old 2005-02-21, 22:03
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.....hmmm it definately could be....
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