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Old 2005-02-02, 16:17
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"Blankly Staring"

Writer's block anyone?

"Blankly Staring"

Blankly staring at bare pages.
Well-worn paths that have been traveled before
Beaten down into trenches of cliche thoughts
Ground under the heels of sameness like a cigarette butt.
How do you look into their eyes
Knowing that it's just not the same as it was?
How do you hide pain you feel in your heart?
Is it worth blaming on anyone?
Shadowed mysteries hidden behind words.
Ideas form and dissolve unnoticed
And unwritten.

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Old 2005-02-02, 20:10
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Old 2005-02-03, 09:33
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umm.....thanks?
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2005-02-03, 10:55
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I like it.

that one sentance ' beaten down into trenches of cliche thoughts ' is great
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Old 2005-02-03, 14:27
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umm.....thanks?


I just didn't really have anything to say about it that the smiley couldn't already convey for me. I like it, but didn't feel the need to comment other than to smile at you.
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Old 2005-02-03, 15:22
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pretty good. its very depressing. i liked the line "Ground under the heels of sameness like a cigarette butt." good imagery.
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Old 2005-02-03, 17:45
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Thanks everyone. It is pretty depressing when you're used to pouring so many pieces and then you hit up against a wall and nothing sounds right if you get an idea at all.

You, too, Chris. i kinda thought that's what you meant but I had to mess with you.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2005-02-04, 01:59
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good work bobbi! quite depressing but good stuff.
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Old 2005-02-04, 11:19
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The first time I read it I had nothing to say, but now can say I like it too. heh, it reminds me of a feeling like, "psh. fuck it, I'll just die;" it's one of the feelings I am really fond of-the others are hate and terror.
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Old 2005-02-04, 11:35
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The first time I read it I had nothing to say, but now can say I like it too. heh, it reminds me of a feeling like, "psh. fuck it, I'll just die;" it's one of the feelings I am really fond of-the others are hate and terror.


Terror is so overrrrrated. Indifference, on the other hand, absolutely rocks my socks.
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Old 2005-02-04, 12:41
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Sometimes the terror on here makes me giggle though. At least I haven't seen any sacrificed virgins lately. Maybe at chitchat but not here.

And thanks for the comments.
chris, stop changing your avatar picture! You're making me dizzy.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2005-02-04, 13:05
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Terror is so overrrrrated. Indifference, on the other hand, absolutely rocks my socks.

Yeah, but I'm not going to wear corpse paint.
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Old 2005-02-04, 19:58
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Yeah, but I'm not going to wear corpse paint.


You're so radical, powers'.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2005-02-05, 08:33
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Sometimes the terror on here makes me giggle though. At least I haven't seen any sacrificed virgins lately. Maybe at chitchat but not here.

And thanks for the comments.
chris, stop changing your avatar picture! You're making me dizzy.


I have to, though. It's the only way I can get in all my favorite Pats anytime close to the Superbowl. As it is already, they're going to have to stay up at least two weeks afterward, which is going to suck if they lose. Don't fret, deary. By March it'll almost be spring training and I'll go back to my Sox avatars... I can leave those up much longer.
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