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Old 2004-12-12, 05:11
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Crimson Kiss

this is something i came across when i was backing up the HD for a reinstall. it was to my girlfriend and frankly sounds like i listen to too much type o, but i still like it ...

i remember your thighs, as soft as silk
your flawless skin, the color of milk
your molten hair, dark fiery mane
your pouting lips, with crimson stained

where you touched, my skin still burns
darkness in me, for you it yearns
your passionate touch, your bloodied kiss
we melt into one, erotic bliss

i caress your skin softly with my lips
feather light kisses and soft playful nips
two creatures of darkness bleed into one
candlelight ecstacy, we burn like the sun
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Black Sabbath are so good, so I wouldnt say anything to disrespect them.
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Rest in Peace Dime, thank you for changing my world on vulgar display of power, thank you for being my next step after sabbath, and thank you for inspiring me to pick up that guitar and learn some heavy fucking metal \m/ your memory will live on forever
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Old 2004-12-12, 07:18
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woa, thats some wicked shit you got there.. reminds me of my ex-girlfriend. It's pretty cool Have you written any muic to match it yet..? if not, are you going to do it..? would love to hear the outcome..
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Old 2004-12-12, 08:04
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thanks man, i've got alot of praise from my writing, but this crowd is brutal so i keep it to myself alot. anyway i'd love to work some kind of type o neg, poisonblack type stuff to it, but with my band working away on an album and not really doing anything that fits i haven't had time to lay something down to it, i think now that you mentioned it though i might start some work on it, maybe make it a bside with the group or something. i'll post if i work something out
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Black Sabbath are so good, so I wouldnt say anything to disrespect them.
Cunt face.


Rest in Peace Dime, thank you for changing my world on vulgar display of power, thank you for being my next step after sabbath, and thank you for inspiring me to pick up that guitar and learn some heavy fucking metal \m/ your memory will live on forever
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Old 2004-12-12, 09:11
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sounds awesome.. hehe yeah, you better watch out what you post here.. we can't have you beeing marked as the boards sissy.. i also mostly listens to brutal shit like dying fetus, cuntrginder, and disgorge and stuff.. but hey, big tuff viking stereotypes have feelings to you know..

Anyways it would be a pleasure to check it out for you when you smack something together, let me know :]
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Old 2004-12-14, 19:39
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Pale woman eh? Good work though.
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Old 2004-12-14, 21:26
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We're brutal ???????? Brutal????? That's a laugh! Don't be afraid to post here. Heck, I've posted some real winners here in my day! (--whispers--)They forget fast around here.

But anyways, I liked this. It was well -worded and balanced and not smutty, but it had that sensuos aura to it. That was cool. It would be a heck of alot better if it was about a guy though since I'm a female.
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Old 2004-12-14, 22:06
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very type o negative-esque, but who ever said that was a bad thing.
i liked it, i give it two thumbs up
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Old 2004-12-15, 00:24
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We're brutal ???????? Brutal????? That's a laugh! Don't be afraid to post here. Heck, I've posted some real winners here in my day! (--whispers--)They forget fast around here.

But anyways, I liked this. It was well -worded and balanced and not smutty, but it had that sensuos aura to it. That was cool. It would be a heck of alot better if it was about a guy though since I'm a female.


hehe sorry i find it hard to write about guys
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Originally Posted by Righteous_Death
Black Sabbath are so good, so I wouldnt say anything to disrespect them.
Cunt face.


Rest in Peace Dime, thank you for changing my world on vulgar display of power, thank you for being my next step after sabbath, and thank you for inspiring me to pick up that guitar and learn some heavy fucking metal \m/ your memory will live on forever

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