Wow that song voluntary extinction is pretty damn good Innards-Decay. Im still listening to thrach

I was going for a more suffocation type sound on voluntary... thrach is just a gorgasm rip off.

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Those are good, now all they need are some real instruments. That would sound cool. Those must have taken you a while to make.

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both took about 6 hours, give or take.

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Here's some of my music I did while on the look out for a band. The drums are programmed.
The newest song I did is Mantissa and the oldest is Slaying of Angels.
I have Powertabs for all of them if anyone is really interested.
Mantissa had some crazy time signatures which I threw last minute (13/8 and 7/4 for the 2nd clean riff).
Let me know what you guys think.

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Wow! Stachio! I ENJOYED listening to those. Those are some of the first songs posted that I've wanted to keep in my i-Tunes. Nice work. Sounds very professional, have you burned them to CD's yet?

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wow very nice!i too am keeping them in itunes

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Thanks man. That means a bunch.
I burned them on CD to give them to a couple of bands (Black Dahlia Murder, and Cannibal Corpse, I think). If you guys want some higher quality ones, I can e-mail them. The ones on Soundclick aren't encoded at as high a bit rate.
I also have lyrics for Dim Eyes of Dmitri. I may record the vocals, but if I could find a singer who could hit highs and lows like Corpsegrinder or something...that would fit much better.
Thanks again guys.
I think I'll put up a Powertab for Mantissa as a teaser

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A couple of tunes available at

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/p...deversmusic.htm

Not really metal though.

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are you padraig from MySongBook? Towers of Power was cool man, although someone ripped your solo off.

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Random stuff.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/b...ydemonmusic.htm

click on 'dante's inferno'

weird stuff. Seems a little to fast to really be melodic or whatever. A lot of it seems like a bunch of sporadic note selection while other stuff is cool as hell...i don't crazy.

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yeah i was just putting random notes in the rhythm part . On the lead part i actually took the time and planned that out.

got you

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Yeah thats me, but when the site got hacked I never got a new password so I cant get into my account anymore. I wouldnt worry bout the solo, most neoclassical stuff sounds simular or the same, I remember someone accusing me of stealing that solo anyway haha.

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It was hard to get these sounds into a powertab, but i think i did good.
This is not a song, but it might be one day.

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Yeah, actually that was me... i mean, look at these two tabs.


The bassatica is the one i thought got ripped off, but i dunno now, theyre the exact same solo sections.

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	BassatanicA - Cliffs Tribute.gp3 (12.4 KB, 205 views)
	Master Competition - Tower of Power.gp3 (48.8 KB, 208 views)

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holy shit I should go see my lawyer right away, that cant be coincidence.

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Yeah, did you release that dude? Unless you copyrighted it, you're fucked.

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This sounds awesome!!

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horrible!! i clicked it away after a few riffs.

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sounds a little fast, not really special! you should add another guitar in the intro, which play an open chord or something, sounds much cooler.

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i'll add some riff tonight, i have complete different guitar style then all of you.

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Here is a riff I made for our band:

Svadilfari_Tab

Forget the drums, cause that's different from real!

Tell me what you think of it!

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About the intro, the note 6, change it to 7, sounds much better!!

though i should change the way you use 0-0-, you should change some to one single 0, which make it sound cooler.

the guitar chords in the center sounds cool!!

I'm bad in improvements of solo's, can't help ya with that.

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yeah its on the firsty Dark Crystal demo, although at only 180bpm. Still entire demo is copyrighted from 2001 so no worries there.

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/b...ydemonmusic.htm

click on dantes inferno (hi-fi)

The quality of the recording or the songwriting itself?
Either way, thanks for the input (no sarcasm).

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Pretty cool man. Kind of reminds me of something I would have done about 15 yrs ago. But you are waaaay more skilled than I was then. How long you been playing?

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I'm only about 1/2 way through the first song. And I have to admit the riffs at the beginning threw me for a loop a little (as I think someone else mentioned), but I listened through 'em and I have to say I'm pretty damn impressed with the song overall so far. Nice work man! Did you join into my contest under Chit Chat forum? If not you should. You could win $100.

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I've been playin for 1 1/2 years but i spent half that time tryin' to find a particular style to stick to. Then i chose thrash, but now i wanna incorporate it with another genre of music, i.e. classic or something like that, just to make it more original.

a new death metal bullshitter i wrote.

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This is Unfinished, and this is the woeking title, off of my head when I saved it. I started working on it abou half an hour ago. Here it is:

haha a song im working on...kinda like opeth i guess

http://www.geocities.com/kalmahswamp/WithVox.wma

here is a melodic song that starts off with a 'solo', just some intro thing, the riffs follow

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nice

Thanks man!!!

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i really like the lead work

new shit im working on, the one riff sounds like slayer

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that was really good, outside of the vocals, take whatever effects you had on them off, they were bad, but the guitar stuff was pretty fuckin killer, id like to hear the vox w/o the effects.

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dude, measure 5 and on sounds like a ripoff from Angel of Death. it is nearly the same, rhythm pattern and notes.

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haha i actually had no effects on them...thats just the result of a crappy mic plugged into a line 6 Pod with no compressor or mixing or anything. Also I over dubbed them to do the higher voices with the growls...I'm definately not a death metal singer

i said it sounded like a slayer riff.

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The Quality of recording is good, the songwriting itself is boring, there is not any catching spirit in the whole song, if ya can write/play all these chords and notes, I think you are able to write more catching songs...

I've told some good guitar guitarplayers to listen to your song, they all said it sounded boring... Not that I'm good, but you should focus on better performed songs... I think you have it in you.

cheers

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new thing im working on, is gonna be kinda opeth like, prog death metal and such

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aw man...thats some badass shit...the only thing i'd change is to get rid of that riff that sounds like raining blood

Make sure you post the finished copy when you get there

i didnt even notice that until you said that, it does sound like raining blood, i wrote the riff whilst watching the opeth DVD, lol

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/b...ydemonmusic.htm

Click on Revelations (hi fi)

It's a mixture between Metallica, Megadeth, Opeth and Sepultura. Please rate. Thanks.

good stuff man...the 2nd riff sounds like the intro to All Painted Cold by October Tide though

yet another death metal ditty i just finished writing, i like it, i could prolly make it a bit more complex, but that will come later

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that intro sounds very boring, and is much too long.

Maybe it's the powertab sound, but it doesn't sound very special to me.

I should play it like this:

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its long because it will play twice just guitar, then drums and bass come in. and not to say your intro doesnt work, its just i like mine, its chromatic, were as yours seems more scalar.

but i did take some of your advice, i revised the intro, added triplet deals in stead of the fourth hammer-ons. sounds a bit better i think

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good stuff.

thank ya

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ONCE AGAIN, GOOD JOB SIR!!!

That was, excellent.

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Some weird instrumental i made..

really cool, it has potential to be awesome, i would change the Gm to a major chord, and on the little part after the minor chords, the suspended ones, i would change xxx422 to xxx432, make it minor, change things around a bit, so it doesnt sound like you are just moving the same shape up and down the fretboard, the lead is really cool.

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Thanks for the feedback.

A song I recorded yesterday : http://www.bandlookup.com/post/artist.php?aid=2027 (and then just click on the song "Carve and masticate"). It was recorded without an amp (the guitar was plugged directly into the 8 tracks and I used the onboard effect processor, which explains why it sounds that bad.) I know the guitars and bass aren't always tight, but I'm trying to get better at the guitar these days.
This band is not a "real" band, in fact it's just me and my mate (he'll do the vocals on the next songs, on this particular track I did them, I know it sounds like shit). We're just having fun recording songs that we know will never be played live. Hope you enjoy.

sounds awesome!! though the solo riff I should change...

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Hmm...
Greinilega byrjandi á gítar ha?
Haltu áfram og þetta kemur allt.

On English:
Obviously a beginner huh?..
Keep playing and you will get good.

Moin,

Here is some kind of Black Metal song I started many years ago, but never finished it...

Listen to it please, and tell me if I should finish it...

thanks.. and by the way, this is a guitar pro tab

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Hiatus.gp4 (8.3 KB, 444 views)

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holy crap another icelandic dude? where on Iceland do you live?

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yet another death metal tune im working on, as of right now im done, ill eventually add a lead in there somewhere, during the fourth riff, with the PM'ed open power chords.

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WOOHOO!!!!!

I enjoyed this one very much as well. I liked the vibe it gave off more than the others. When will he stop??

Seriously, good shit.

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a revised version of 4, the only orginal riff being the first.

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great song, but i dont think the palm muted A in the first riff fits very well... maybe its different when played, but it just doesnt seem to flow

I really like this one

Hey guys... Rather than re-writing a bunch of riffs... let me just offer a link to a page where you can check 'em out.

www.gutiarjams.net (click on the FREE LESSONS LINK on that page)


Happy practicing!
guitarjams

I made a new intro, and have put in .midi file...

have fun listening...

http://www.wietsma.demon.nl/Svadilf...ummer4_2005.mid

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that was pretty cool, definitely vikingish.

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here is a new tune i just finished, different then anything else i have written thus far, lots of time changes, as well as it being in drop-d.

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Hmmmm, definetly different. I LOVED the time sigs and the new sound! But, not as much as the others.

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Song. Unfinished. Death metal.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/b...ydemonmusic.htm

Click on 'Reveleations'

I posted this before, but i've modified it slightly.

The sound is crap i know

NARSIL

track 2 & 3 are up there...download now !!!

p.s: the link is the same as in my signature

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Good stuff, it's not my style, the quality sounds good!

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Sounds awesome, Corroded

thanks infinity and darkenelf for checking out the stuff

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no problem, keep up the good work

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i listened to track four, it was pretty cool.

BTW, i like your sig.

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Hi, will someody listen to my song? I'd like to know wot u think (post 176)

EDIT: corroded, i listened to no4 as well and that was fantabulicious.

doesnt work for me, tr uploading the mp3 somewhere else

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try again it should work now

haha not posted there yet

btw track 4 needs a lot of mending to do...listen to 2 & 3 cuz those are pretty much final (without vocals ofcourse, yet to record them).

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its a major work in progress, to be honest its the first song ive ever sat down and wrote and actually put together and then recorded.

Constructive Comments/Critisizm is what im lookin for, also how do you like the sound? sound as in the EQ and what not...and amp settings.

Raithe
PS-this name was just pulled out of my ass, i will probably change it.

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here's a song a wrote a while ago. I never got to finish it.My style is a little different now but i dug up this old song and thought "hey this isn't so bad". let me know what you all think

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thats very badass, how long you been writing?

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I've been playing guitar for almost 4 years and I've been trying to write stuff since the day I started. Though through the years, i've never written anything i've actually liked. I always tell myself "i can do better than that" and am never happy with anything. Thanks for the feedback though. Maybe i'll get around to finishing that one up.

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bleh no one has commented on my rookie work yet.

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wrote this song a while ago. first thing i did when i downloaded PT.

the end is pretty shit but....meh....infact the whole tab is.....woop.

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You had some really good riffs in there. I am always impressed by your handle on multi-layered riffs, something I've always accidently neglected in my own music. I do think that maybe a little too much of the song was rooted in open E, but that has more to do with my own obsessions than any shortcomings of your own. The influence certain melodic death and 'power metal' bands have had on you is very obvious throughout the song, and that is not to be read as negative criticism, because it's neither negative nor positive, just an observation. Let me know when you finish the ending. I'm going to tweak a couple of the riffs and send it back just so you can get an idea of what minor changes I would make. Barring the ending, which does need to be augmented and amended, this is a B+ song. My tweaking is not meant to better the song, rather, just a personal thing to show you how it would sound if my influence were projected on it.

Also, I have two questions-
1. Are you still obsessed with Quo Vadis?
2. Why the fuck did you name the song after yourself? I have never named a song Chris. Just wondering.

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Quo Vadis is great, but I don't really listen to them much anymore. They released a new CD though and i should really get around to checking it out. I just named the file after me becuase it's probably the first thing that came to mind. I wrote it quite a few months ago when i was listening to a lot of Testament, and i think that influence shows somewhat in there. My style is a little more thrashy these days, but I wouldn't mind playing a song like that. I think I will get around to finishing it soon, since i've seen some positive feedback. Like i said, i always think everything i write sucks, so i never really finish anything. I'm looking forward to seeing your tweaking.

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Heres something Ive been working on..

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In the vein of At the Gates, and i like At The Gates a lot, so i give it a thumbs up so far

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There are some pretty cool parts to it man. Measures 23-24 are really cool. I dunno what's with the cracked-out ending though. haha

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This is the intro and verse riff to a song my band mates and I have been working on. Not too much as of yet, but does sound better in the practice room.

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aaah dude, that's fuckin' cool. Needs more though! I demand more!



hehe, cheers dude. Wrote that a long time ago, couldn't remember the ending..so i just put some stupid little shitty thing to it.

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hhmmz, latest song....

me and my bands other guitarist finished it last week...after a month like.

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