Join Date: Jul 2004
alright, im not a lyric writer or nothin, i dont even sing, but i just made up some shit last night and i wanted to know ur opinions on it.
Cold crimson eyes,
that shattered through the night,
death is in the air,
everytime u lied,
is everytime i died
dont u fucking care,
everybody told u death is horrid,
but they all lied
its not... a curse
its just pain with pleasure
all hail thee mighty death
the one who frees our soul,
please help me one last time,
i just have to go
tragedy and despair surrounds us,
but now its time to rise above,
darkness covers the old(once) blue sky,
bringing together our darkest fears(killing all our precious love)
thats all i have right now, the stuff in parenthesis are the other choices i thought of, and i dont know wut would be better.
so ne constructive criticism would be good, and thanks.
scream when u feel the pain. i probly wont stop.