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Old 2004-09-08, 10:52
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"Brain Ache"

The verses are slower yet edgy and the choruses I hear a lot of crash. The outro is heavy and has trailing arpeggio at the end. Comments and reads appreciated.

"Brain Ache"

Receptors in my head
Scream as they pulse through
Eyes unfocused
I don't feel there's a cure
No, cure at all for the way I feel

(chorus)
Take away the pressure
Tale away the pain
Take away the sickness
And let me live again

Somewhere there's someone with elixirs
That will melt the elastic that surrounds me
I can not see it in the distance
It's nowhere in sight

(chorus)
Take away the pressure
Tale away the pain
Take away the sickness
And let me live again

(outro)
Let me live again
Live again
Live again
Let me live again
Oh yeah

BJH
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Old 2004-09-16, 01:48
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yeah, sounds like nu metal , like linkin park. imo
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Old 2004-09-16, 19:45
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Morbid+Roach
Hey "severed head stoner"! You remind me of the dough boy! If I poke your stomach will you go "oohoohoohoohoohoo!"

You also remind me of this guy... dumbass...

Oh, by the way, these lyrics suck like a vacuum stuck up your mom's loose #####...


Ok roach you just went on my 'Gay faggot cunts' list.
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Old 2004-09-18, 00:05
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Old 2004-09-19, 03:56
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Eh, Linkin Park? Oh well, try again.

You guys want to bicker take to Chit Chat or pm each other. You're wasting my time when I could be reading all my reviews !!
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Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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