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Old 2004-08-02, 13:10
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Necrosis is developing in the stomach and soon the festering infestation shall spread through the body like cancer. What is left is nothing but putrid, fetid carrion on the ground which recycles through the rot of this toilet earth.

The carrion shall be consumed by the intoxicating overpowering forces of Mother Nature. In this weakened state the corpse shall be re-received as a mound of malformed flesh and undecayable bones.

The necropolis where the body was laden shall be resurrected by a necromancer to be performed in the dark arts of necrolatry. The now undead corpse will plunder the world with lurid, grotesque, perverted attacks on all human life.


Freeverse I wrote for a class in school oneday...I like it a lot. I wanted to use words with Necro- in it a lot.. Read it fast enough and continuous and it sounds real sweet. Enjoy...
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Old 2004-08-09, 16:58
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BRUTALLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!! its like a precurser or omen to a zombie attack..
The imagery and explanation of the end, was BAD ASS..Gross, putrid, Vile
It kinda makes want to puke..i like it..And also i have never heard some one use Necro in so many ways before..Bad ass...



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Old 2004-08-09, 17:08
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yeah i got like an A on the poem haha teacher didn't care she liked to too...necro- prefix is such a great one...ummm yeah haha
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Old 2004-08-09, 17:51
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Nice, Was this for like a college class? or high school? It is a fine peice of brutal, Literary art
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high school lol junior year...
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