MetalTabs.com - your source for Metal tabs
Home Forum What's New Submit a Tab FAQ Links Contact Us Link to Us


Go Back   MetalTabs.com Forum > Metal > Poetry Lyrical
User Name
Password


Reply
 
Thread Tools
  #1  
Old 2004-06-22, 02:00
bloodjunky665 bloodjunky665 is offline
New Blood
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Posts: 7
Angry Kill The Kids At School

Lying, dying from within
Life can be so cruel
The only thing I wanna do
Is kill the kids at school
Take a knife and stick it in
Needles in the eyes
Brand them with an iron rod
Listen to their cries

Nothing can be done now
Their brains are on the floor
The little voice inside my head
Is begging me for more...

Bloody treats, tasting sweet
Licking up the juice
Tongue is trailing to the corpse
Flesh is coming loose
Face falls further deep within
Ripping out the meat
Deep inside the ribcage now
Clawing at the feet

Nothing can be done now
Their brains are on the floor
The little voice inside my head
Is begging me for more

Blood spilling, killing kids
Never wanna stop
Feisty bitches good to eat
Entrails on the top
Don't know why they hated me
They thought that they were cool
Now it doesn't matter
Coz I killed the kids at school

Nothing can be done now
Their brains are on the floor
The little voice inside my head
Is satisfied once more

-------------
Its sortof funny, i spose. Well it is to me anyway. There are so many people at my school who I want to do this to... I wrote this about half a year ago whilst wagging in an abandoned building after putting up with a shitload of crap from a bunch of kids at school. I was trying not to do anything or else I would have grabbed something and stabbed them with it.
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 2004-06-22, 06:03
BLS's Avatar
BLS BLS is offline
STUFFED ANIMAL ORGY
 
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Chicago
Posts: 8,705
Send a message via ICQ to BLS Send a message via AIM to BLS Send a message via Yahoo to BLS
Go cut yourself while listening to marilyn manson. Loser
__________________
"Believe the word
I will unlock my door
And pass the cemetery gates"

"Dimebag" Darrell Lance Abbott
08/20/66 - 12/08/04

R.I.P.
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 2004-06-22, 06:43
Agent-Orange's Avatar
Agent-Orange Agent-Orange is offline
Post-whore
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Australia
Posts: 1,226
I see a lawsuit coming up for you.
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 2004-06-22, 09:45
dying-oath dying-oath is offline
Senior Metalhead
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Jax FL, previously lived in Naples Italy
Posts: 253
you're gonna get screwed by some lawyer
but i like the piece
__________________
Crying from the womb, I知 hating you
Burning from the pain, I chase after you,
Seething from the fake, I知 catching you,
Chasing after ghosts, I知 killing you.
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 2004-06-22, 10:04
L,B'XXX's Avatar
L,B'XXX L,B'XXX is offline
dsnt trust ne1 < 30
 
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,880
Send a message via ICQ to L,B'XXX Send a message via AIM to L,B'XXX Send a message via Yahoo to L,B'XXX
Due to the tortuous nature I'm not surprized that d_o liked it. I thought it was rather tasty ,too. Not quite serious mind you ,but sort of says what it needs to. Hey, when they're pointing fingers at you they point more at themselves. Don't let it get to ya. After graduation none of them matter anyways.
It had a good flow to it and was pretty smooth. The entrails line was the only one I thought could be a little better worded so that's minor.
Hey, just don't go snakeshit for real.
__________________
My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 2004-06-22, 10:35
Transient's Avatar
Transient Transient is offline
HES BAAACK
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: slaying all the giants
Posts: 9,967
hahahahahaha if someone find this youll seriously go to jail
__________________
www.myspace.com/crownedmusic
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j136/transient_shirts/Banner.gif
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 2004-06-22, 13:16
dying-oath dying-oath is offline
Senior Metalhead
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Jax FL, previously lived in Naples Italy
Posts: 253
no, i doubt that. Transient, if that was true, i would be in jail so much. i mean, just go look at "The Torture Chamber" that would get me busted.
Gram, i know, what's becoming of the new generation? we're all so focused on killing
; )
__________________
Crying from the womb, I知 hating you
Burning from the pain, I chase after you,
Seething from the fake, I知 catching you,
Chasing after ghosts, I知 killing you.
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 2004-06-22, 14:45
ShredIsNotDead ShredIsNotDead is offline
Post-whore
 
Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 1,487
fuck man good poem, sometimes i feel like that...i would just never ever do it. Hopefully you wouldnt either. Good poem tho

And shut up about lawyers and shit
Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 2004-06-22, 15:50
Corpsevomit98's Avatar
Corpsevomit98 Corpsevomit98 is offline
Post-whore
 
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: In the midst of the unholy
Posts: 1,293
Send a message via AIM to Corpsevomit98
Quote:
Originally Posted by Transient
hahahahahaha if someone find this youll seriously go to jail

If he lives in America yes the big bad stupid pieces of shit FBI will be on you i think.
__________________
If im not back in 15 minutes...
Wait longer
Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old 2004-06-22, 16:33
Trendkill_420's Avatar
Trendkill_420 Trendkill_420 is offline
Post-whore
 
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: canada eh
Posts: 1,257
better venting it through writing, than acting upon it.

I used to feel similiar to you when i was in school. Not to such an extreme, but i deeply despised most people in my school. And to boot, it was during the columbine fiasco. A girl actually came up to me once and said "if you start to kill people, can you spare me". I was fucking flabergasted, so of course i said, "you're first you ignorant bitch".....
what a world.
__________________
Imagine there's no countries,
It isnt hard to do,
Nothing to kill or die for,
No religion too,
Imagine all the people
living life in peace...
Reply With Quote
  #11  
Old 2004-06-22, 16:42
ShredIsNotDead ShredIsNotDead is offline
Post-whore
 
Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 1,487
Quote:
Originally Posted by Trendkill_420
better venting it through writing, than acting upon it.

I used to feel similiar to you when i was in school. Not to such an extreme, but i deeply despised most people in my school. And to boot, it was during the columbine fiasco. A girl actually came up to me once and said "if you start to kill people, can you spare me". I was fucking flabergasted, so of course i said, "you're first you ignorant bitch".....
what a world.


haha you must be a real loser
Reply With Quote
  #12  
Old 2004-06-22, 17:07
FearFrost's Avatar
FearFrost FearFrost is offline
The Mountie From Hell
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Halifax N.S. Canada
Posts: 3,016
Send a message via MSN to FearFrost
Nah, hes from PEI, you would go crazy just being on the island for more then 20 mins... I did.
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Timedragon
i clicked on time... cause im timedragon
Reply With Quote
  #13  
Old 2004-06-22, 20:56
dying-oath dying-oath is offline
Senior Metalhead
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Jax FL, previously lived in Naples Italy
Posts: 253
PEI? what, some secret gang association where you live on an island or something?
where's this fabled island? i think i would go crazy, if not surrounded by...............oh shit, wrong forum for that stuff
__________________
Crying from the womb, I知 hating you
Burning from the pain, I chase after you,
Seething from the fake, I知 catching you,
Chasing after ghosts, I知 killing you.
Reply With Quote
  #14  
Old 2004-06-22, 21:18
FearFrost's Avatar
FearFrost FearFrost is offline
The Mountie From Hell
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Halifax N.S. Canada
Posts: 3,016
Send a message via MSN to FearFrost
Prince Edward Island = PEI (and yes its a provence)

Its a small island off the coast of New Brunswick/Nova Scotia... Its part of canada.
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Timedragon
i clicked on time... cause im timedragon
Reply With Quote
  #15  
Old 2004-06-23, 14:18
Transient's Avatar
Transient Transient is offline
HES BAAACK
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: slaying all the giants
Posts: 9,967
yes, fbi and cops and all that

at the least youd need to see a therapist
__________________
www.myspace.com/crownedmusic
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j136/transient_shirts/Banner.gif
Reply With Quote
  #16  
Old 2004-06-23, 15:32
Corpsevomit98's Avatar
Corpsevomit98 Corpsevomit98 is offline
Post-whore
 
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: In the midst of the unholy
Posts: 1,293
Send a message via AIM to Corpsevomit98
No, due to the columbine shit they take it way too seriously, I suppose they should, but they are still gay.
__________________
If im not back in 15 minutes...
Wait longer
Reply With Quote
  #17  
Old 2004-06-23, 16:08
Trendkill_420's Avatar
Trendkill_420 Trendkill_420 is offline
Post-whore
 
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: canada eh
Posts: 1,257
Quote:
Originally Posted by ShredIsNotDead
haha you must be a real loser


If having long hair and listening to heavy metal, made me a loser, i guess i was.

Dick wad
__________________
Imagine there's no countries,
It isnt hard to do,
Nothing to kill or die for,
No religion too,
Imagine all the people
living life in peace...
Reply With Quote
  #18  
Old 2004-06-23, 19:16
Transient's Avatar
Transient Transient is offline
HES BAAACK
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: slaying all the giants
Posts: 9,967
absolutely, those asshats at columbine changed EVERYTHING
__________________
www.myspace.com/crownedmusic
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j136/transient_shirts/Banner.gif
Reply With Quote
  #19  
Old 2004-06-23, 19:26
L,B'XXX's Avatar
L,B'XXX L,B'XXX is offline
dsnt trust ne1 < 30
 
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,880
Send a message via ICQ to L,B'XXX Send a message via AIM to L,B'XXX Send a message via Yahoo to L,B'XXX
Hey ! That means I'm a loser too! We can all be losers together! Only thing is I can't sit on my long, blonde hair almost anymore. I got this new little Scorpion vaccuum cleaner and had my braid hanging down and it kinda got sucked against the motor housing and YANK ! I think I got a trim ? (Hmm, did I say I was blonde?)

Isn't that what started the whole Columbine thig anyway? Kids calling other kids losers basically? I've been called an airhead, a blonde, a freak, a hippie, a geek,a french person and mom so tell me that isn't abuse? And I've survived.

It's ridiculous the kind of world in which we live, but each generation has said that, too. It used to be if kids said "I'm gonna kill you!" it meant you were gonna beat them up or seek some type of mild revenge on them , but now it's a verbal assault that has to be documented and all that crap. You just have to be descreet about who you say what to. I don't take poetry or lyrics about things like that real seriously. Maybe I should. The ones in which someone seems truely suicidal I have more caution with because the tone just seems a cry at times. No one should ever feel that way.

I do sometimes wonder if songs and stuff gets anyone's attention.

Heck, when Bob was in elementary school they made a list of kids in their class. The parents got called in for a special meeting before they even asked any of these kids what the list was for. It was for a baseball game they were planning. People had taken time from work and gotten babysitters and all for that. It was ridiculous.
__________________
My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
Reply With Quote
  #20  
Old 2004-06-24, 10:49
Soulinsane's Avatar
Soulinsane Soulinsane is offline
Pirate Lawd
 
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Hanger 18
Posts: 6,520
KILL KILL KILL
__________________
Authorized Mercury Magnetics tech/dealer
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -5. The time now is 13:11.


========

Contact Us | Privacy Policy | Disclaimer
Copyright © 2001-2009 MetalTabs.com. All Rights Reserved.
Powered by vBulletin
Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.