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Old 2004-06-21, 10:01
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" Lessons in My Garden "

Just wandering through my yard mentally. I thought someone might like the stroll. Thanks for reading. DEFINITELY NOT A METAL SONG !!! I'll try to get something written more to the forum's nature next time.

On another note, I gave Walpurgis(Bob) a book of a bunch of my different pieces. Maybe sometime he might read a few and comment about them or use a lyric. Maybe not.

" Lessons in My Garden "

Little faces among the flowers
A carefree breeze in my hair
A pull to a weed what's overpowering
A delicate, hidden bloom-
Old fashioned bleeding hearts

If I could thin out what's important and what isn't in life
And do some transplanting of things overpowering
To nurture them in a growing bed
Where thay can later be brought more into sight
To show off their beauty it would make me content

The pale, Cecil Brunner rose that one day couldn't contain itself any longer
And shot out arms into the air growing
A wild, red rambler that grew from it's rootstock
Bursting with red blossoms for many years
The demure pink tearose but a graft

The Tropicana vibrant orange as the summer sunset
And the white rose, beautiful, though it's name is forgotten
Like faces that appear in memories
But time has erased their names, too
At times it doesn't seem fair

A hundred year old maple sadly cut to the ground
Gives light to a peony that has grown
But never bloomed it's deep red flowers for so long
I never knew the color of the plant
The old tree's death brought more life

A patch of Sweet Williams, burgundy trimmed in white,
Springs as a surprise from where the old tree's roots
Must have hidden them
Maybe they grew there when the tree was young
And my grandmother played there

And now I have a challenge of a grapevine to contend with
Cut to the brink last year and now bigger and better than before
It's taken over the inside and outside of my barn
Growing through a gap in the window
I suppose it could be a new approach to picking wild grapes

But I'll don my long gloves
And prune the hell out of it
Since it's choking my daffoldils, peppermint, and peonies
Fruitless by the barn
More drastic measure in the works, erradication

Oh, the work involved in maintaining the plants
But the joy of seeing a tiny pink starry in the green
Or the prick of a prickly pears thorn
The soft velvet of lady's mantle
And the various fragances that bring memories

A cutting of chives onion smell
Their round lavender heads on poker straight stems
A hummingbird moth tasting bee balm beside the bird
A toad wandering through the maze of crown vetch
And worms galor invigorating the earth below

Wild ones in back producing lucious blackberries
And wild roses climbing a tree
Tearing at flesh , but lovely in smell
Joe Pye Weed and New England Aster's nodding tall
And the fruit trees' blossoms clear against bird planted pines

Never boredom in a garden
The lessons pondered,of love, the loss of life,
The rebirth of new life or invigoration of the old
All taught from those chosen and those volunteers growing
In the gardens of myself and my Creator

BJH
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Old 2004-06-21, 10:17
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that's fun. thanks for the walk
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Old 2004-06-21, 17:33
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haha.
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Old 2004-06-22, 06:45
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that's fun. thanks for the walk

What he said
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Old 2004-06-22, 09:56
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You're welcome. I just gave a detailed description of the metaphorical aspect of this at my forum. Someone had suggested that I add more life instances since there was only one obvious one there so I showed where I was coming from. But I'm glad you liked it.

powers? What the hell ? I can never quite figure out your maniacal laughter.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-06-24, 20:33
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I wrote a poem, just now, just for you.

Roses, crumbling red and black of dusk
Blue flowers wretch and heave of their height
Candlewaxed eyes of stems gleam with blood
Knives of roots pearcing the earth no more
Now is the time for all foxes to jump over the lazy dog.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


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Old 2004-06-25, 09:15
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yeah, i think that's a little different style than hers. personally, i'd rather walk through her garden.
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Old 2004-06-25, 13:38
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Ya fucked that up by spelling piercing wrong , powers !! Man, it was so cool. I could see the roses dropping crumbled petals. (Mine are doing that now. ) And the colors were cool and then you spelled that wrong and made it all uncool ! Whay did you do that to me ? I thought you cared ?

I just felt like ranting for no good reason. I still love ya. Not as much as some of the guys at chit chat, but I do. Thanks for the little verse. You could have done better than plain ole black, red, and blue though, but that's okay. I do seem to remember that last line in regards to something else. What the heck is it though? That's driving me nuts.

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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-06-25, 16:30
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Wow somone on this forum can acually write

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Old 2004-06-25, 18:21
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-06-25, 21:22
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tyhew reference wass to ""the quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog, like the sentence everyone one iuses when they make a new font, thats whatt the y write to show off the fopnt. yeahhhhh. d_o, I like my gareden bettter, cause it's evil. Fuckin satin ahhhhhhhhh! Im so drunk right no BTW. Ohhhh, I jusyt thought of a rewrite of my earlier poem: see it in onother thread.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


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Old 2004-06-26, 13:35
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Im so drunk right no BTW.


like we couldn't tell.
heh
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Old 2004-06-26, 16:44
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ha! And my mum found out I have a fake id
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


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Old 2004-06-26, 19:03
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... Fuckin satin ahhhhhhhhh! Im so drunk right no BTW. ...


HAHAHA!!!!! All hail satin !!! Cuz he's smoooooth. heehee

Powers' you're gonna shit when you read that typo. You wasted warbler. Thanks for the clarification on that thread.

Fake ID bad.
Made 'is Mom mad.
P'O'T' sad.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-06-28, 08:16
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I love it.
this definitely deserves.................the niceness
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