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Old 2004-05-25, 05:53
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" It Has Not Been Possible To Connect Your Call "

Older piece I thought you might like to read. I think it would be easy to add music to. Thanks for reading.

" It Has Not Been Possible To Connect Your Call "

It has not been possible to connect your call
I hear it time and again.
I hear the voice through the lines
But you aren't at the other end

I sit patiently beside the phone
And wonder if you're alright
I wake up in my bed sometimes
Thoughts of you in the middle of the night

Where are you? Why can't I see
That what you did was put a spell on me?
Why can't I bring light to this life?
Why can't it work out alright?
Alright.
Alright.

It has not been possible to connect your call
I aimlessly wander ,writing invisibly on the wall
Thinking thoughts of you in my own little world
Where you are mine and I'm your girl

It has not been possible to connect your call
It has not been possible to connect your call
No possibility, no chance of sublimity
It has not been possible to connect your call.

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Old 2004-05-25, 15:25
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hmm that reminds me of a song by wierd al yankovitch very good, that could be easily put into a song but im not so sure it would be a metal one
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Old 2004-05-25, 16:57
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no, i'm seeing more of singing all the way through, maybe over hard guitars, but i'm not sure. i'm thinking maybe a dying scream for the repeated alrights during the chorus. that might work. it's nice though. why'd you write it Gram?
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Old 2004-05-25, 17:37
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If you didnt have the line "Where you are mine, and I'm your girl" I would almost think that this is a poem about Walpurgis when he doesnt come home at night. Its original
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Old 2004-05-25, 19:05
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Well, I called a friend quite a few times and kept getting the operator recording. Then I listened to a song "Telephone Line" by ELO that gave me the idea.
That's interesting about the Walpurgis idea. I like hearing other people's views on things and sometimes subtle changes can be made to give an entirely different flavor. I hadn't looked at it that way. There are some give aways that it wasn't about him though like you said.

I like the idea of hard guitars although I was thinking somethinglighter, but it might work withthe right female voice. Maybe ala old Pat Benetar sounding?

Oooo!! I can hardly wait to see Bob next week !!! I miss the brat.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-05-26, 15:03
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qui est Bob?
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Old 2004-05-26, 18:51
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Bob es mi nino loco. He's my baby boy (Walpurgis/Bob). I'll scrounge around and see if I can dig up the threads of when he got his drivers license and the Drunken Yeti song. I did some funny stuff about him when I first came here. A serious piece when he enlisted, but he's a nut like his mom. I hope his schedule lightens up a bit so he can come back and hang out once in awhile again.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-05-26, 19:50
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Dude, French, not spanish. it's the bomb.
Drunken yeti <Laugh> my friend says that when i scream, i sound like a "Freakin' Dying Yeti" yeah, it made me feel really good.
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Old 2004-05-27, 06:25
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I no speekee French. I took 3 or 4 years of Spanish in school but that was donkey's years ago and I don't remember much.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-05-27, 12:03
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well, sucks to be you then. French is way better than spanish, it just sounds cooler. i'm still likin' the piece that started this thread though.
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Old 2004-05-28, 07:33
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Just incase you're interested Bob/Walpurgis added his 2 cents at the metaltabs song thread.... I told him about it.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-05-28, 12:47
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oooo. i need to check that out. bye.
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Old 2004-05-28, 22:51
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better watch out some cell phone company is gonna steal those lyrics and use them in their commercial against some other cell phone companys. Maybe that bitch with the annoying voice and wierd facial expressions will sing it
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Old 2004-05-28, 23:31
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im not so sure it would be a metal one


I don't know! I'm kinda getting this Fear Factory, man against the machine with a soul and a voice that keeps the peeps down, vibe from this song and it's sounding pretty damn heavy in my mind right now. Then again, I'm drinking like the last time I read one of the songs L,B'XXX wrote ( you do write wonderfully ), and d-o really like that one when when I put a metal spin on it.

This song has major multi-meaningful possiblities... Well, at least to me.
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Old 2004-05-29, 14:50
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but, you're drunk, so tomorrow it won't have any meaning 'cause you won't remember that you wrote the above.
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Old 2004-05-29, 15:13
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No, I still hear music for it and see meaning in this song. I was only drinking a little last night. I wasn't bomb ass drunk last night. Drinking that much is crazy. I really like this song
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