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Old 2004-05-05, 11:08
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THE BLOOD SPEAKS

I don't read the bible anymore, but this was an influence somewhere in revelation, I believe. Wrote this one two years ago.

THE BLOOD SPEAKS

Sacrifice, thy saviour is known
In the garden of Gethesmane,
Evil is overthrown.

(Chorus)
Redeemed from curse
The blood speaks now
Redeemed from healing
The flesh is the key
To die from the sword
with blood as the reward

Complete redemption is the key
to one's will
The crown of thorns
blood of the nails
The way of being healed
Say the words "I am well"
Now the blood speaks for itself.

Repeat Chorus

As you die,
The tunnel of destiny awaits
Make the right move,
or forever seal your fate...

Repeat Chorus

End.
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Old 2004-05-05, 12:02
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I like this. Very much like some of Glen Benton's stuff. Not bad!
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Old 2004-05-05, 12:12
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Thanks a lot John. I appreciate that! Hey, I just printed out your Aborted tune. I look forward to testing it out and such. And I will let you know what I think of it as well as rate it.
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Old 2004-05-05, 12:18
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Thanks, man. I've got 90% of track 6 done too, so stay tuned...
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Old 2004-05-05, 12:43
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Not bad. I've seen better from you, but it wasn't awful or anything like that. It was quite New Testament and the message wasn't bad because it just pondered a question and didn't force anything one way or the other.

And that's coming from a Christian point of few, just for the record.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-05-05, 12:51
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Thanks Bobbie, I always look forward to your compliments!.
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Old 2004-05-05, 14:25
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i liked it. you could take it from a Christian perspective, or a non-Christian perspective and it'd still be cool. that takes skill. nice work.
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Old 2004-05-05, 15:25
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thanks dying-oath. That was a cool fuckin' compliment on your behalf. And thats exactly the point I was trying to get out as well.
Thanks again.
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Old 2004-05-06, 07:41
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ERRRRRR !!!!! FIRST I GET CALLED A GUY AND NOW THERE'S AN "E" ON THE END OF MY NAME !!!!! NO "E" !!!!!!!!! B-O-B-B-I !!!!!



heehee, rant over.........

Love, mom
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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Old 2004-05-06, 11:55
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Hey! No hard feelings Bobbi...

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Old 2004-05-06, 16:49
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oh alright then.....
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-05-06, 17:00
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hah. gettin' tired of it yet *Bobbi*? just watch some other punk come on here and insult you agin or something. as i said before...hah.
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Old 2004-05-07, 07:47
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Oh heck, as much as I get insulted at home I'm not too worried about getting it here. I'm the brunt of many a joke--nose jokes, butt jokes, blon-DUH jokes...a lot I make myself. And my kids swear they were adopted just so they aren't related to me.
I just didn't understand why I was an " idiot " this time so I had to find that out. No biggie though. It's all better.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-05-07, 12:53
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Bobbi, who the hell called you an idiot?
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Old 2004-05-07, 15:57
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<sounds of laughter, great guffaws emitting from the very bowels of my being>
that's funny. better tell the story Bobbi...
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Old 2004-05-07, 20:08
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B'W'--(Time to be a beyotch mom type person)----IF you were paying attention and reading the threads like a good little metalhead you'd KNOW !!!

Or just go to search and type in "idiot". It'll probably come up. Now you guys go write some new verses ! Our fearless leader will tell us to get back on topic !!!
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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