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Old 2002-12-06, 16:16
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Even More Retarded Shit from Me!

as always...my titles don't have anything to do with the lyrics, it's freeform wrtiting for Grindcore/Mathy Hardcore, and opinions are more than welcome (most of you know how opinionated I am)

She Was As Integrity Filled As Her Blood Was Carbonated
Starving herself to death, "Just care for me"
She Looks to the TV for Sustinence and Rejuvination

The Last time the Vomit flowed there was a gift of blood
Among the carcasses of dead animals, roasted
Her dignity sat in a pool of bile and flesh
Trying to reach her goals through false means

The Day she won The Pageant
Her Liver Won Failure

If a Xerophyte Can Do It, Why Can't I?
There are daggers in men's smiles
Hiding what they're feeling
Oh well, it's better for them this way
Now I don't know who's throat to slit

The Theatrical Climax Always Occurs In The Third Act
Try, Love, Fail, Wither
Follow my new four step program
To Misery and A Crushed Heart
Even you can do it for just 3 easy payments of $17.99

I Strapped A Bomb To My Chest and Strolled To A Street Brawl
Conflict on the Block
Two opposing Sides, Anyone for a Solution?
I strapped a Bomb To My Chest and Strolled to a Street Brawl
Why can't We All Just Get Along?

Morphine Injections Make The World Go Round
NO! Not Subcutaneous, Nurse!
You slide it here, that's right
It's a Good Thing we Do Here
Giving Patients a Trappdoor Opportuniy
An Exciting drop from reality
I love how this Stuff's Not Addictive
I think...

and if you're wondering...I've been reading MacBeth in class (hence the references to it) and also, I was going to be a Toxicologist but have dropped that dream in hopes of studying Political Science and being a writer. That last one explains the obscure medical terms and my hatred of a good portion of health care....not that anyone cares, heh

Cheers,
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Old 2002-12-07, 23:55
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haha, you made me laugh on a crappy day, thanks man
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Old 2002-12-08, 05:41
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hehe, nice, there's some pretty good stuff between the mess (some stuff isn't that happening)

some stuff reminds me of converge somehow, haha that doesn't make sense
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Old 2002-12-12, 18:03
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Re: Even More Retarded Shit from Me!

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Originally posted by xDarkestHourx

If a Xerophyte Can Do It, Why Can't I?
There are daggers in men's smiles
Hiding what they're feeling
Oh well, it's better for them this way
Now I don't know who's throat to slit



wow, that's really good. i like it a lot.
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Old 2002-12-13, 21:38
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heh, thank you very much for your compliment TRM. I really appreciate it when people make comments (that also means you, Def FX and PowersofTerror). Also, to Def FX, I listen to Converge pretty often so I could see how that vibe could come out in these lyrics

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Old 2002-12-14, 10:50
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either im really baked or....no no im really baked morphene mmmmm
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Old 2002-12-14, 12:56
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what are you on man?

I liked those lyrics, well some of them, but I can feel the converge mood in it somewhere, which is really good!
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Old 2002-12-18, 21:14
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Yeah man those lyrics are pretty good. Keep up the good work.
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twilight casts spells on those who espouse their fate

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tears spout from eyes, shunned from mankind's den
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