"The Dead In The Snow"
**The Snow is getting heavy,
Covering all who has fallen,
On top of the Dead OutWorlders,
and mixing with the human blood,
There skin is starting to Freeze,
and there lips are turning blue,
But there I stand above all thats killed,
all of you, Dead in the Snow,
The battle is over, for all I see,
I have survived, this can not be,
I smell the Dead flowing through the breeze,
The Dead in the Snow, is all I can see.**
Ok, I wrote this today in a local Cafe,
Its not finnished for I only wrote one Stanza and the Chorus..
I just want honest, Opinions,
Tell me what you think of it, and if you think its crap then just tell me..
Im not gonna freek or anything, because this is the first song I wrote..